You and I Collide - IshRa OS (2/3/15) Replies From Pg 7. PMs Sent :)

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virgo_gurl

@virgo_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Eeeks that was so awesome! You are an amazing writer 👍🏼

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maaloo

@maaloo

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This one is absolutely amazing. So talented to weave such a beautiful story.. Loved it!!!

So very intense at the same time subtle. They dont need any grand gestures to confess their feelings.. they already know it in their hearts.. its just a matter of getting to verbalize it.

Loved the natural flow of events that led to the declaration.. which makes it much more toe-curling and romantic. Not planned, not grand... and with ruhi beside them.. it just somehow seemed complete..

Would be great if you could post this link in twitter or somewhere like that.. so that the CVs could read it.. and get some ideas as to how to proceed with a story instead of all the ring-around-the-rosies that we have had..

Keep 'em coming.. 😊

Edited by maaloo - 10 years ago

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Res.

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This is so beautiful Neha! Very well done, seriously.

I love the 'extraordinary in the ordinary ' kind of deal you have here. Very beautiful. Very realistic.

I appreciate him talking it all out and asking her directly and not letting her void it. We nneed that directness and understanding on screen.. not just the constant praising- hat's just a copout.

And the moment about Subbu- perfect- love. Because even after everything that feeling of ' thank you for your stupidity now you have 10 seconds before I break ur kneecaps' is still there. Some fans think Subbu is a nonentity now... I disagree and I appreciate that inclusion here.

The ILYs simple, poignant and just perfect. Love the way it came out- love their reaction, love his fumbling explanations of wanting the perfect 'moment' and her dismissal of same.

Love the little moment of affection, not much rally but for them, in their frame of mind, after everything they've been though- beautiful.

and i appreciate Raman's retrospective about his worthiness- you know that's always something that I adore about them both the sense of awe and unworthiness in this this love , in this person... and you described it so beautifully.

And finally , finally- Ru- my perfect princess. Loved his grumblings about her as well as her little moment at the end. I read that and immediately thought of her comment the other day about what Papa does with Ishimaa... 🤣

All in all a terrific job. With a beautiful title... had the song playing while i read this BTW- mood music was perfect!😉

I bow to your awesomeness!

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This OS took me to a dreamy world. It was mindblowing.

Just what I needed before going to bed, I'm sure I'll have sweet dreams now.

The confession was so simple but yet meaningful and it just felt right.

It was PERFECT👏

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Wela

@Wela

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome!! Here's too your muse coming true!!

One of the best confessions I have read 👏

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Perfect. Just perfect. This is the confession OS I wish I had written. Loved it.

👏 👏 👏 👏

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

This is so romantic...👏👏

loved ti this how it should be ..i don't want any grand gestures for confession..but simply suttle way too good..

i like it that you had ruhi also with them their Raman's anchor in life.

loved the frustration and Raman saying ruhi is not sleeping with her parents tomorrow 😆

and in the end choti mirchi..taking a pic😆..too cute😊

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yshu8

@yshu8

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Surely so surreal,

That theme of mohabbatein ,Raman's love for adi, guilt abt how he cud never give back wat his little angel ruhi gave to him, how he is one lucky man to have ishita in his life ,all just in one go

Take a bow

Its novel to see that part of Raman ,which concerned more abt ishita's insecurity of having shagun around, a much needed convo, that was

The mere thought of his ,to make the moment special for her, thinking to himself ' for once it has to be abt her ,not him' ,somehow tugs at my heart ,more than anything

Again that was so ishra ,to have those coy talks amidst the most sensible talk

Loved it