IshRa SS : Their first encounter (completed 17th nov) - Page 6

Originally posted by: whitelily

Amazing

Originally posted by: Hsp.canada

Loving the eloquance of emotions. Very beautifully put together. Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: -AmalAziz-

Wow.. This is Superb !

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Wow! This is fabulous! Really well written. thank you so much😃

I love how you showed their emotion, thought process, and finally how they both feel the same way at the end. yep, that was the point, glad you caught it😉

Polar opposites but the same kind of life. IMO they don't have the same kind of life (he is distant from family, she is suffocated by their love, she is a middle class girl, he is a ceo, he copes with his heartbreak by being rude, she copes with hers by being over sweet )😳but definitely the same kind of pain

It's so magical, not a single dull moment. you're so sweet!

I love how they both had to go back to their memories, and remember what the others life would be like. That's a really unique concept! *shamelessly taking all the compliments in*😎

I never really think about what a stranger's life must be like, only because I barely remember anything about them. But in this case it's all based on a single encounter/memory! I love it! The point was that they were feeling particularly sad in this one night so they decided to distract their thoughts from their own miserable life by thinking about someone else, and who could have been better than the person they had a accident with (it's quite a life changing event so of course they wouldn't have forgotten about it by the evening). In a way, they saved each other that day.

I see that you said its completed. But I wish you write them meeting at the club, finally face-to-face after their thought process! It would be awesome! Meeting at the club can't happen because Raman is totally plastered at his hotel room 😆 and he isn't leaving it but i'm thinking about MAYBE (don't hold your breath over it) doing a sequel with a second encounter

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

gr8 piece of writing..loved it how you showed their emotions...and in way showed how we judge random people also...as we don't know what battles or demons each is go through

PM me if and when u update

Originally posted by: columbia

Wowww

R you doing another continued one saying

Their second encounter?????

Please please please do

So beautiful writing I felt like every sentence was spilling with emotions but without being over dramatic

Thanks so much

Originally posted by: cocololo123

Rajji!!! this is amazing... I wish you kept going. PM if you wish to continue the story. Again I loved this. I am not surprised at all that it turned out this good. Your so talented.👏⭐️

Originally posted by: RomComFan

I really enjoyed this. 👏

It really speaks to the idea of judgement and self image...very nice. 😃

Their thoughts though false speak a lot about their similarities in mindset and explains why they are so perfect for each other in the end.😊

Terrific job.👍🏼

I hope you write more FFs when you have some time- you are too talented at this not to!😉

Originally posted by: usaonly

Hi Rajji what to say whatever you do all are good. Love this piece of your work too. So they will meet or not meet again hope you will continue. I know it is not a love story.You so talent wooing for next one.👏👏