Ishra TS: Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna Last part - Pg 25

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Beautiful beautiful beautiful! What more can I saw for this sheer piece of perfection! ❤️ In love! ❤️

Ishita and Raman's emotions were beautifully captured! Loved Ruhi and her innocence. 😳

Continue soon. Waiting to know how Raman sorts out everything.

~ Mrina <3

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Aww Vids ...this was so good. They are both missing each other and realizing how much life differs being away from each other. Just what is needed in the show. A few cute scenes of two people in love ...missing each other & realizing their worth 😳

Can't wait to read further. Bhalla's daily routine will be in for a change, they in for the rude shock that jhelofying Shagun & Adi without Ishita will be. Bet Shags will try to seduce RKB too (this I expect to see in the show too ...that woman is completely shameless). And Raman & Ishita ...bet their next convo's over text or phone would be full of love & cutely irritating 😆.

And the running into his arms ... oh please please write that in the end 😳😳

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

wow... exceptional superb...

OMG!!!! amazing piece of writing👏👏...

the way you pictured small small gestures just incredible⭐️...

Raman realizing adi mind set was nice...

shagun just double headed just an drama queen, she still thinks

she can make him as her puppet dumb😡...

awwah ruhi is just soni pari❤️, the care and concern for ishita always the best...

Raman the way he was visualize and feeling her in room just fab, the way you wrote each and every single thing in such a detailed way, just mesmerizing...

when he took towel, arranged her saree with his suits,hair strands hayee just lovely...

IshRa were thinking about each other, when is said- I miss you madrasan! Come home soon!", - "Madrasan" echoed in her ears. it was amazing...

the concern for each other, with the msgs so good shown...

waiting for the next update...

eagerly want to know what Raman does...

continue soon...

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesummm update!! The best thing wht I loved ws Raman's thoughts abt Ishita n her things in their room n simultaneously with Ishita..her cough, she sensing raman calling her Madrasan n their "Miss u"!

Woww! I loved it totally!

Shagun n Adi... highest level of pukish feel for me!

Cont soon.. waiting for the next part! Looking forward on how Raman is gonna set everything right n get bk his Madrasan soon!

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Bombaytola

@Bombaytola

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Awesome work Vidya pls continue soon cant wait. HAd a request if u could PM that would be great. also dou have an Index of ur work ? If u could PM that would be awesome. Ur stories are so close to what my heart wants to see in this show.😛😛

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fluffles

@fluffles

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Awesome update! Please update soon!! I was mesmerized by ur writing, you are amazing!

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Pooja

@Divan.Pooja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

It was perfect, you have prorated the emotions beautifully

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

aww both miss each other 😭

continue soon

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Dmug

@Dmug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Awesome!! I liked second part more!! I clould feel their pain!! Amazing writing! Continue soon!! Cant wait!!

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ANU

@banksii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

AWESOME UPDATE VIDHYA...U HAVE BRILLIANTLY CAPTURED THE EMOTIONS OF BOTH ESP RAMAN...I CD VISUALIZE EACH AND EVERY SCENE OF RAMAN IN HIS BEDROOM...U R SUCH A TALENTED WRITER...LOVED IT DEAR...UPDATE SOON...

Edited by banana.ishra - 10 years ago

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