IshRa TS||An Unbearable Suffering *Completed*|| - Page 6

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

wow...awsm

beautifully written

phone convo wow...

last two lines was marvelous...

thank u so much...

Originally posted by: arunabhi

I am super later , but then better late than never. So just read the TS from the beginning !!!
You amaze me girl.. The emotions .. Phew .. A lot to take in... This part was another example. You explained Raman so well when he heard her saying she signed the papers and the tease I love M ... Too good 👏 👏 .. Before she could complete the call was cut and then the surprise visit at the airport. The way she banged on him before he could call her again.. Loved the end ..
This was one great scene !!! Very different from what we got and beautifully written..
Great TS ⭐️ ...loved both the updates

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Thanks for the PM, appreciate that you went to all the trouble.👍🏼

Love how you explained Raman's state of mind and Ishu's understanding of it.

Great job- simple and sweet.

Originally posted by: Jenny..

Finally read the last part😃...awww you are not able to send pms in bulk,thats annoying i hope you find the person soon😃 coming to the last part, it was fab...the whole conversation was so beautifully written, they could actually feel eachothers emotions without even speaking a word, really liked how raman tried lie to her.but at the end of the day it was his JKR,she knew why he was going away from her...then raman thinking of ishita marrying mani,the silliest thought he could ever have😆 his JKR cant let him go soo easily na...and there she was😳...letting go everything in eachothers arms😳 they dont even need to say those words,because their eyes speaks everything😳

The ending was just perfectt❤️...simple yet beautiful, and it was not at all long😆😃...thanks for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it n thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: ABBY92

That was quite a different take to the airport scene. I like how we had to read in between the lines of what Ishita was saying to Raman.

Originally posted by: sparikh

wow! that was fabulous take on the "Divorce" scene.

So much better than what we got in the show.

Great job!

-Sona

Originally posted by: VasuKaShlicious

Superb part Diii...
it always amazes me how she writes it so differently..
I would have loved this one too if they showed it in the show... ishita crashing to Raman 😳...
it wasn't lengthy at all... I loved reading it and wished it continued more too...
sorry for the late reply diii...
thanks for PM

Originally posted by: vidpz

Gr8 update, tnx 4 d pm!

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Seriously Anjali I love this one!

U did full justice to the story n love the way emotions kept flowing all through it!

Thanks for the pm.mi understand ur effort. My apology for being late here!