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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Lucky.13
Loved it
awesome update
pls continue soon

thanks Lucky😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
You are such a gifted writer...
It's always a pleasure to read your work...

Each and every thought and feelings of Raman are wonderfully described...It's almost like a movie unveiling in-front of me...
When do we get to this stage in the show...
How wonderful it would be , if you were the writer of the show...😛

Can we get Ishita's views too, on this...

Thank you for writing this...

thanks Anuhyaa 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings
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take your time Lia 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Ohgod!
Aani Minnie 🤗🤗🤗
I'm still not sure why u were unsure, cos, this, my girl is AWESOME!!!!!

You have brought out the hesitation and Raman's point of view so beautifully.. His protective thoughts as a husband, his words to Shagun and thereafter his realisation of what he said and the way he said it...👏 👏 👏

Girl, You are simply the best!!! I may not be able to catch the next few updates instantly but these two leave no doubt in my mind that the rest of the chapters are going to blow everyone's minds here completely 😳

I've said it before, and I'll say it again.. Its one thing to write trip, fall catch romance every single day, and completely another to write emotions other than lust in a manner that can be imagined and felt good about without being vulgar.. You, my dear excel in that!!! What you write is like poetry!!! 👏

Muuaahhh

Love u loads Aani.. 🤗 will not miss the update at any cost!! But may miss commenting!! So maafi for that

Bhu 🤗

Jesus you, Janu and the gang are gonna make sure I have a bloated head one day for sure ☺️ 😆

thank you so much for this praise I am glad you could connect with the emotions that are all over the place in this one and will get even more crazy as we proceed 😉😈

Like I already mentioned I was nervous about this one because it is perhaps one of the rawest pieces I have written. There' a collision here about the physical aspect of love versus the emotional one...the undeniable lure vs the need of the moment.

I hope I make sense about what I have written above as we proceed 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: exploringmyself
Amazing!!!!

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Reserved,
I shall read this and edit it, soon ;)

take your time dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: ummisco
You portrayed Raman's emotions and feelings beautifully...
Ishita is an angel sent to him in disguise...she understands him so well that she sees through him...
As i said before u r an amazing writer...

thanks Ummi 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
Mindblowing update
Too good
Beautifully describe
Each and every
Word...
All the scenes r
Awesome full on
Superbb update soon
N pm me
Take care

thanks Meenu 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: swathibalan
Awesome Followup Aani!🤗
I loved how you detailed his emotions. You have the ability to affect your readers with your skilled writing and thats the mark of a great writer!

While reading I could feel the myriad emotions that Raman was going through right from being defensive and protective to being reflective and skeptical; also embarrassed and concerned at the same time while trying to tame his unbridled desire for her!
I almost felt sorry for his plight and for a minute agreed with him when he complained "Why me?" (Almost because Puttar needs to get moving now!!😛)
More so as her being bruised was not what he had envisioned the first time he would undress her, so there's a war waged between his heart and mind and you brought it out brilliantly
And amidst this war he is still concerned about her comfort, her acceptance to this which speaks volumes about how much he values every emotion of hers and how much he loves her
And the answer he got in her eyes shows hers!

I also loved how Ishita put him at ease on the way back, reading his mind by just looking at his face, because she knows her husband too well
The parallel exchange between the couple and between parents and their daughter in the car was cute
And the inevitable "What If" that comes to his mind everytime he sees this woman handling his daughter, his family and his life with love was beautiful and made me sigh!!

Again Great writing Aani.. Waiting to know what happens next..
Love 🤗

Swathi thank you so very much for this comment 🤗

it means a lot to me that I can manifest what' in my head in my words and my readers get it 😃 the one thing a writer...even a FF writer would be bummed out by is learning his/her readers cant connect or understand the written word - the emotions behind them so thanks a ton for saying that you could feel the emotions right along with Raman ranging from his protective stance to his embarassment to his turmoil at being in this crucial moment with Ishita.

The most defining aspect of a marriage is that its a relationship where you can bare yourself - literally - in every possible way; share yourself with your partner in every conceivable manner - its the beauty of it and hence...hence I suppose we say marriage is a life altering experience - to entrust yourself so completely to another human being, how can it not be - mind, body, heart and soul - you belong to someone and someone belongs to you...

What Raman feels in this moment had to be conveyed in a way that would highight his plight - he is obviously freaked out by the HOW - the way they landed here but he must have thought of this...only this situation demands his restraint...I hope I dont let you guys down as we proceed 😳