FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

*sigh* reading your story just makes me want to see these two romance on screen a bit more

I just love how you've built the palpable tension and attraction between the two, and like Ishita...I'm a bit disappointed the roads are clearing up so quickly! 😆

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

The part where Raman puts on the muffler and gloves on Ishita was so beautiful, so intimate in it's own way. I liked how Raman initiated the snow fight in the end even though he laughed it off when Ishita spoke of it in the beginning. It brought out the child in both of them. The kiss at the end was something that was waiting to happen. I'm glad that both Raman and Ishita finally just threw away their inhibitions but I wonder will the kiss actually take place. Waiting for the next update.

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beyul

@beyul

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

From playful to passionate how deftly you let the mood change between them, first by the window and then after the walk👏 The veils are coming off one by by one, aren't they? The tension crackling in the air between them is soo unmistakable!

Holding our breath to see what happens next. Do update soon V, before we all go blue in the face😆

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Wow

The walk, the hand-holding, the snow fight followed by the almost-kiss..

Who needs grand gestures and melodramatic love declarations when such small, seemingly inconsequential romantic moments can make you feel equally mushy?😳

Loved the update!!

Edited by nrn1486 - 10 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Oh My, Ohhh !!! Wowww!!! Superbb brilliantt snowy updatee!!!

I seriously loved how u described each and every minute detail.. so felt like i am reading a romantic novel.

Im loving how their relationship is going in slow pace mode without any haadis! :P

wondering how things will transpire between them once back in India.. :D

Puttar is so naughty.. attempts in ogling and touching her!! hahahaha!! Phataka she is! :P ;)

Cont soon... Vee.. achan nahi kia apne.. u stopped at the wrong point! :P LOL

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Finally...
It's a superb update...
Can't wait to read next...
N its so different yet quit same as serial... Different in romance n bickering as serial...

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Veeann

Hi Shilpa

That's actually the song 'Yeh Hai Meri Kahani' from the movie Zinda. It's a beautiful song, google it.

Thanks for reading 😃

Oh thanks for telling me I am really bad at songs be it desi or videshi😆, terrible memory rgding songs

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Arre yaar Veann ,

Kyon hum par itna atyachaar kar rahi ho dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi ki kya hoga ab and u stopped there...not fair..

Update fast pls

SOMEthINGS ARE MEANT TO BE...yes perfectly true...

loved it

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Firstly the stubbled graze and her kissing him on the cheeks ... OMG am done for ☺️

And no one writes sexual currents better than you V ... you could touch the sizzle and passion in the last update. Snowball fight & their close proximity ... there better be a kiss (or more, who's complaining) in the next update girl.

Oh and pleej to make it snow again so that they're stranded for a few more days 😆. Or else fultoo sexual tension wala romance back at home wen they are living across from each other