Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82) - Page 34

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

nice one buddy.

Raman's emotions are clearly mentioned .

Ishita's insecurities are shown well.

She will not let any one take her.

Dialogue in the end was nice.

Ruhi can run invetween both houses.

Next it would be tough for Ishita to make ruhi ready .

she would be running in two hiuses.

Raman getting soft corner o n Ishita.

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">beautiful update...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">IshRu scenes perfectly portrait,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">the emotional part was brilliant esp...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">insecurities of ishita was really very nice...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Raman getting know about Ishita was really good...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Ruhi lines was just the best ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">i loved Raman lines-"Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">WE words used perfectly yaar</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">just amazing...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">well written...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">p.s - i feel next person who is writing if possible make IshRa fall in love with each other...</font>

Originally posted by: nividances

"Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"

This was just magical. Perfect way to end.

I really liked seeing Raman softening towards Ishita a bit, seeing how much she loves Ruhi, and most importantly admitting that she may love Ruhi more than him.

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely update Anshi glad Raman can see the bond Ruhi and Iahita share together so he knows that not only he love Ruhi and set receive uncondition love but Ishu too get same equal share or may be little bit more than him good point dear.Now Atlease he accept that it is better that Ruhi had stay with Ishu than go to orphanage so MU is clear. Like to see next part that Raman try to get along with Ishu and her family to made up for his MU and he can slowly develope some feeling for Ishu may be get some light moment and romantic next update.😊

Originally posted by: Tulipkhanna

Beautiful update, loved it.

Originally posted by: victo

Beautiful update

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Wonderful update anshi

yaa...it was much needed to take story to next level

and raman trying to woo ishita is a great idea

am already imagining the scenes

cant wait to see how the next writer takes it

loved how you explained ishraru emotions

and that goodnyt part was really beautiful

good job anshi

i liked your writing

and pls if u write somethung next tym..do let me know through a pm pls

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

omg anshi this was awesome
so emotional
i love d convo of ishru
hayeee n twist
we r designed to b together was bang on
loved it