FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Fabulous updates...

Brilliant and amazing writing..👏👏

Waiting for the next update..

Thank u so much for pm...😊😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#312

I love how you are taking this forward V

Like I said this reminds me of the good old days of the simmering attraction right now the only thing that simmers is our temper cause of all the absurdity shown in the show

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#313

I love the way you brought out their desires..mutual and intense for each other...the last line was awesome and the lyrics too...

RKB is so loving, caring and at the same time such a tease...cant wait for the next update...cont soon!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Lovely V

Had read all the chapters after page 15 from my mobile n I was too much in a rush to comment.

Now I can.

I am loving this FF. Loved the way how you are proceeding to show how their emotions n feelings are evolving for each other!

The last update is sweet yet so intense n passionate!

Keep it up!

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whitelily

@whitelily

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

wow,fantastic update 👍🏼

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Eagerly waiting for the next one

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

wow read alll the chapters at one ...and its really superb...and with a diff story line...pls pls continue soon and pls pm me ur updates

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Wonderfully written

can't wait for the next update...

please don't keep a cliff hanger it's too tempting

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Hi guys. Thanks again for the wonderful comments. Sorry for leaving it at the juncture I did, but while I find it fun to write about sexual tension and build up, I'm afraid writing about the actual physical deed isn't quite as easy, since I have a very satvik soul and I can't write "mature" very well. Ends up sounding very mechanical. 😆 😆

But will update soon, today or tomorrow, promise.

Thanks again