Strangers Once Again - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 Page 17

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM.
It was Just Awesome Part.😊
The whole part was so nicely explained.😊
Raman wanted to leave Ishita because he loves her,it was so nice.😊
I hope Ishita will stop him.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
PriyaCherry.

thanks Priya and this is the last part its a two-shot mentioned in the title too

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: whitelily
fantastic update 👏

thanks lily

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
A real heart touching piece.. Perfect!! Loved Subbu Ishu..

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome...👏

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: VENBA
Awesome update...
Beautiful...👏👏👏

thanks Venba

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Vedika211
You are an excellent, excellent writer. Thank you for sharing that gift with us :)

thanks Vedika 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: -Anku-
Aani 😳 you surprise me with your skills. The understanding you have for a character that hasn't been showed more than two episodes in this show is appalling. I've not read all of your work but from what I have, the two you wrote from Subbu's POV are my most favourite now. The one where Vandu gives birth to a child, and now this. Only you could write a story from the POV of a third person not even an active part of IshRa's story and make it so alluring and brilliant to read.

I love how here, you make Subbu repent what he did, ponder over Ishita's life, how he got his closure, Ishita got her closure and what's more important is how you highlighted the understanding she has for Raman's feelings. Just like how we saw in the show, she knows he's guilty.

BRILLIANT. My most fav work of yours Aani 👏

BTW a suggestion? Once you should write an OS from Shagun's POV, of what she feels on seeing IshRa.

Thanks Anku 😊

Its got more to do with free terrain than understanding frankly with Subu the possibilities are limitless hence he can be played with anyhow without tampering the character as all we have of him are 2-3 scenes at max

Shagun has already been explored pmed ya the link for that one 😳