FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Awesome amazing one di I was waiting so much for the update. so cute Raman and sad for him too

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Hi Veann,

Superb updates dear, I esp. loved the poem at the end of 2 parts, it touched me and I have copied it in my diary.

My curiosity is killing me, will their desire for each other make them come close or both will be in denial????

Update soon

Shilpa

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Thanks for all the comments guys. Really loved reading all you guys had to say. This story took on a Track of its own, but I promise I am coming to the "desire" part soon. 😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

this story reminds me of those early days of yhm

jaane kaha gaye woh din

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

awesummm updateee Veee.. loved ittt!!

Finally both opened their hearts! Greatt.. looking forwardd now! its getting super interesting!

the last part... side hugs, kiss on cheek and stubble graze on forehead! eekksss!!! hahaha! <3 <3 <3

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

awesome, beautiful parts👏
loved, loved, loved them❤️
raman's breakdown and story was so emotional😭
adored how they supported each other❤️
thanks for this fabulous story👏
eagerly waiting for the desire now😳
take care

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@Zola029

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Awesome update !
Finally they had a good convo
And now both knows each other past
Loved how both comforted the other
And a kiss on the cheek 😳
Beautifully witten (:

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geno0309

@geno0309

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Vee-just caught up with all the parts so far-they are lovely!!

You write beautifully:) I am thoroughly enjoying this and can't wait for you get to the 'desire' part-lol

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: shidin0117
Hi Veann,

Superb updates dear, I esp. loved the poem at the end of 2 parts, it touched me and I have copied it in my diary.

My curiosity is killing me, will their desire for each other make them come close or both will be in denial????

Update soon

Shilpa

Hi Shilpa

That's actually the song 'Yeh Hai Meri Kahani' from the movie Zinda. It's a beautiful song, google it.

Thanks for reading 😃