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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I totally understand people's concerns about II asking for a prenup. Of course she is nervous what began as a searing attraction is now a full blown marriage proposal. For her HE IS THE ONE. She will never love anyone ever again, she never LOVED anyone. She ONLY loves him... however corny that sounds... except nobody knows, she hasn't even told Akka explicitly

What some of you see as rude, or utterly stupid, I see as sensible and practical.
I created her this way, because how can anyone in her position be trusting and logical and unquestioning? Isnt that a bit much to ask? Its not DDLJ.
Thats a grossly unreasonable expectation Yes he proposed to her. WHY should she trust him unconditionally?

He belongs to a different galaxy as far as wealth, lifestyle, habits, culture and personality go, there will never be any manned missions to those galaxies from her planet.
And she is going to go live there? For good?
At the very least she is a number 12 on his list of conquests. His family believed he would marry someone older and French. Ranjan cheated on Savita, he didn't even have multiple girlfriends before his marriage, yet...he did at age 60? Her Appa hates him thoroughly.


So many things in this relationship are just so out of her control IMO.
I don't think she lives every moment in suspicion that R&B is going to cheat or Appa is going to break them up. But those are definitely clear and present dangers.


This prenup is a little reality check for HERSELF. It's for no one else. JUST FOR HERSELF. Its like paying towards unemployment insurance, or getting car insurance
NOBODY expects a new car to crash, nobody expects to get laid off, thinking about bad things will not make it happen


But God forbid some day because of events beyond HER control things fall apart, she can pat herself on her back and say "I was not completely insane when I nodded my head, I protected my self respect and dignity at least a LITTLE BIT by insisting I don't want anything that belonged to him". She hopes to walk away "unscathed".

There is no walking away unscathed from a guy like R&B. She knows that too. She would have invested on Rakshasan.. exponentially emotionally and physically by then ... For her there is NO going back... , like they say in legal terms "restoring a person to the state prior to the occurrence of the event". That cant happen for II, in knowing him and being loved by him she will be... forever changed. Then why do it?

So she can pretend to be unhurt and intact. However sad that sounds.


I believe ONLY in movies do leading ladies look at the world through rose tinted glasses start wearing million rupee sarees and and jewelry like they are entitled to it. I crafted her this way because its thought provoking and dignified, and helps her maintain her self esteem.
She loves him insanely and doesn't want him to ever find out. It's a secret she will take to her grave.


You can all hate her for this, but that's how she is.



MY GOD HOW WELL U WRITE NISHA!! I WANTED TO SAY THIS AND YOU SAY IT .. i even mentioned in my comment i love this prenup thing like TOTALLY as much as ur reference to dawara tumbler during his first visit to her house...
I think this makes me respect II sooo much and honestly R&B is going to respect her for that .. he is going to be angry but he is going to respect her because what she told him when he proposed was not filmy she meant it👏👏 you can be angry and respect a person at the same time .. i had this manager who made me work like crazy 18 hours per day i was angry but also respected him
cause he was good in his area ,true and honest
and this
But God forbid some day because of events beyond HER control things fall apart, she can pat herself on her back and say "I was not completely insane when I nodded my head, I protected my self respect and dignity at least a LITTLE BIT by insisting I don't want anything that belonged to him". She hopes to walk away "unscathed".
👏* infinity -

Also she already told her mom she cant marry any one else EVEN IF he marries

Nisha you should have been a writer by now -- no i am not chumma saying i mean it..
Edited by TanjoreGirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Nisha you have explained II so well. She is a brilliantly sketched character . Her impulsiveness, uncertainties, insecurities are very real and her naivety tops the cake. And IMO R&B see's through most of that.

I know everyone's been talking about II but I can't help but ponder over R&B... men like that do exist (of course the physical/financial packaging is a different issue altogether) He knows II will go over the edge if he were to reveal all his plans to her. So he doesn't. Does that make him dishonest? Nope I think it just makes him human. He just doesn't want to leave anything to chance. Marry her first, with/wo prenup and then sort issues later...(issues they have plenty- career, babies, scandals...name it they have it) But he is just as much in love as is II, perhaps doesn't introspect as much. Most men don't. He accepts it and acts on it as HE deems fit. Well, with marriage he will eventually realise that the singular HE will HAVE to become THEY.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for the update... mainly R&B's reaction 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you all for giving the II justification a read Anu for some reason Page 77 alignment is off everything is right justified and most posts are missing, not sure if its my laptop of people in general see it that way
Anu and SB and Taramira fantastic summaries
Thanks for agreeing and concurring, when I said like minded people hang out here I was not kidding.
I cannot imagine a 28 year old in the real world in Delhi nodding her head blindly to a rich guy's proposal thinking "It happened to Kajol in DDLJ so why not? It can happen with ME too"😭
If they do then they have no one else to blame when they lose their dignity along with their heart😭
Tara: Don't worry I wont reduce the length of the update. You are too kind when you say things like this.
Sunshine: Yes you are so right, men by nature are less expressive, and R&B is the extreme (all intentional😃) for him falling for a girl like her is like winning the Powerball (whatever that's called in Australia) She is intelligent, funny, kind, ambitious, educated, SEXYYY to the point of making him go batty when she is around...😳 Its not a revenge story, he wont hide or lie to her and secretly gag her and whisk her away to Paris, he will tell her he wants to return when he is ready
YES HE IS DEVIOUS, he wants to make sure she is married to him first
Just like getting a prenup ensures she retains her self esteem...
Anu I LOVED YOUR explanation you said 👏👏what I said before I did I need not have wasted my time writing mine😭but didn't read yours couldn't... so posted mine
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thank you all for giving the II justification a read Anu for some reason Page 77 alignment is off everything is right justified and most posts are missing, not sure if its my laptop of people in general see it that way

Anu and SB and Taramira fantastic summaries
Thanks for agreeing and concurring, when I said like minded people hang out here I was not kidding.
I cannot imagine a 28 year old in the real world in Delhi nodding her head blindly to a rich guy's proposal thinking "It happened to Kajol in DDLJ so why not? It can happen with ME too"😭
If they do then they have no one else to blame when they lose their dignity along with their heart😭
Tara: Don't worry I wont reduce the length of the update. You are too kind when you say things like this.
Sunshine: Yes you are so right, men by nature are less expressive, and R&B is the extreme (all intentional😃) for him falling for a girl like her is like winning the Powerball (whatever that's called in Australia) She is intelligent, funny, kind, ambitious, educated, SEXYYY to the point of making him go batty when she is around...😳 Its not a revenge story, he wont hide or lie to her and secretly gag her and whisk her away to Paris, he will tell her he wants to return when he is ready
YES HE IS DEVIOUS, he wants to make sure she is married to him first
Just like getting a prenup ensures she retains her self esteem...
Anu I LOVED YOUR explanation you said 👏👏what I said before I did I need not have wasted my time writing mine😭but didn't read yours couldn't... so posted mine



I dont know what happened to the allignment :-( I sent RD a note.

Hi RD,

I dont know what is going on but this page is showing crazy alignment:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4315929&TPN=77

Could you check to see what is going on?

-anu

I had written an update to your comment and at that point i saw everything ... buggy software some place :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thank you all for giving the II justification a read Anu for some reason Page 77 alignment is off everything is right justified and most posts are missing, not sure if its my laptop of people in general see it that way

Anu and SB and Taramira fantastic summaries
Thanks for agreeing and concurring, when I said like minded people hang out here I was not kidding.
I cannot imagine a 28 year old in the real world in Delhi nodding her head blindly to a rich guy's proposal thinking "It happened to Kajol in DDLJ so why not? It can happen with ME too"😭
If they do then they have no one else to blame when they lose their dignity along with their heart😭
Tara: Don't worry I wont reduce the length of the update. You are too kind when you say things like this.
Sunshine: Yes you are so right, men by nature are less expressive, and R&B is the extreme (all intentional😃) for him falling for a girl like her is like winning the Powerball (whatever that's called in Australia) She is intelligent, funny, kind, ambitious, educated, SEXYYY to the point of making him go batty when she is around...😳 Its not a revenge story, he wont hide or lie to her and secretly gag her and whisk her away to Paris, he will tell her he wants to return when he is ready
YES HE IS DEVIOUS, he wants to make sure she is married to him first
Just like getting a prenup ensures she retains her self esteem...
Anu I LOVED YOUR explanation you said 👏👏what I said before I did I need not have wasted my time writing mine😭but didn't read yours couldn't... so posted mine

Your analogy to Powerball...(called the same here) is 😆. Sums up R&B's catch perfectly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha...where are you? 😭
No update this morning?😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am here
I wrote a long ramayan analysis its lost now
The next chapter in 30 mins
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I am here

I wrote a long ramayan analysis its lost now
The next chapter in 30 mins

Thank God. My morning cuppa doesn't taste the same without your update. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
To be where it all began

He sent her a meeting invite for early Friday at his office at Excelsior it was for an hour
He didnt fill the subject field, Location: My Office, 20th Spectrum" it said

Her sinides spun and rotated on seeing it she hit "Accept" with a trembling click

"Send response" is what she chose

"Thanks" she said again

He didnt respond to that... she spent the rest of Thursday in a daze, went home early, went to Malai Mandir with Amma so she could invite the "Committee members"
She came home and sang for two hours in Periappa's room the evening nurse sulked all the while but she did not care, she wanted her mind taken off whatever was on it

But with every passing minute it just continued to overwhelm her...
and hose her brain... she was edgy and jumpy, when Amma came by while she was singing to pin flowers to her hair she jumped out of her skin...

Amma paused wondering... she waited until II finsihed, she ended the song half way began to sing all over again a Dikshthar Kriti her favorite, her voice quivered at the end of the second time

"If this is how you will feel the rest of your life II then I am sorry to say, my full sympathies are with you" her brain warned

"When I run away from him physically I feel like I am closer mentally. He overwhelms me" she admitted to herself

Amma gushed to Akka "Paavam kozhandai she is home early she has already started missing us I think" (Poor baby)
Akka giggled "She will come here every evening to sing, or eat your thenga thohayal (coconut with tamarind chutney) or your puliyodarai (tamarind rice)" Akka's voice quivered

The entire Iyer family was on a trip down memory lane, frequently meeting one or the other along the way, sharing food and life stories

"I will make whatever she wants to eat and send it to her, she can eat here and go home every evening" Amma said almost crying

"She doesnt take good care of herself, she is such a workaholic, she needs a good man to care for her be stern with her protective with her" Amma said decisively
"Idu romba vaal ma" (she is very naughty)" Akka giggled "I know I am talking like she is Shravu's age, but she is very innocent" and naive"

"Appa is very somber too u know"

"Its all his doing, he can be nice to her, talk to her and be cheerful. Tell him he can pick up his act if he wants"

Amma asked about her health what she had made for dinner, offered to send vethakozhambu (sambar made without dal) and beans curry with grated coconut...
"Mmm...mmm sounds YUMMM ma" "If the brat is willing to come, send some for me. I am making cauliflower parantha so I will eat what u send" Akka smiled

II appeared, Amma asked her she nodded soulfully

Amma stared at her leave hung up and went to pack for Akka

II sat down on the floor by her Godrej and slowly set the neatly ironed sarees on the bed one stack after another, unwrapped the Samsonite suitcase, and unzipped it...

Amma walked in, she said she has to place some "pouches of blessings in first"
"Rice turmeric and lentils in a ziploc with some flowers, she threw a puch of turmeric in" and broke down crying

II was already crying

"Amma I dont want to go" she said
"Ashadu" (Silly girl) "If I had said like that would you be here?" Amma asked
"YES I WOULD Appa would have come and taken you away forcefully, PLUS APPA IS DIFFERENT" II said bursting with love

Amma sat on the floor by the open Godrej door
"Adu daan pannuvaan avan, he will come by one night and kidnap you" Amma said proudly

The thought of her daughter being kidnapped by the tall boy didnt seem so distasteful anymore

II blushed
"He wont" she said shaking her head

"want to bet?" Amma asked winking

"Seri" II nodded sadly smiling

Amma reached up to the chest and quickly grabbed her phone,
"Ayyo Amma I WAS KIDDING... Avan busy aa irupaan, he wont talk" II defended the Dude
"Hes busy he wont talk Ma"

"Really? Are u defending him?" Amma giggled
II reached for her Amma's phone... Amma got up

"Ayyo Ma" II begged

Amma typed

"This is Ishita's mother, I was telling her if we didnt send her with you you will kidnap her and take her away,"
AMMA HIT SEND
AYYO MA... WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS? HIM AND I ARE IN WW 6 RIGHT NOW
I DONT WANT HIM TO KNOW I THINK ABOUT HIM AT HOME. ERMMM I MEAN I THINK ABOUT HIM... PERIOD

Amma placed the first piece of clothing in her suitcase... II smiled her eyes filling up
"Its 3 kms away u can come over whenever, day or night"
Amma's phone pinged II's stomach lurched like it would sitting in a kudara vandi at Madurai (horse driven buggy)
"I would Mrs Iyer" HE HAD TEXTED BACK

II LLOKED FOR A PLACE TO HIDE HER CRIMSON FACE
SO IT WAS TRUE? HE WAS LIKE APPA?
HE WOULD COME GET HER?

"Ishita is packing right now and says she doesnt want to go" Amma TEXTED

"Amma PLEASE STOP IT" Ii begged

"Sam has shopped for her I think" he texted
"She loves clothes, beta" "I am sorry can I call u that?" Amma asked
"Ofcourse" he texted

"She has so many clothes, 100 sarees I think and 100 other clothes... she is very playful" Amma texted

II grabbed the phone and read... her heart vibrating rapidly in her chest like a swing in the Sector 3 park
"Amma HE IS NOT YOUR BETA" She accussed

"Inga tha phone a, its my phone" "Nee poi pack pannu" Amma said sternly taking her phone away

"She doesnt eat, sleep or do anything on time, SHE ONLY WORKS please take good care of her" Amma typed
He called WITHIN A SECOND

"Mrs Iyer" he said

Amma couldnt talk she was crying... she cleared her throat multiple times

"she is not 18, she is not 16, like in those olden times you know, but still she is our baby" Amma defended her grief and separation anxiety

II continued to pack quietly
Amma stood in the balcony talking

"Ask her about work she will tell you everything, ask her about her things or money, she has no idea" Amma said
He smiled a half smile
"Please dont let her return late from Gurgaon, her father worries she may do that, since you both are young people" Amma complained
"I will make sure she is home by 8 or have a driver go get her"
"Do u know the drivers well?" Amma asked
"Most help we have at home are all 3rd gen Mrs Iyer, the guards as well" R&B said

He got a overseas call

"Can I call you back?" he requested

"Thats OK I wanted to tell Ishita you will kidnap her" Amma cheered up a little

"Yes,Please tell her" he reassured warmly as he hung up

~~~~~

He was clean shaven, wore jeans and a white shirt the shoulder strap kind... with flip flops ofcourse
She wore jeans also with a Nordstrom plaid shirt checked pink and navy, figure hugging, sleeves folded to her elbows, as if she would get on a ladder and start stripping paint off the walls
Her nose ring was intact, her hair was in a shampooed braid with locks flying all over her face... more than three buttons were undone when she walked in his gaze went to what the opening offered, she surreptiously closed
the first from button... she wore the peace pendant (PMS? or War?)

"Coffee?" he asked not getting up from the couch or smiling

"Mmm... mmm" she said standing, her fingers in a nervous tangle... her eyes big and red... like she had stayed awake the whole night

He called Mrs Sagar "Coffee and breakfast? " "Please?" "thanks"
She smiled at II

II looked like she would jump out the window at the first opp...

Mrs Sagar teased her: You should sit, hes not your boss"

II didnt smile her eyes still fixated on him, he liked that, he preferred that because if she looked then he wouldnt wring her neck, if she didnt he would

She sat down quietly, her peace pendant dangled over the coffee table as she bent over she held her hand on her open shirt front
He saw anyway... FULL VIEWS of gauzy pink lace... sheer...


"Hi!" she said as if she had just entered the room

He didnt return the greeting

"What did you want on it?" he asked cutting the chase by 90%

"Ermm... abhi?" "Ummm... I ... I was thinking" she began

"Ofcourse" he said dryly "I can see it in ur goddamn eyes you were thinking and crying and awake

"What was the first one?" he twirled his locks, pausing on the keyboard waiting for her answer

"I wont change my last name?" she offered
"You want that on the prenup?" he asked mocking her crudely
ARE U OUT OF YOUR MIND? tone

"Ive never had to have a prenup written before so dont know" II shot back viciously, tired, unsure..and. afraid yet... supremely determined

His jaw dropped,in fury. Did she think he wrote those DAILY?

"But when I am through with this I'll know more" II said
Sending him over the edge withs emantics

"The marriage or drafting the prenup?" (THROUGH WITH WHAT?") tone cloaking his rage...

And they were... WHERE THEY BEGAN...




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