1st SS-Love doesn't Lessen , Infact it Deepens ch 45 pg 146 note 148 - Page 3

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Ok guys thanks once again for this encouragement , here i am posting part 2 of my Os😊 , i will be waiting 4 ur response and also ur opinion abt whether it shld be converted 2 SS or not 😉. as 4 pms , i will be sending 2 all those who accepted my buddy request , those who have nt , i am really sorry but as soon as u accept it , i will pm u 4 sure.😃😉 here it goes part 2
part 2
Scene in garden (continued ishra scene frm previous part)

Raman thought how smart aarav was and thanked his stars as he knew aarav wud surely help him in long run. Long run as he knew his jkr wud nt agree 2 go wid him so easily and soon. Just then ishita came looking for aarav , at first raman froze 2 see her and when she saw him , same was her reaction.

Tumko dekhke yun lagta hai , koi bichda khwab aaya hai

Barson lambi raat se guzre , subah ka jhonka laut aaya hai

Bohot der chaha ki , bohot door aayi , khwab ne chodi na meri kalaayi

Kabse meri saans ruki thi , Mujhe saans aayi , Mujhe saans aayi

Raman moved towards her and dats when she realized he was really there and she got frightened wats cmng up next. A volley of questions , accusations and what not but what he said surprised her

Raman- tum theek ho na? kaisi ho tum?

Ishita was shocked , no questions , no anger but this and then he said,

Raman-I missed u ishita , maine aur ruhi dono ne tumhe bohot yaad kiya

Ishita did nt knw what 2 say , she had done wrong , she knew she had left raman and ruhi and done wrong .

Raman- ghar chalo ishita , sab wait kar rahe hain

And he held her hand and started moving . she was angered . Audacity of this man. After breaking her trust . One year after he meets her and takes her hand and start moving as if nothing happened. She snapped her hand back and shouted

Ishita- what the hell raman , is this a joke ? chodo Mujhe , main kahin nahi jaa rahi hun tumhare saath. Koi ghar , koi pati nahin hai samjhe .

That's it dis broke his last straw of patience and he pulled her by the shoulders hardly and looked intensely in her eyes. In that moment she saw anger, guilt, pain, longing and immense love for herself. She didn't knew which emotion her eyes were answering him back wid but he knew , it was anger , loneliness and love here too. He shouted on her back

Raman- no it is not at all a joke ms ishita , no mrs ishita raman bhalla u r my wife who left me a year back and now I am taking u back home . so I dnt find anything wrong in it and if u do , I dnt care a damn , u r cmng wid me right now.

That authority and a sense of possession in his voice sounded so good 2 her ears , that oozing love , that care and protection . The moment seized there, they shared an intense eyelock and out of a sudden raman hugged ishita bone crushingly as if never 2 let her go. She also drowned in his masculine scent after a year and she responded 2 hug too. In moments the emotional tension between the 2 changed 2 sexual tension and that too a frightening one. But before anything more cud happen, ishita pulled herself back and ran away crying. Raman knew what she was going through, that breach of trust had hurt her heart badly and now he was even more determined 2 take his wife back. He called mihir and told him 2 go 2 hotel and return back as soon as possible and he shld not be seen by ishita. Rkb now had something in his mind, Raavan Kumar was back , thanks to his jhaansi ki rani.

That emotional scene of ishra was seen by aarav and he knew what he had 2 to next. Yes he knew abt his nani , nana ji , dadi, dadu, chitti, periamma, periappa, chahcus, buas and siblings. He had heard abt everyone from his mom and also seen his dad on tv. He knew he resembled his dad in many things though he was not his son biologically. One fact that he did not know was why his mom and dad separated and now after seeing the encounter of his mom-dad , he gave a damn to the reason. The fact was they loved each other and he will get them back. He ran 2 his best friend shru to make a plan to get ishra together. Shruti listened to all and together they hatched a plan and went to Raman.

In garden

Shruti- hi mr raman , I am shruti , ishu's friend and we are here 2 help u in ur endeavour.

Raman- really , thank u both of u . just love u . let me explain...

Before he cud say anything , shru intervened

Shruti- its ok all that doesn't matter, we have 2 get 2 of u back now.

Raman - aarav are u ready 2 accept me and why?

Aarav- I know u and mom love each other so u have 2 get back and as for pain u caused 2 my mom , who hisaab baad mein karenge . pehle mission mom-dad milao par concentrate karein.

And he smirked and raman was surprised 2 see junior version of rkb in

him and compared him wid adi . How different 2 kids are all becoz of

upbringing. But there was no time as it was time 2 execute the plan.

so dis is it , frm my side 4 2nd part 😊, in d next post u will find my pm list

and in brackets those whom i cud nt pm will be mentioned.

waiting eagerly 4 ur response and if u dnt want me to take dis up as

an SS in future , do tell , i will end it in 3rd part. 😉

Love
shivangi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OK guys as promised , here's my pm list-
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pmed 2 all😃

Edited by shivangi838 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awsom updte...
At last pura na sahi aadoora Milan hogya... 😉
Aarav how he can b junior version of rkb..? I didn t get it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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brilliant update...

love aarav...

waiting fr misison mom-dad milavo...

jr.rkb is in aarav is nice to see...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravani_2311

brilliant update...

love aarav...

waiting fr misison mom-dad milavo...

jr.rkb is in aarav is nice to see...



thanks alot yaar , btw do tell ss or end it in next?😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Its awsom updte...

At last pura na sahi aadoora Milan hogya... 😉
Aarav how he can b junior version of rkb..? I didn t get it...


hey thanks alot 4 liking it😊 , i dnt think there will be any twist behind dis apart frm a bit 😉which can be shown if dis turns into an ss , do tell ss or ending in 3rd?😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnks for the pm...
Ishra milan mission sounds interesting...
Ishra hug...
Raman's andaz great...
Rkb n jr. Rkb will rock...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
superb update
thanku so much for PM

update waqs too short.

plz give a lil lengthy update na


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