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AARMAY1

@AARMAY1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

amazing beautifully written...
emotional ... feeling sad for Ishita

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smrithy

@DiVAnCRazyFAn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

this os was really needed at a time like this yaar!! thank u soo much!!😭

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
Heart touching update...
the title is juast apt sakshi...
Ishita's pain u have pictured perfectly...
Her sufferings, her insecurities, esp Raman speaking with those harsh words without her mistake she listened everything...
Raman couldn't see her pain which she is going through, i feel whole bhallas needed a reality check...
the way u showed the ishita's pain with each and single line of her's was just perfectly fitted the plot.
the best way you showed while she was maintaining silence in house...
u have shown wonderful this concept with all the elements👏👏...
shagun was dramebaaz...😡😡
All the convo just so good...
i really felt bad when the ishita said- But I am happy being Ishima of Ruhi and I owe you my life for giving me Ruhi isliye i will always respect and love you.
hope in the show too, ishita maintain silence...

sakshi- this was amazing piece of writing⭐️...
well done yaar...

Thank you so much Akshatha..I am really happy i could connect it to your heart.. Ishita's pain i felt by us all thats why it has come out in a way or other..

I believe her importance is yet to be completely realized by the Bhallas and its really important to spare her from the boy

Thank you so much for commenting and reading buddy. you never fail to put a smile on my face.. 😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shalz_123
i m in tears..literally...thank u for tht amazing piece of writing...true ishita cant leave too... she cant be selfish n leave with ruhi...n for ruhi she cant leave without her too... i hope raman redeems himself... n forgetting somethig like this is hard..very hard...

Aww I am sorry to bring tears in your eyes but it shows how much you and i in fact all of us are connected to ishita..

I know Ruhi is the mere reason she has beared all the unending pains given by Bhallas from the day she met them and will continue to bear all the pains for her daughter..She cant take her along because of the goodness in her.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.. 😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Angel13
Amazing Os
Loved it
Really it made me cry
Could feel ishu pain
Hope you continue this

I would try my best to continue it and give a meaningful end.. I dont know though how much justice would i be able to do towards it..

Thank you so much for reading and loving it..😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: shravsss
you bought out Ishita's pain so evidently in this write up...
grt one yarr...
Everyone has a limit to bear things...
Ishu character should also have it...
Raman must undrstnd her inner turmoil...
Toshi ji must undrstnd her dil's goodness, whom she herslf considers as Yashoda mayiyya...
Ruhi is d only saviour she has in that whole bhalla clan...

good one dear...
looking forward fr ur update...
do pm me dear...
loved it...

Yeah that was the same thought in my mind. Ishita's importance is yet to be realized by her family. She should side herself and then the people will realize that the things could have gone to far extend if she wont handle them.

Will definitely PM you if i could do justice to the next part i am planning to write.

Thank you so much 😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Veeann
Beautifully written and so heart touching. 💔

Thank you so much😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Goosecool
Its very heartbreaking to see ishita Luke this... but she should take her own stand...

I know its really sad to see her like that.. but her silence and her patience is the only stand that could bring out her value in bhalla house.

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: shavi2311
Very emotnal yar...
Loved it...
Thy desrves her silent traetment...

Nd she cant live ruhi... Nd ruhi always angel to ishita...

Raman realised wht he had done...
Any one cant b strng always...

Pls continue nd pm me... I want to see wht raman vl do

Thanks Shravani. Yeah she cant just take Ruhi with her just like that..

Would definitely try to continue.. Thanks for reading and commenting 😊