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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Aaah...love this alternative scenario.. thank u so much for this lovely piece of writing. Hope to see u soon..waise I wish u were the one who decides ishra's dialogues @ the show...

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

What a fab OS it was! ...the way you started the OS was beautiful, and the way whole room was described with so much detailing was gorgeous...then raman came, each and every touch by him was so electrifying, she had this feeling for the first time.feeling of being loved by someone😳

And then their conversation...raman was in full flirty mood,and all those cute talks they had...then he puts her hand on his heart...for the first time got to see the bold ishita.😳 All those cuddling moments were damn adorable❤️ raman getting naughty,pulling her so close that there is no gap left between them☺️and the way they were talking...i didnt felt that there was need of any action,as they almost had evrything through their conversation☺️

And in the midst of the beautiful date,there comes adi the name on the cell is enough for feeling his presence🥱.

Anywz the whole OS was beautifully written😃 thanks alot for the pm🤗

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautiful Aani...

The scene of your imagination took my heart dear...awesome...

Reading your OS, my mind could only think about Raman admiring his wife, along their talks...may be because I loved that scene on screen too, and i could imagine a lot more reading your OS. And after reading your OS Aani, i could only remember Lord Byron's lines from the poem "There be none of Beauty's daughters"

"There be none of Beauty's daughters

With a magic like Thee;

And like music on the waters

Is thy sweet voice to me:

When, as if its sound were causing

The charmed ocean's pausing,

The waves lie still and gleaming,

And the lull'd winds seem dreaming:

And the midnight moon is weaving

Her bright chain o'er the deep,

Whose breast is gently heaving

As an infant's asleep:

So the spirit bows before thee

To listen and adore thee;

With a full but soft emotion,

Like the swell of Summer's ocean."

Your writings are so poetical Aani, such that they always makes me remind of verses which

I have read and long forgotten.

This was a wonderful piece of work Aani

Lovely.

Edited by remya1990 - 10 years ago

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Lovely...it was nice read an OS from u after a long time...the way have written it even I never knew verbal foreplay could be that sensual... And the things he conveyed ...too good..

Thanks for writing it Aani

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This is so beautifully written...Thank you...
You know in your world you don't need to accommodate Adi & Shagun..😛

I wish you have completed the entire date night...The settings and everything were so perfect to waste it...

But...its ok...May be someother time with someother setting...

I seriously don't know what the Cvs have in their mind for the confession...since they let go of the beautiful mood...

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

amazing os

lovely

very well written

keep writing

thanx for pm

take care

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awww that was lovely... we didn't get much in the show... ishra didn't even talked properly and phone rang... but this OS wow loved it... 😳 😊

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

WOW! 👏

Love this- both the way you went into detail about the scene we saw and the way you altered it.
The 'verbal foreplay' is amazing- I can so see them doing this, I wish they had done this. It's simply perfect for ISHRA.

Hope to see you writing again more often!😊