IshRa SS : Their first encounter (completed 17th nov)

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Smiles-
Love the start. 👏Aww he's so mean!! 😭Called her fat 😡not cool Raman 😡can't wait to read more!! 😳

he's SO RUDE ! hahaha "not cool raman, not cool!"

thank you !

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: usaonly
Hi Rajji interesting start like cat fight so the girl now go inside Raman head and mine too after update waiting for the Ishu side may be so many thing to discover right.😊

hey jum !

glad you liked this so far, i worked to a piece about introspection, i was not as much trying to tell a story than trying to get inside raman's and ishita's head, i'm glad you got what i was trying to do !😳

Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Well... this is intriguing. Started off with a bang so to speak!😉

Loved Raman's thoughts- it was just an incident and he is already obsessing, can't wait to see where you take this.😆

No need to be funny all the time, life certainly isn't- and i love the concept here.😊

If you are going to PM when you update, include me on the list... if not - we both know I'll be stalking your posts regularly and will find it anyway!😉

Hope you continue soon!😃

Anu 🤗

i hope it's not weird that he is obsessed with her, my point was that he was HELLA bored so his thoughts drifted to the accident in the morning (which can be a bit traumatizing) and to the girl, and since thinking about her made him stop thinking about his own miserable life, he spent the evening thinking and imagining her life.

Pm'ed you !😳 hahahahaha i love me some stalker 🤗

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety
Omggg Rajju...read all parts. It was sooo goood. Their meeting reminded me of the aashiqui 2 scene. Only that this one is sexier and intense. Loved it!
The second and third part was where I decided to coerce u into giving next part!!! Pleej. I want to know their thoughts when they meet again and again and again. 😳
Okay of not many parts then at least 2.😳
I loved the part where instead of his ex wife he is reminded to that plump woman😳

Thank you tweety ! (yep, imma call you tweety😳)

Aashiqui 2, didn't watch the movie so don't really know what to say but i'm glad that you liked the scene ! 😃

Hahaha i didn't expect people to ask me to do a continuation !😆

I usually write my stories in a way that they can be incorporated into the story on screen : in this SS they met and then they forgot about each other, which doesn't interfere with how the story went >> they met 2 years later in delhi and didn't remember anything from their previous encounter.

So i don't know how i feel about a part 2 because that'll mean they will obviously remember each other. I will sit and think about it and let you know if find something to work with. I have a tiny idea that i could work with but it'll take energy (getting in to their heads drains me out 😆 i STRUGGLED to write this tiny story)

The point of this story was not to actually tell a story but to work on my "introspection" ability. I "get" the characters but when i start to pen down their logic and reasons, i get lazy so here i wanted to push myself and to pen down their thoughts specifically, and "prove" myself that i could do it.

Glad you liked this part ! the fact that the plump woman came to his mind, changed the whole course of his evening, instead of drifting into dark thoughts, he started to think about Ishita and he imagined HER life instead of thinking about his own miserable life. In a way, she saved him from this pain that night, and the same goes for ishita.

Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rutu83
yay- you're writing again. would you believe it i was going to pm you for it? just reread the honeymoon story and was going to pm you asking for another story and here you are writing one! although a small one it seems 😵 achcha chalo iss baar chalega ;)
awesome first two parts!
continue soon

WOOHOO RUTU 🤗

Seriously? I would have felt so special if i had received a pm from you 😳

Lately there is so much fluff in the serial, that i can't actually write fluff, so i go to glum chum.

hahahah this story is cooompletely different from the honeymoon story (both in format and genre), i hope you'll like it none the less.

i'm thinking about a part 2 for this story where it'll be a tad bit fluffier.

glad you liked the first parts.

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Wait I m doing the jingala dance..yey u wrote..2 parts already..n I noticed just now...nahi nahi nahi...waps aao ladki..abhi 3rd part complete karo..to heck with cliches...we love cliche...give us more...

*DANCING along with you girl ! *

hahahaha 3rd part was hectic, it drains me out to get into ishRa's head😆

i thought this was cliche but now that i look at it, i think it's quite original. I mean the first scene of the "first encounter" is cliche but the rest is not. 😳

love you !

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome updates
only in 1 meeting Raman ne uski life kaisi hain sochli?great
nice start

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
Very nice start, I like how Raman is already obsessed with her thoughts after only 1 meeting!

Originally posted by: Nichuss
rajji pm me this story...
its luks intresting...

just one accidental meeting...raman clean bowled 🤣

thank you all !

Yep, point is : thinking about ishita -the crazy girl- as he calls her, distract his thoughts from his own miserable life, he is a bit jealous of the life he imagine for her but at the same time, he likes imagining all those happy scene she could be in, scenes that he doesn't have in his life.

in a way, that night, she -indirectly and unknowingly- saved him from his sorrow

that's why he is "obsessed" with her.

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Veeann
Wow Rajji, that was totally captivating. You described his emotions, his emptiness so well. Loved it. Why did you stop yaar. Do continue jaldi jaldi
👏 👏 👏

thank you ! that was glum chum rajjo in action *bowing*😎

i stopped because it was 3 am and even a girl like me need a few hours of sleep every now and then 🤣 😳

finished it, hope you like the last part as well😊

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Rajji (Shanu)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Aahaa ... a new work and I read it in time.

Loved the start Rajji ... he is a class A jerk and she is hurt (by more than his words). Wanna see where this goes.

Hugs Girl 🤗 ... i know hav missed a lot of your posts recently. Don't kill me for it, am gonna catch up soon 😳

Woohoo Paru ! 🤗❤️ tightest huggies !

I hope you don't feel like you "have to" comment, i'd hate for anyone to feel pressured into replying to any of my post. I ain't about that life. Bas.

Comment if you want and when you can and don't worry about anything else ! 🤗❤️ *Showering love upon you like it's my job*