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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: shavi2311
very cutly written...
esply the song nd the way raman involvd ishu...
the punishmnt was really romntic...
thnkx fr pm...

Thank you! The entire credit goes to the beauty of this song, it's so well composed and written that I didn't have to do much with Ishra's emotions the song just took care of it! 😊...All of us wanna see this punishment on screen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: banana.ishra
Ishita: Usss tare ko dekh rahe ho aap? Woh north star, main harroz usse dekh ke soti thi, usse baatein karti thi, apna dil ka haal sunati thi par pechle 1 month se main aapko dekh ke soti hoon, apse baatein karti hon, and apna del ka haal sunati hoon. Aaj 1 month ke baad mere dost North star se mulakat hui hai. Aur abhi apne hi samjhaya ki hame apne aaj main rehna chahiye, so I am focusing on my present and saying hi to my long lost friend, the North Star

Raman: Yaad hai maine kaha tha, Yaadon ka kya hai, nayi ban gayengi...tumhari aur meri...hamari' ...bas yeh hamari yaadein hain, hamari beti badi ho rahi hai, aaj uske pehle baby tooth gira, and
I wanted you to be a part of this memory, Ruhi is as much your daughter as she is mine and her mother deserves to be a part of this very important moment of her life.

@BOLD - LOVED THESE LINES...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...
VERY CUTE AND HEART TOUCHING OS (I started musing abt my daughter after reading ur os)

Note: The inner buddhi in me only allowed me to write till the peck on the cheek, how the night progresses I leave it up to your imagination.

😆😆😆

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed reading it and awww about you and your daughter! How cute 😊.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: florine_20
Awesome. So simple theory of tooth fairy you transformed it into a mindblowing os. Lovely.
I liked you siggy too.

Thank you! I l love simple things in life so I tried to write about a simple incident in a couple's life, thank you for appreciating it 😊 and thank siggy..I was just being silly 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: cool_aparna
That was so lovely...truly YHM can eaily garner more trps by including such little scenes where IshRa share moments of ruhi growing up...
It reminds me of an OS by aaminah titled Her first...where Raman shares Ruhiz first things with Ishita..

CVs should really take some ideas 'cos these actors can do so much justice to such scenes😳

Very well thought n written👏

Thank you for your kind words 😊, I wish we could see some Ishra moments with Ruhi and her growing up slowly but the TV viewing audience doesn't agree with us so we will have to make do with stories here lol

I will check out the OS you mentioned, it sounds amazing, I would love to read it.

Thank you once again for your kind words 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _Divya_
awww,, it was so cute! 😊

loved d song 👍🏼 n naughty Raman 😉

do write more 😃

Thank you Divya! I love this song as well and as soon as i saw Ruhi, I started humming this song so I decided to write this OS. We all love naughty Raman 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Tiadas03
Wow what a beautiful song. One of my moms fav songs 😛..
I loved d Buddha buddhi style of romance here, v cute. N the fact that they still can share soo many firsts of their daughter n have those lovely memories. 👏

Thank you Tia! This is one of my favorite songs from Ravi, he did such an amazing job with the music of Waqt. They might be buddha buddhi but they have a young adorable daughter who will give them a lot of opportunities to return to their youth 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: remya1990
Beautiful song Doc.
OS is so cute...with the song,the os became rhythmic.
Enjoyed reading Doc.

Thank you 😊, it seems like everyone has enjoyed the song, this song conveyed Ishita - Raman's feelings so well that I didn't have to do much to put words to their emotions. Thank you for the comment. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Awww so cute tooth fairy.. this thought first cross my mind when i saw Ruhi lost her baby tooth... and was wishing that somehow CV's give us some cute scen where Ruhi crying cause she lost her tooth and ishra cheering up her and cute little family moment.. but obviously can't much expect from CV 's.. but you fulfill my wish by writing this OS 😃 Very Beautiful written brought a wide Smile on my face... Very nice 👏 👏

Thank you for your kind words! There is still hope, maybe we will be surprised and they include a small scene between Ruhi and Ishra about the adorable loss of tooth. Akhir ummed pe toh duniya kayam hai 😉. I am glad you liked reading this little story, thanks again for your lovely comment 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
Hey!
Thank you so much for writing this. Even I wished for a "tooth scene" when I saw that toothless smile of Ruhi's yesterday. I really liked what you wrote. So simple and sweet.
Please do write more.

Thank you so much for reading and taking out the time to comment, I really appreciate it. Most importantly, I love love love Joey and Chandler, I have been staring at your siggy for the past 15 minutes now 😃.

In all honesty I get scared writing fictional stories because I feel like I never do justice to their brilliant characterization but I will try writing now with all this encouragement, 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is fantastic... you've certainly not stayed from the characters as far as I can see.

I noticed her missing tooth as well- she looks extra adorable right?😆

Love the concept, the cute convos and how you explained the evolution of the ISHRA relationship.

Raman's commitment to making sure that Ishu was part of this great moment was

Terrific job, I do hope you consider writing more FFs when inspiration strikes- you are certainly talented enough!😊

Thanks Anu 😊, I know you like reading OS/FF so if you like this then i might have done something right. The missing tooth makes Ruhi so so adorable, I wanna just take her in a bone crushing hug! You know I had to make puttar very endearing, just like how I see him 😳, I feel like I do injustice to Ishita's character because of my obsession with puttar 😆

After my exam I promise I will start writing more because I will have a lot of time to kill, you are gonna be tired of reading and lament the fact that you encouraged me 😆

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