TS ~My Heart Aches As Well~ *completed* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
I had tears in my eyes while reading this update..
Heart touching update..
Plss do continue if u could plss pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh


wat u have written were the same thoughts in my mind.. Each and every word...
but slight edition to your wordings;
@blue: my addition.

She sighed sarcastically..

Ishita:- Talk.. Hope we had ever talked Raman.. Half of our problems would have been vanished right there.. But we don't prefer to talk. Rather fighting is our forte.. But I wont fight.. Coz may be I would show another sign of being an disregarding mother..

Raman:- you are taking things far ahead..

Ishita:- I am just walking on the terms set by you.. I am here to be a mother who keeps an eye to the kids of the house and know about their whereabouts without going near to them. Who feeds them on time. Who ensures their homework is done properly. Who is not supposed to scold them on their mistakes. I am trying to follow all these rules.. I am doing things staying in my limits...

Raman:- Ishita look you are not understanding my point of view.. I was in problem sometime. Atleast try to understand me..

Ishita:- This is the only problem Raman.. You have accepted That Ishita is a strong stone who can bear the hits to infinite extend.. She doesn't has any right to get hurt..You have forgotten that I am a human too...

Raman hamesha main aap ke saath dena chahthi hu, aap ka dard mitana chthi hu, but It was always about you Raman.. Always about you.. Your divorce, your ex wife, your son, your pain, your sorrows.. I never existed anywhere.. But I am happy being Ishima of Ruhi and I owe you my life for giving me Ruhi isliye i will always respect and love you. But sorry.. I cant be the stone anymore...

lekin aap fikar mat kariye mein aap aur aap ke bete ke beech na aaunga..

vaise uss din aap mere zimedari bahut achi tarah se yaad dilaya hai ki main sirf ruhi ki khyal rakna aur dusaro ki zindagi mein dakalandaz nahi karna.

Aur ye baat bhi ehsaas hua ki kisiko aapne itna kareeb aane dena kyunki jis insaan hum itna pyaar karte hai wahi insaan hume usse kayi jyaada dukh deta hai.

par ye baat mere zindagi mein pehli baar nahi hai lekin dard hone ka wajah ek hi hai(stating abount her inability of being mother)

She had left the room leaving him in tears... Tears of guilt.. Tears of fear of losing his life once again.. Tears to see her pain.. Tears that had taken his blindness with them. He has to take a step urgently coz whatever was happening wasn't perfect and Ishita likes perfection.

That it😃

Edited by krish77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
This was amazing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Could you please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
This is beautiful..
U have described Ishitas pain so amazingly...
Sometimes silence and indifference is the best answer...
I just love it...👏...
Hope the Bhalla's realise her pain in the show soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its perfect... Seriously how much a person can bear.. Ishita should stand for her selfrespect... And her behaviour is perfect towards the family.. They r dounle standard people..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Just Awesome. How well you described Ishita's pain tears rolled out while reading. Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
It was heart-wrenching! Hope you continue soon.. Want to see the way Raman redeems his deeds
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Totally loved it..
Awesome and fabulous..
The pain of Ishu was well expressed in your words..
Hope the family also understands this in the show..
Brilliant writing...👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Havent watched the episode but your story touched my heart...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
seriously its a needed os ... Really Raman disappointed me... Feel very very pity fr Ishita...

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