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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

awesumm updatee!! loved how u wrote raman's emotions running inside his head! poor guy!

loved ruhi-ishima part playing with raman! ;) :P

cont soon.. waiting for the next part!

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Aani, you rockstar, page 19 pe updated!

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Loved Raman's "why me".It was perfect.bichara shagun ko jagah dikhate dikhate khud phas gaya.ha ha ha.sent buddy request.

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Hey Aani,

Brilliant follow up to the start, loved the trepidations that both felt and loved that cute little awkwardness. I am musical person and I know so are you so I will share the song that came to my mind while reading part 2 of your story.

Ye shaam mastaanee, madahosh kiye jaaye
Muze dor koee khinche, teree or liye jaaye

Baat jab main karu, muze rok letee hain kyon
Teree mithhee najar, muze tok detee hain kyo
Teree hayaa, teree sharam teree kasam mere hothh siye jaaye

Yek ruthhee huyee, takadeer jaise koee
Khaamosh ayese hain too, tasaweer jaise koee
Teree najar, ban ke jubaan lekin tere paigaam diye jaaye

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

gosh, this was such an awesome part👏
raman-shagun were hilarious...😆😆
i think this is the 1 time where i actually enjoyed shagun's presence and only because of raman😎
raman's state was wonderfully described😆👍🏼
looking forward to the next 1...😃
take care

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Awesomely written...every emotion of his portrayed beautifully...

his convo with Shagun and throwing her out was superb!

loved it!

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Wow wonderful really loved how you portrayed there(ishra) emotions there fear there embarrassment at same time there desire Beautifully portrayed 👏

Well Done Awesome update 😊

thanks Kavya 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
Loved it @ekpaheli...you have beautifully portrayed the inner turmoil of Raman..mind blowing..plss update soon..i will be waiting..n thnx for the pm..

thanks N 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
beautiful part...
loved all of his thoughts specially the cursing angles and stars..:P
the hesitation..and all the emotions...kudos to ur writing
lovely

the last line was just perfect..her eyes did nt accuse him or question him was so nice

thanks Sahiba 😊