Phir Le Aaya Dil... TS (Continuation) Completed!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: sulochana90

Wow it's a beautiful update

Originally posted by: columbia

Woah!! That was something !!! Fanning self!!!!!

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Reserving priya

edited

That was beautiful priya

Glad I read it before leaving

really realy loved it to the core

when he scolded and the way she said do it...aww..i blushed

i could so imagine their faces yrrr

then what followed was hawt...superb yrrr

you can do it...i mean write wonderfully even without experience :p :p

hehe...it was a beautiful ride yrrr

happy and new ending

good job dear

keep it up

Originally posted by: dochdoe

Loved it... I love happily ever afters :)
and u r so good with romance-intimacy, hats-off

Originally posted by: swathin

awww so sweeet
loved it

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Glad that you added a second part to it. I found it adorable that Ishita went up to Raman after he left her all hot and bothered as her punishment for leaving him and the way she asked him to prove that he has really forgive her as in a weird way cuteness overload even though this was meant to be all hot. But yeah, it was a good mix of cute and hot.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

Priya..omg perfect perfect ending...again this ws soulful n G-ness personified too...u truly hv a way with words...simply LOVED it

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Wow that was a HOT update... superb 😳

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun

It was a perfect ending loved it!