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Juggaadd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Awesome update Aani.

I could imagine Karan as Raman showing all those emotions specially the part where he wonders "Why me?" and the one-liners.😆

How true! Logic does fly away faster than light when Raman gets emotional. But they are not showing that logical and practical side of him when he is not emotional. He would have stopped that stupid plan of the women of his house.

I find it hard to believe that every day they sleep next to each other just like that. They have a great level of comfort and they share a room. What are they waiting for?

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Superb Aani...

But everything is when ever you write anything whether an OS SS or an analysis... I miss those @11 LU.

Sorry for not unresing after the previous update.

Raman's POV inner turmoil is so well described.ishita knows how to bring raman out of his guilt...

Ruhi is saving grace as always.

Last line was best

Will wait for the next update...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

very well written..too good..👏

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

awww raman's pov it was beautiful
loved it

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smilydear

@smilydear

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Wonderful update as always,

Raman's insight is well written.

Thanks for PM.

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

i always have to res after reading your updates- i just have this huge smile and no words :)

so now that i'm little coherent ;), i can say loved it!

raman's outburst makes so much more sense now. that shagun- hmph returning favor to ishita indeed!😡 i was cheering with pompoms at every answer raman gave 😃😛 really wanted there to be something about "ruhi's mom won". delusional woman.

though i have to say good thing adi and ruhi weren't curious then. children ask the best, or worst, questions 😉

poor raman lol at his "why me"

continue soon

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Love this, very sweet and realistic.

His fears, questions, hesitation, reflection , embarrassment.. all are beautifully described.

Even as a standalone the title of the story works for this so well...

Well Done!

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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khushi

@khushi_shankar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

You are an amazing writer. Everything is written with so much detail that even a person who does not watch the show or know the character will understand this story. This is easily one of the best stories I have read on the forum!

I can actually visualize this story in my head while reading. It is written very well.

You will be continuing this, right? If yes, then please do update soon, and add me to your PM list. I'd really like ot read more of your stories.

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Beautiful writing Aani. The way you write about Raman I can understand his plight and now he got a better life much much beautiful than his past. Oh he imagine many thing about him and Ishu so now the time had come hope he help her to change the cloth and she also permit him to do many thing for her.😳 Ishu make a smart move indirect to tell Raman to do all the work for her and himself so naughty too😉 thank you so much for this wonderful OS and have a beautiful weekend dear.🤗🤗

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

finally i was able to read this part. sorry for late reply bt caught with board prep bt now i am free from practicls. seriously u explained ramans turnmoil vry beautifully bt so sad that cvs didnt used this oppurtunity. god knows when wll they remembr that yhm is all abt ishraru. anyway back to update so it was beautifuul one. plz update soon

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