You and I Collide - IshRa OS (2/3/15) Replies From Pg 7. PMs Sent :)

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This is emotional, beautiful and perfect. The instinctive and private confession touched me.

And I agree no grand gestures are required. Moments like this are way more special!!

Beautifully and brilliantly written!!

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

thats wonderful...

u expresed very well...i love raman's toughts abt ruhi and adi...

hw he confesd to sihu was simple and good...

their nok jhok and girl friend and wife was lovely...

their romance is unique..

ru meri jaan...u r supr black mailer...nd soul of ishra...

loved it...

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

I guess this is the first time I am commenting on your work. However, confession time, have been a silent stalker of your work for a while now. Guilty as charged my lord.😛😳

But this one actually takes the cake and I had to come out of this hidden stalker mode and comment on this brilliant post.

This has everything which is missing in YHM these days

The old YHM feel, the natural and obvious course this couple's journey should take, the natural confession which is so like a mature couple.

There was a time I used to be quite active on LU and other threads and anyone familiar with my old rantings will know that how much did I crave for a silent, mature and subtle confession. No loud sets ups, no malls converted into airports, no unnecessary interrupted coffee or dinner/champaigne dates ... just the two of them spending some with each other and say the words ... may be not even that .. a thirty plus married man with two kids does not climb the top of a cliff to say I LOVE YOU ...

And this piece ... how I wish I could actually kidnap the cvs and ask them to include this scene ij the series at gunpoint (with the way their brains seem to be on a vacation, this can only be achieved at gunpoint 😆)

For the first time, I was happy that they had an interruption ... Ruhi .. the most adorable bacha. The natural setup of parents trying to find privacy while their little one cuddles between them.

The confession ... ☺️ .. THEIR reactions ... mixture of awkwardeness, blush, lust, love ... pure bliss. I had a perrenial smile plastered to my face while reading this part. Can assure you that for me it is officially "TO HELL WITH WHATEVER CRAP DRAMAFEST HAPPENS IN SHOW", this one is what I will come back to when I want to dream about this couple and smile.

Am sure by now you will know why am reluctant to comment coz when I do, am a classic patient of verbal diarrhoea 😆😳

So, will stop my bak bak now.

Hope yo read many more from you and smile shamlessly.

Cheers

Bhanu.

Edited by btalwar - 10 years ago

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

aww thats beautiful..

😳

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wow ...Just Wow...

What did I just read...& more importantly why are you not the writer of the show...

You have described everything so beautifully...& it's so easy to visualize...

The way he came to her side...
The way they talked about Shagun...
The way they confessed their feelings...
The way Ruhi took a photo...
Everything was just perfect...

Thank you for this wonderful piece of work...

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cloudy24

@cloudy24

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

This s not understated. This s more romantic than those big efforts 👏 i read this early morning half asleep after i read this i woke up with a big smile 😊 thanks for that. Superb👍🏼

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

This was totally adorable and in my mind, so fitting for this couple! Sigh, all I can do is gush after reading this!

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ipournami

@ipournami

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Excellent, awesome os. Simply loved it. Its perfect. You really are a gifted writer. Am in ishra land. Do write more

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Dmug

@Dmug

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Oh so beutifully written!! Transported to ishraland!! I so want this to happen in the show!! Confession is so simple yet magical!! I have always imagined them romancing while ruhi is sleeping besides!! 😳

How i wish we get to c such magical moments!!!

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

This is the first time I have read something by you and I have to say your words have smitten me.

This song is one of my absolute favorites and I love to croon to it too and to read an os inspired by it was beyond beautiful. Just the title had me grinning from ear to ear and when I started reading it the grin refused to leave my face.

Thank you so very much for a beautiful, beautiful OS - it just made my day.

Love,

Aani