1st SS-Love doesn't Lessen , Infact it Deepens ch 45 pg 146 note 148

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Hey guys i have been silent reader on india forums since long , since na bole tum days , never wrote anything much apart from an FF in NBT forum😊 but cmng here and reading so many FANFICTIONS, SHORT STORIES AND ONESHOTS by fabulous writers here just kept pushing me more into ishra land😳 and i cud nt help myself from writing dis 1st os of mine. 😊this story has been in my head since long bt was nt confident enough to write it down finally am doing it after a lot of thinking.😕 i know it is no where compared 2 amazing writers on d forum and it may appear irritatingly long or even totally illogical 2 u guys so just forgive me 4 that.😊

phew my writer's rant done and now time 4 d OS so here it goes. 😊

Love doesn't Lessen, in fact it Deepens😉

Premise- In my story , ishita is thoroughly hurt with raman's behavior in adi's custody case and the revealing of his working under ashok khanna has proved 2 be a last nail in the coffin. 😭She fights along with raman 2 get the custody of adi and also 2 save her ruhi and they both manage 2 defeat shagun . Ishita still feels her trust has been broken and she realizes she cannot live with raman now , atleast for sometime 🤢, she just can't so she makes ruhi understand that her ishima has to go somewhere and she doesn't know when she will come back and ruhi shld take care of everybody and especially her papa.😊 Although smarty that ruhi is , she realizes something is badly wrong between her parents but she feels this time she also cannot do much abt it so she lets ishu go as she knows her ishima can't stay away from her and her papa for a long time.😉 Ishita leaves the house in wee hours and writes a note telling everyone to take care and hopefully she will be back someday. 😭Os is set 1 year after ishita as left the house and is living in a different city. On an event she and Raman come face to face and what happens next is something 2 read on for.😉😛

Note- in my story mihir- rinky are not married and rinky is completing her further studies.😃

Raman's Side of Story-all the family members were shocked to see ishita's letter and as for raman Shocked 😲😲😭and Stunned words wud be understatement to describe his feelings , at first he cud nt believe ishita left him , his jkr left him , ishima left ruhi?? But seeing ruhi behave maturely he sensed ruhi did knw abt ishu leaving from before. Then he started hating himself , 😡🤢became guilt ridden and felt he was not worthy of ishita ever but Bala made him realize that he had 2 gain back d trust which he lost wid ishu😊 , that can be done by him doing everything that ishita wud have wanted , she wanted everybody in her family 2 be happy , that's it . This made raman a determined man😊, determined 2 do what his ishita , his jkr , his love wanted from him always . "I will set all this right ishita, I promise and I will bring u back to my life at any cost", 😊those words from her letter, " raman u broke my trust , u broke our promise of sharing everything with each other and so I cannot live like this , atleast for sometime, dnt get me wrong raman , u r my husband, I care for u , I dnt want 2 leave u alone again , I ...I am leaving still."😭😭 That unfinished line, he had 2 complete it , he had 2 hear , "I LOVE U " from her and confess himself too. RKB got down to settling everything in his family. ⭐️He managed 2 get mihika out from ashok's clutches and got mihir- mihika married as the baseline was they loved each other. He got his company back but this time as MD of PSR , board of directors made it possible for him. Romi-sarika married too as they both realized its best for their kid and sarika gave birth to a baby boy , ishaan 😊. Although they did nt love each other but their relation was where ishra's had been when when they married and raman knew that wid time they wud get along for sure. Romi's changed mature behavior had raised hopes of raman even more abt his relation with sarika😉⭐️. Mihir- mihika stayed wid amma appa as they were alone but on rent as mihir wud nt agree otherwise. Bala and vandu had a daughter too now named shanaya. When rinky completed her studies, rkb got an idea and now rinky, simmi, mihir, mihika and romi all worked under him in PSR and managed everything important and raman just presided over them. Shagun was ofcourse thrown far away and raman did nt knew where she is or whether she is dead or alive , he doesn't care. Only problem was he grew apart from adi now , just like he had been from ruhi in all those years when shagun had left him and now dis wud resolve only when ishu came back. ADI 😊was a changed child too, he saw how much ishita aunty loved ruhi, whole family and most of all his dad. His dad too loved ishita aunty a lot and so he now felt he deserved that estranged behavior from his dad as he was the reason ishita aunty was not wid his dad and ruhi. Adi was now waiting 4 d day when ishita wud come back home and he wud say sorry to her and call her Ishimaa like ruhi did. Ruhi was raman's lifeline at home in the day and at night ishita's photo and memories were his only solace. He was no longer the Angry Raman Kumar Bhalla but Raman, a completely family man who loved his family a lot. Raman , mihir had been trying their level best to search for ishita but she was not found in major cities but raman was determined to keep looking for her till he finds her back whether it is till his last breath , he wud nt die without seeing ishita and saying I love u once.😊❤️

Ishita's side of story-

Ishita was also broken when she left bhalla house , she was worried for everybody , how wud ruhi live without her ,😲😭 how wud raman live without her but most importantly how wud she herself live without raman and ruhi. But she knew she had to do this for herself and in her heart she knew Raman wud find her one day and take her back.😉 She came to Pune and took a one bedroom flat to live on rent and started working in Smile Foundation which worked for orphaned kids. She found solace in kids and people out there were kind and helpful too. A kid Aarav who was around 8 bonded d most wid ishita , so much so that he cud nt stay away from her and her friend shruti from NGO suggested ishu to adopt him as that wud be gud for both. After a lot of inquiries and hesitation Mrs bose , NGO owner gave aarav to ishita as she knew ishita wud be good for aarav. Ishita lived wid her 9 year old son aarav and worked in NGO .😊😃 On the surface she found happiness and reason to live in aarav but missed ruhi , raman and everybody a lot.😕

Os begins on a normal day when raman had decided to go the annual function of an NGO named SMILE as the chief guest . This was because he had funded the ngo heavily just like many others. Although he did not go to any such functions and mihir and romi took care of it all but this time he did not know why he felt a pull towards going there , he decided 2 follow his instinct and go there. Mihir called Raman 2 days before to confirm

Mihir- hello bhai , aap who smile ke function mein aa rahe ho na ?

Raman- haan aa raha hun , kahan hai who?

Mihir- bhai Pune mein , 2 din baad nikalna hai.

Raman- theek hai I will be ready, but tu bhi aa raha hai mere saath samjha.

Mihir- haan bhai for sure but ek baat kehna chahta tha , bhai who...

Raman- mihir , tu kabse hesitate karne laga mujhse kuch bhi kehne mein , bol na?

Mihir- bhai who aa pichle ek saal mein bohot rarely kabhi social events mein gaye hain , toh phir yeh ngo mein kaise?

Raman- Mujhe nahi pata maine haan kyun kiya , but mera dil keh raha hai Mujhe wahan jaana chahiye , jaise meri kismet Mujhe wahan le jaa rahi hai.

Mihir- oh bhai , phir toh aapko pakka wahan jaana chahiye.

He keeps down the phone and thinks , "bhai I hope aapko wahan who mil jaaye jo aa chahte ho , ab aapkp aise dekha nahi jaata."

Raman self talk-"I hope main jiss instinct ko follow karke wahan jaa raha hun , woh sahi saabit ho, ishita plzzz waapas aa jao yaar, " and a lone tear of hurt and pain escaped his eyes.😭

Ishita's side-

2 days before the function , ishita's friend shruti was making a request which ishita found difficult to accept.

Shruti- ishu u need 2 do this for us , for our ngo, anjali is badly injured and if that finale performance does not happen , the whole show wud be spoilt and u knw the financer is cmng himself to see the function. Plz ishu!

Ishita- look shru, I knw what u r saying but its nt in my hands this time, I m nt a trained dancer like anjali and moreover I left dancing way back in college so I can't.

Shruti- come on ishu , I knw u can do dis if u want to , plz yaar , aarav bol na apni mom ko help karein humein.

Aarav- mom plz , u need 2 do this , u have to do this , I knw u can do this , u r superwoman , I knw u can plzz.😊😉

Ishita- (finally giving up) ohkkk ok I will , now let me think what all I need to do and leave me alone u 2 emotional blackmailers for atleast sometime.😆😉

Yesss, u rock - both shruti and aarav exclaimed.

Function Day-

Everything was set , stage , performances and the ngo and wait was now for Raman bhalla . All new who was cmng except for ofcourse ishita as she was least interested in whoever it was. Raman and mihir arrived and were received by ms bose and others and they gracefully took their seats in first row of audi. In d green room , ishita was all set for her performance , she didn't knew why she was getting more nervous than her usual self . She looked gorgeous in a white lehenga wid minimal makeup and jewellery👏. The show began and various performances happened, in one of kids performance raman was attracted by a boy of around adi's age, his attitude and way of dancing was very similar to raman and raman was pleasantly surprised. The time for finale performance came and ishita took her posture having back to audience. The song started playing( radha from tevar) and as soon as ishita turned around , raman was surprised 😲and moreover shocked to see ishita there , she looked like goddess dancing and in entire performance raman cud nt move his eyes away from her . The performance ended and loud applause sounded in audi. Mihir to raman- "bhai , yeh toh bhabhi" but raman was just moving towards d stage when he saw d same little boy running 2 ishu saying "mom u rock"👏 . Raman was shocked but soon 😲calmed himself and thought rationally. She must have adopted him, its just 1 year since we have been apart and I knw she will never marry again. Bhalla family had seen entire live telecast on tv and toshiji called raman immediately.

Toshiji- " puttar yeh to ishita , yeh wahan kasie?"

Raman- (not in his senses) maa baad mein baat karunga.

Adi, ruhi and romi told toshiji- "this time papa/bhai won't cme widout ishima/bhabhi.

Back 2 pune-

Raman ran backstage to meet ishita and heard following convo outside green room

Aarav- mom u were amazing , I love u

Ishita- thank u bachcha , mom was scared really

Aarav- I told u na u r superwoman , u can do anything u like

Ishita- haan bachcha , thank u I love u , now go outside and wait 4 me then we will go home.😊

Aarav left and ishita sat in front of dressing table , self talk- " nahi aarav ur mom is nt at all superwoman, she cud nt even keep those wid her who loved her and whom she loved more than her life. Ruhi, raman I miss u."😭

And she started crying. Raman felt d urge to give her a bone crushing hug but he had 2 meet someone else before that.😉

Garden-

Aarav is sitting there on bench, raman cmes 2 talk 2 him.

Raman- hey , champ u were gr8 in ur performance.

Aarav was surprised on seeing raman as he knew who he was , yup he knew raman was his dad or if not that his mother's husband. But he did not let it show and continued

Aarav- thanks, btw u r chief guest RKB na ?

Raman- ya I am . so tell me abt ur family , who all do u have?

Aarav- zyaada nahi , just me and my mom ishita .

Raman- and ur dad?

Aarav- he doesn't live wid us. My name is Aarav Ishita.

Raman- why doesn't ur dad live wid u ? do u knw?

Aarav- nop, mom said he loves us and will take us one day.

Raman knew it was him aarav was talking abt and his eyes brimmed wid tears. He was just making and xcuse and going when aarav said- "plz dnt go , I knw u . u r my dad raman bhalla."😊😉

Raman was shocked wud be an understatement, ishita had told aarav abt him , then what more had she told her abt him. Raman said- "what u know me? Look I ... ur mom... we " he fumbled wid words when aarav said.😲

Aarav- no I dnt want any clarifications, I just wanna say plz dnt go away , mom loves u and ruhi and I knw u too love her , plz take her wid u . she won't be able 2 live widout u for long."😭😊

Raman- sun aarav ...

Aarav started leaving but not before saying- " plz wait here only , mom wud cme looking for me and u can talk 2 her."😉

Raman thought how smart aarav was and thanked his stars as he knew aarav wud surely help him in long run. Long run as he knew his jkr wud nt agree 2 go wid him so easily and soon. Just then ishita came looking for aarav , at first raman froze 2 😲😳😉see her and when she saw him , same was her reaction.

Tumko dekhke yun lagta hai , koi bichda khwab aaya hai

Barson lambi raat se guzre , subah ka jhonka laut aaya hai

Bohot der chaha ki , bohot door aayi , khwab ne chodi na meri kalaayi😭

Kabse meri saans ruki thi , Mujhe saans aayi , Mujhe saans aayi ❤️


next part- ishra meeting continues.😊

ok so this is d first part as i ended up writing 9 whole pages so posting just first bit of it. 😉😆continuation depends on response 4 me as i am a first timer so no response means i fail and believe me no hard feelings or probs wid that.😊

honest opinion expected.😊

Love ❤️

shivangi

Index

part 1 pg 1

part 2 pg 4

part 3 pg 10

part 4 pg 15

part 5 pg 19

part 6 pg 22

part 7 pg 24

part 8 pg 28

part 9 pg 32

part 10 A pg 35

part 10 B pg 36

part 11 pg 39

part 12 pg 43

part 13 pg 47

part 14 pg 50

part 15 pg 54

part 16 pg 57

part 17 pg 61

part 18 pg 65

part 19 pg 68

part 20 pg 71

part 21 pg 75

part 22 pg 79

part 23 pg 82

part 24 pg 85

part 25 pg 87

part 26 pg 90

part 27 pg 93

part 28 pg 97

part 29 pg 100

part 30 pg 103

part 31 pg 107

part 32 pg 109

part 33 pg 112

part 34 pg 114

part 35 pg 117

part 36 pg 119

part 37 pg 123

part 38 pg 125

part 39 pg 127

part 40 pg 130

part 41 pg 134

part 42 pg 136

part 43 pg 139

part 44 pg 142

part 45 pg 146

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