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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: Samilicious..
OMG OMG OMG Aaminah, after writing a 5000 words of torturous essay on depression and then finally getting time to read this chapter. It has left me SPEECHLESS, I tell you what this has to be my favourite chapter. I literally read this chapter several times, everything was perfect...Raman meeting Ishita despite being ill *Ayyeee, how adorable is Raman* All I want to do is hug Raman, this guy has to be my favourite character, all thanks to YOUUU... ☺️ I absolutely loved the way Ishita took care of Raman 😳

My favourite quotes from the chapter...

"I have heartache too." Awww Raman, my heartaches for you 😭
"Then you came along and you changed everything. You changed me and then you thought the worst of me." She said after a moment of pause. "And then only I realized what I felt in those twelve years was nothing close to how I felt in those twelve months with you."
"If he shattered me, you broke me."

I completely understand Ishita's plight...Aaminah you've done complete justice in the way you portrayed Ishita's feelings. SHEER BRILLIANCE, I can't commend you enough 👏 👏 👏

Whenever I think of your Ishita-Raman in this FF, it reminds me of this quote:

"We have a complicated little thing. It is a small flame burning the world, and it burns the same way her heart feels when it is alone. We are meant to be hard and when I look at her eyes; she make me feel as if I know nothing at all.

Love is a violent flower; blooming in the middle of my bones, and loving her was something else, it was some kind of heavy rain that was meant to flood my empty soul."
- r.m.drake
For some reason I loving this depressing phase between Ishita-Raman, I don't want happy moments to come yet (LOL seems like I'm the only one 😆) Aaminah, can I please demand another sad chapter and then end it with a sad one 😛😳
Aaminah hun can I say you are the BESSST... You are officially the female version of John Green 🤗 🤗🤗
I can't wait to read what your imagination presents next, I shall be waiting very very patiently in the hope for another sad one (I'm such a sad soul 🤣)
P.S. Thank you thank you thank you thank you SOOO MUCHHH and I love you 🤗❤️

First of all if you could muster enough strength to write a detailed comment after such a long essay, I must thank you!

Haha you are not alone samiya, as you read my other work you'll realize I'm more into dark and twisted stories.

Since you have mentioned so much about this john green I found myself looking for his books online but the only thing that made me close the tab was the first person narration. I don't know why but I think reading a book from only a protagonist's point of view, I feel others' have been compromised. Nonetheless I fell in love immediately with his quotes which I found very intriguing. This reminds me, thank you for sharing this beautiful quote.

Also please share any good reads because its been a month at least since I read something good.

Oh, and thank you for such praise and branding me as female version of john green. He definitely is a prolific author and if I could come this close to his works, its an accomplishment!

(The author takes bribe in terms of honest opinions and quotes) 😳

Your request for another sad chapter has been accepted.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: Samilicious..
Finally updated my post on pg. 118 😛

P.S. I'm having the best time of my life reading your work...I can't believe I've finished Mirrors in a day. Your writing has got me addicted

Why, thank you!

I'm glad you liked mirrors, I'm also thinking of reading it one of these days.

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Fiction_Lover

@Fiction_Lover

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#853

Amna when are you going to update the next part? Now that its going to be something positive or their full fledged reunion, I can't wait to read further.😳

Every time I see you replying to comments I get butterflies in my stomach😆 with the thought that its going to be updated in some time😳

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Fiction_Lover
Amna when are you going to update the next part? Now that its going to be something positive or their full fledged reunion, I can't wait to read further.😳
Every time I see you replying to comments I get butterflies in my stomach😆 with the thought that its going to be updated in some time😳

Aww monika you know I hate to refuse, honestly but I don't want to disappoint you all either with a hasty write up so I'm going to update once I'm satisfied. As always it needs a little bit of editing.

I promise to update tomorrow, pakka. Insha Allah.

P. S I have decided to end it in another two chapters so I hope that will cheer you up for now :)

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Fiction_Lover

@Fiction_Lover

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Aww monika you know I hate to refuse, honestly but I don't want to disappoint you all either with a hasty write up so I'm going to update once I'm satisfied. As always it needs a little bit of editing.

I promise to update tomorrow, pakka. Insha Allah.

P. S I have decided to end it in another two chapters so I hope that will cheer you up for now :)

Yayy! So I ll get to read more of my favourite FF

P.S I was going to ask you for an epilogue after the last part.😳

You are really very sweet. I have loved & cherished all your stories. Have read them repeatedly. The way you write & the way you interact with your readers it all depicts what a beautiful soul you would be.😊

God Bless you :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: Fiction_Lover

Yayy! So I ll get to read more of my favourite FF
P.S I was going to ask you for an epilogue after the last part.😳
You are really very sweet. I have loved & cherished all your stories. Have read them repeatedly. The way you write & the way you interact with your readers it all depicts what a beautiful soul you would be.😊
God Bless you :)

Epilogue eh? Sigh. I don't promise but I shall try. Because these happy moments are a bit hard to imagine, you know I'm more of a sadist😉

Thanks again Monika!

Such beautiful praise! You guys flatter me. 😳

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Samilicious..

@Samilicious..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: aaminah123

First of all if you could muster enough strength to write a detailed comment after such a long essay, I must thank you!

Haha you are not alone samiya, as you read my other work you'll realize I'm more into dark and twisted stories.

Since you have mentioned so much about this john green I found myself looking for his books online but the only thing that made me close the tab was the first person narration. I don't know why but I think reading a book from only a protagonist's point of view, I feel others' have been compromised. Nonetheless I fell in love immediately with his quotes which I found very intriguing. This reminds me, thank you for sharing this beautiful quote.

Also please share any good reads because its been a month at least since I read something good.

Oh, and thank you for such praise and branding me as female version of john green. He definitely is a prolific author and if I could come this close to his works, its an accomplishment!

(The author takes bribe in terms of honest opinions and quotes) 😳

Your request for another sad chapter has been accepted.

Firstly, a question- Is it Aaminah or Amna? Apologies if I have been saying it incorrectly 😳

Thank me, WHY? I'm used to blabbering and how could I not for you 😳

Ahh YES, I should've guessed that you may not like reading in first person narration since you write in third person. I tell you what, it's harder to write in third person...AND you have nailed it sooo. You are damn perfect & talented with your writing skills Mashallah 👏

Coming back to John Green... Agree his books are in first person narration but, he provides us with a really compelling first person narration where a unique character is giving you their take on something that is happening, and yet it's clear to the reader that it's not the whole story. You're getting a biased look at the world, which is central to the appeal of the first person narrative. It's just his writing style, quite unique!

OK, I'm going to recommend you with some of the books that I loved...

Firstly, please start of with the Fault in our stars...Just give it a try.

The Fault in Our Stars was a beautiful novel. The characters are beautifully drawn and heartbreakingly realistic. Ultimately Green strives to portray his characters not as those fighting cancer are often shown, forced into playing the role of brave and wise soldiers stoically enduring untold suffering. He shows them as they truly are, just people, beautiful wonderful people but people none the less. They have no choice but to keep fighting because they are given no other option and because to admit defeat means death. It is not their struggle that defines them but who they are in spite of it, managing to live and to love and even have fun and laugh. They use every moment given to them in he most beautiful way possible and that is what makes them exceptional.

Truly, this is a remarkable book and words cannot express how I feel towards it.

Secondly, do read The book Thief...

Very rarely a book comes out that steals my breath away. The BookThief, by Markus Zusak is a revelation. Narrated by Death, this story follows Leisel as she steals books in Nazi Germany while she and her best friend Rudy discover the power of words, language and friendship. Zusak's writing is mesmerizing; it's sarcastic, emotional, sophisticated and wondrous.

Thirdly, A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini...

This book moved me to tears, it is truly a remarkable and beautifully crafted novel. At times Hosseini paints harrowing and brutal scenes but always retains, through the characters of Mariam and Laila, humanity, spirit and above all love. There were chapters in this novel through which I literally held my breath, wishing with all my heart that what was unfolding would not, could not happen. It is very easy for those of us lucky enough to live in safety to visualise Afghanistan as a brutal, forsaken place, but this novel shows us something more. It forces the reader to acknowledge and recognise not only the suffering of people in our war torn world but something else, the human capacity for survival, forgiveness and love.

I've got loads more...Let me know what you think of the ones I've recommended 😛😉

@Bold- OMG 😲 Am I dreaming or something? You've actually accepted my demand Awww Shukriyaji, I really really really appreciate it. You've literally made my day ❤️ Ahh I can't describe my happiness right now 😆 😳

In regards to an epilogue, only write it if you think it's necessary... If your planning on ending it abruptly then an epilogue is needed. If you do complete justice to the ending (Which you will be doing) then don't include one. 😛

P.S. I'll be looking forward to your reply...🤗🤗

xoxo

Edited by Samilicious.. - 10 years ago

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#858

Amna! Wow... Don't even know how to tell you how much I love this. It's os natural, and his sincerity and desperation, her heartbreak and reluctantance and their love just shines through ... terrific job!😊

Finally they are talking and we can see their differences in approach to the event and how much each of them were just waiting for the other to make it okay.. neither is wrong or right in that expectation at least and it's great that at least they are beginning to communicate. That's always been the problem between these two and will alway be so I suppose- it hopefully one day they will address this.

Anyway, I am really looking forward to the next part.😊

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago