Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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Nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: shavi2311
congrts to new dazler...
very emotnal part...
loved it...

thankyou so much...
glad u loved it..

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
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It was an amazing update nikki. Loved how Ruhi all in her innocent way told Raman that she loves her Ishima a lot... And The Iyers explained the situation finally to them. You portrayed the emotions so well.

Great job...

thanku so much...
glad u loved it..
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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

beautiful update...

IshRu scenes perfectly portrait,

the emotional part was brilliant esp...

insecurities of ishita was really very nice...

Raman getting know about Ishita was really good...

Ruhi lines was just the best ...

i loved Raman lines- "Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"...

WE words used perfectly yaar

just amazing...

well written...

p.s - i feel next person who is writing if possible make IshRa fall in love with each other...

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

"Maybe Ishita and Ruhi are destined to be together.. Maybe WE are destined to be together!"

This was just magical. Perfect way to end.

I really liked seeing Raman softening towards Ishita a bit, seeing how much she loves Ruhi, and most importantly admitting that she may love Ruhi more than him.

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Lovely update Anshi glad Raman can see the bond Ruhi and Iahita share together so he knows that not only he love Ruhi and set receive uncondition love but Ishu too get same equal share or may be little bit more than him good point dear.Now Atlease he accept that it is better that Ruhi had stay with Ishu than go to orphanage so MU is clear. Like to see next part that Raman try to get along with Ishu and her family to made up for his MU and he can slowly develope some feeling for Ishu may be get some light moment and romantic next update.😊

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Nikki...sabse pehle to kaan pakadke sorry yrr

my internet was not working since two days..i know it should not be something which I should hav missed but i hate this reliance vale now

Coming to update

fab fab fab...aww...m proud of myself now😛jo case maine dala tha acha jawab diya...perfect ending to the drama sequence

and ruman...aww...i could feel for ruhi...and i knew she wpuld miss her ishima...poor girl is afraid of going away from her dad and also wants to meet her ishima

so..perfect ground set finally..noe waiting for ishra story to behin

Kept the expectation...baby its more than I expected..loved itt yr..totally

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Wonderful update anshi

yaa...it was much needed to take story to next level

and raman trying to woo ishita is a great idea

am already imagining the scenes

cant wait to see how the next writer takes it

loved how you explained ishraru emotions

and that goodnyt part was really beautiful

good job anshi

i liked your writing

and pls if u write somethung next tym..do let me know through a pm pls

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

omg anshi this was awesome
so emotional
i love d convo of ishru
hayeee n twist
we r designed to b together was bang on
loved it

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
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It was an amazing update nikki. Loved how Ruhi all in her innocent way told Raman that she loves her Ishima a lot... And The Iyers explained the situation finally to them. You portrayed the emotions so well.

Great job...

thanku so much..
glad u loved it/..
take care./

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: nividances
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It was really nice Nikki. I especially liked the Ruhi-Raman conversation. Glad that Raman understood the importance of Ishita in Ruhi's life. Looking forward to the Ishita-Ruhi convo in the next part.

PS: Great choice for the title. Very apt.

thankyou so much for this wonderful comment..
take careb..