FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
You know V, what strikes me is that there's a nice symbolism in the storm that raged outside and Ishra's lives. It is as though a lid was lifted off suddenly, releasing feelings and angst pent up for so long. And after the storms, just like the sun comes out and everything looks all sparkly and fresh, they too feel as if a heavy burden has been lifted off their hearts. But the aftermath of a storm also leaves things in a disarray and you've captured their tumult and awkwardness beautifully!👍🏼
Sigh. This Ishra soul conversation copyrighted to you is what the YHM creatives need to use on the show instead of trying to use their non-existent bheja as RKB would say!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional updates really touching awesome buddy really
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
love the story
please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for the fast update...beautifully written. ..that "tu dentist hi rehna beta" is so kp...loved the way they shared their kahani...update soon...like your style of writing also
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving the progress on this one V
This reminds me of the early days of the show - the slow simmering attraction that was felt in the Ek duje ke vaaste seq, the bandage scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
Veeann you write really well...a well-paced story. Please continue, looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vee I love it .. How their relationship is progressing with each chapter... And that cheek kiss and stubble graze.. Little things that make my heart go all mushy gushy 😳
Continue soon please 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update they are now open up from both side and more understanding after know their side of story.hope they continue their relation after go back to India. And Ishu wow what a first step and first kiss . I am sure Ishra will remember this trip till end of their life cause thier journey start from here too.🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was beautiful how Ishita shared her life's story after Raman did his. They found comfort in each other and now, all that is left is for them to acknowledge that and not be afraid of it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vee! Yet another amazing update...I love the way they opened up to each other, the vulnerability they showed is so real. The conversation about love was also quite revealing... and what can I say about her making the first move? And that too a kiss? Lovely. I am really liking that you are developing a real emotional connection between the two before anything really physical happens... great job!😊

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