Phir Le Aaya Dil... TS (Continuation) Completed!!

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Glad that you added a second part to it. I found it adorable that Ishita went up to Raman after he left her all hot and bothered as her punishment for leaving him and the way she asked him to prove that he has really forgive her as in a weird way cuteness overload even though this was meant to be all hot. But yeah, it was a good mix of cute and hot.

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Priya..omg perfect perfect ending...again this ws soulful n G-ness personified too...u truly hv a way with words...simply LOVED it

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow that was a HOT update... superb 😳

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Pooja

@Divan.Pooja

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

It was a perfect ending loved it!

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Swaminathan

@swamii92

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

hey nice one...thnx for the pm

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

amazing, hot and passionate part☺️
loved it😃
thanks for continuing and giving the story a well-deserved ending🤗
take care

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Thanks so much for the PM! Such a great way to end this terrific OS!

I love your writing style and the 'realness' of your ISHRA.

Great work, can't wait to read more from you!

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

It was amazing..so hottish with emotions and actions..

great work it was..my gutterish mind is hoping the further actions happened in that aingle room .thanx to you that cant stop blushing..

loved it..both parts..fabulous

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

brilliant brilliant! so beautifully worded! u r a brilliant writer.👏

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Aww...Priya..thank you so much for the HOT closure.. ☺️
This was just so beautiful..<33 The way she wanted him..her pain when he coiled away from her touch! It was all so perfect! Like I said before, you have your own way with their emotions..They just come out so well. <33 Their convo was ADORBS! ❤️ He was grumbling like a kid and she was no less..melting him away with her tears! 😳😳

Aahhh, what followed next is history as they say! ☺️☺️ Finally they united..☺️

Loved it! Thank you once again for giving it a wonderful ending and for the PM as well 😃

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