Whilst, others are feeling heartbroken seeing Raman sad...I'm feeling the opposite. I'll be honest with you, when I requested for another sad chapter, I thought it'll be another chapter where Raman is trying to win Ishita back. BUT, guess what? It wasn't. This chapter was beyond my expectations, I never wanted Ishita to stay back and the fact that she didn't was like a cherry on top of a cake. I've always wanted Ishita to realise Raman's feelings...
I couldn't have described it better than you did, I sincerely applaud you Amna.
"You have flaws and so do I. In our might to hide our own, we begin to scratch one another's. Hurting and bruising other without us knowing it. And just when we stand bare of our souls in front of each other, do we realize what harm we had brought to our own selves, because you are now me and I am you. Only when I see my soul's reflection in yours do I realize, we are one"--- This extract is beautifully written to perfection...Considering its taken from your OS "You & Me", it has intrigued me to check that out...Will have to stalk your index 😛
After reading this chapter, I couldn't help but listen to Stay by Rihanna...The song suited the situation perfectly! Yet again Amna, your work always manages to remind me of something. And a confession, this happens very rarely to me...
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JF8BRvqGCNs[/YOUTUBE]
The fact that you were trying to make Ishita realise Raman's place in her life...I couldn't help but share this beautiful quote:
"I fell in love the way you fall asleep. Slowly, and then all at once."- Hazel
This quote totally describes Ishita's feelings! Amna you completely nailed it with this chapter, I can't think of anything else to say other than and 

"He was hallucinating, more often these days, thanks to the sedatives he was prescribed for his indisposition he gathered now as he recalled once before he had seen his wife. He had imagined her sitting by his side before he fell asleep. Not only that, he had also felt her stroking his hair lovingly. He kept the official documents inside the folder and opened the door of his room only to find his wife standing in red. He shook his head and started to close the door again.
He knew he was dreaming." --- In regards to him hallucinating, I have a feeling that Ishita will actually be the in the room. Though, I hope I am proved wrong, kinda hoping that you'll show a dream...
P.S. Since you are not watching the show since its complete bullshit...Can I recommend you to watch a pakistani show (not sure whether you've seen them before or not), It's called Zindagi Gulzar Hai. It's amazing, give it a try and join me in the discussions 😳
Pheww. Gosh thats such a long post...apologies for my blabbering 😆 I'm not going to say update soon because I want to prolong the last ever update for this FF 🥺 It's been a beautiful and incredible journey...All thanks to you hun!!
Audios until next time... 🤗
xoxo
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