Software Symphonies 5--Spice Route on 148 - Page 84

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Prior to the marriage setting we all wondered if R&B loved her or was just attracted. After the marriage setting we wonder that why a guy like R&B would fall for a girl like II. The whole series can be divided into these two sections. The former being answered in the previous 5 threads. I am sure that no reader has an iota of doubt that R&B doesnt love her. What starts next is the journey of the latter section. Yes thats how I see it. I know he is in love with her and also every other thing that accompanies her, be it tantrums or her singing BUT I dont know what went on in his mind when he realised that she is THE ONE.

And now after marriage, we will discover the answer of this. Till now they are the villains in their own story. Fighting and making up but now I want to see how they will TOGETHER stand up to Chachu n cousins the creep. I dont want him to tell her anything, i CANT imagine R&B saying that his chachu is a robber BECAUSE he would never want her to involve in the fiasco, it would seem away from his inscrutable demeanour. I want her to observe. To gather the surroundings. That would affect her more. I want her to get angry that he never told her about it AND I want her to protect him from harms way. The image of her hugging him to her bosom and planting a kiss on his forehead is so vivid, i want that more. Men are emotional fools, howmuchever unemotional they act, the deeper their emotions go. He will never speak his mind. She will SENSE his vulnerability like he sensed hers. Nd sam n ranjan would see that like appa saw.

As a reader this was my opinion. Feel free to object.

Originally posted by: ashu9

Dude, Are you ...Is this for REAL 😲

i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

mORE THAN LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!

cREATE ONE FOR ME ALSO NOOO..pLEASEEE

Originally posted by: Orangen

It has been awhile since I commented on this thread..

So many things have happened so...Nisha are you taking this really well.

I Have been regularly reading up your updates but hated typing on my phone 😊.

Won't attempt a review ...So much more to come. Loved the Jaipur bit.😳

Looking forward to the rest. Especially their conflicts and watching II transform into R&B's wife and R&B tamed by his girls - one on hand the rest in the making...😳😳

All the baggage that comes with it. Our lives swing so much with marriage and I'm really curious to see how these 2 weather the storm and whip up more between themselves. 😆

BTW may you can add one more thing to you list - I actually refreshed my bookmarks and read the jaipur bit on International Roaming rates from a god forsaken airport...was worth it and right now hiding from my bill.

My family moved continents and my husband heaves a sigh of relief that we are now wifi'ed where we live!

Happy Valentine's Nisha and all of you folks on the thread!❤️

Scribble-Tweety loved you pic - Nisha I think you have the illustrator for your book's cover!

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Prior to the marriage setting we all wondered if R&B loved her or was just attracted. After the marriage setting we wonder that why a guy like R&B would fall for a girl like II. The whole series can be divided into these two sections. The former being answered in the previous 5 threads. I am sure that no reader has an iota of doubt that R&B doesnt love her. What starts next is the journey of the latter section. Yes thats how I see it. I know he is in love with her and also every other thing that accompanies her, be it tantrums or her singing BUT I dont know what went on in his mind when he realised that she is THE ONE.

And now after marriage, we will discover the answer of this. Till now they are the villains in their own story. Fighting and making up but now I want to see how they will TOGETHER stand up to Chachu n cousins the creep. I dont want him to tell her anything, i CANT imagine R&B saying that his chachu is a robber BECAUSE he would never want her to involve in the fiasco, it would seem away from his inscrutable demeanour. I want her to observe. To gather the surroundings. That would affect her more. I want her to get angry that he never told her about it AND I want her to protect him from harms way. The image of her hugging him to her bosom and planting a kiss on his forehead is so vivid, i want that more. Men are emotional fools, howmuchever unemotional they act, the deeper their emotions go. He will never speak his mind. She will SENSE his vulnerability like he sensed hers. Nd sam n ranjan would see that like appa saw.

As a reader this was my opinion. Feel free to object.

Originally posted by: poorna3666

Hi Nisha

Today I completed reading all the updates,I started on Monday ..I blame u completely for all my pending housework cos I've been unable to stop reading once I started.somewhere in between I read ur comment tat although there are many views there are fewer likes. Let me tell u I ve not liked even a single chapter...Like is not the word I wud use for how I feel abt ur story. I lovvved it to a power of million likes👏👏👏pls take a bow

YHM has brought many firsts in my life. Before YHM I never knew there was a forum like IF...I got to read many excellent writers in the forum n u lady take the crown with SoSy. I am a voracious reader but I never read Indian writers in English. No I m not a snob it's just tat whenever I ve read an Indian author writing an Indian story in English I really have not been able to read beyond a few chapters.i feel the language is either too flowery or too casual n somehow fails to convey the Indian ethos. The only book which I completed was Two states by Chetan Bhagat n tat too was just theek hai types for me n tats the reason I never read any FF 's in the forum

So SoSy has been the first FF I read n also the first story by an Indian author which I thoroughly thoroughly enjoyed...u took me back to my teens when I wud read novels the whole day sometimes even two in a day. I read the whole thing back to back n now waiting for updates is going to be difficult but I m going to read the entire thing again n this time take my time n read all the comments as well.

U have a way with words n as I said it's been a long time since I read any story which wud compel me to stay up late n disregard all my chores.pls let me know if u have written any other FF in the forum or anywhere else...pls do send me the links if any .after reading So Sy. YHM phika Lagne Laga hai. Pls keep updating fast n thanks a lot for writing such a beautiful story

Poorna

Originally posted by: Orangen

It has been awhile since I commented on this thread..

So many things have happened so...Nisha are you taking this really well.

I Have been regularly reading up your updates but hated typing on my phone 😊.

Won't attempt a review ...So much more to come. Loved the Jaipur bit.😳

Looking forward to the rest. Especially their conflicts and watching II transform into R&B's wife and R&B tamed by his girls - one on hand the rest in the making...😳😳

All the baggage that comes with it. Our lives swing so much with marriage and I'm really curious to see how these 2 weather the storm and whip up more between themselves. 😆

BTW may you can add one more thing to you list - I actually refreshed my bookmarks and read the jaipur bit on International Roaming rates from a god forsaken airport...was worth it and right now hiding from my bill.

My family moved continents and my husband heaves a sigh of relief that we are now wifi'ed where we live!

Happy Valentine's Nisha and all of you folks on the thread!❤️

Scribble-Tweety loved you pic - Nisha I think you have the illustrator for your book's cover!