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I totally wasn't expecting it to be subbu...in fact I was procrastinating reading this because I didn't want it to be raman and ishita separating and I knew that when you write it it just seems so true...I'm mangling this here ,what I mean to say is that you would have written even the separation so beautifully that it would seem the most natural thing that could have occurred...and though on the surface it is subbu thinking of and then talking to ishita, it is raman who looms large for me and I get a wonderful glimpse of raman and ishita's love for each other and Raman trying to free ishita of the demons from his past.
I can actually picture this happeningThank you Aani if I may call you by your name for this wonderful story that has brought a smile to my faceIn fact could I be hopeful that you would write another OS on how JKR brought RKB/Raman to his knees ????Mandu
Thank you so much Mandu that is the sweetest compliment I have ever got from someone on my writing, I am glad my readers find it slice of life, relatable and real 😃
I honestly dont and cant see them seperating at this point even if and actually Raman does actually have these papers drawn on the show as well because they have passed the point of no return as per me even sans a confession or consummation in their marriage, in their feelings already. There wont be another for either of them ever again after this point in their lives.
I am glad you could see that though its a conversation, a scene where Raman isnt even present his presence looms large - he is the basis, the crux of the conversation - the soul of it even in his absence he is omnipresent and that is evident, to my reader is my biggest reward.
And please call me Aani, also the makers fulfilled your wish even before I could 😛 confession coming up and yeah with the divorce papers in hand LOL
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