Phir Le Aaya Dil... TS (Continuation) Completed!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
priya it is beautiful and sensuous..

but i loved these lines they are perfect

she was only one defective piece that was perfect fit with the broken puzzle that was his life!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unexpecting Priya you are so amazing thanks for complete this OS. It was end beautifully thank you so much for this update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Freakingly brilliant and amazingly hot..☺️☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a great piece!
Throughly enjoyed reading it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: arunabhi

This is just beautiful and never thought you would actually go ahead n complete it ...

So emotional and hot.. The way she longed for him... Aww.. Lovely
Thank you for this lovely OS



Thanks so much!!!

I had to write, my readers asked me for it...😃

Believe me the pleasure is all mine!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

wow...thats awesome.

lovely piece of writting



Thanks so much!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavi2311

very sensous nd hot...

thnks fr pm..



Thanks so much!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Wow..!! It was again super romantic part,...😳😳

Ishita and raman's convo was soo cutee...😳 and then came the part with hotness overloaded😉😳
My brain has just got blowed after reading all the gutter os'es yesterday..!!
ehehehhe but ths one was perfect..!! It was really awsummm..!! LOved it..! 😳👏👏



Thanks so much!
I am glad that you liked it so much!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Priya u give this a fabulous closure!

My most favourite part is the scolding Ishita got from Raman because that was super sexy n hot because Puttar was scolding her with so much HAQ!
N then of course the way he embraces her when poor Ishu lost all hope!!
Superb! ⭐️



Thanks so much OSJ... the pleasure was all mine!
You know how much I love IshRa and writing about them is always a pleasure ride, HOT or otherwise!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks so much!

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