IshRa SS : Their first encounter (completed 17th nov)

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

gr8 piece of writing..loved it how you showed their emotions...and in way showed how we judge random people also...as we don't know what battles or demons each is go through

PM me if and when u update

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Wowww

R you doing another continued one saying

Their second encounter?????

Please please please do

So beautiful writing I felt like every sentence was spilling with emotions but without being over dramatic

Thanks so much

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Coco

@---CoCo---

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Rajji!!! this is amazing... I wish you kept going. PM if you wish to continue the story. Again I loved this. I am not surprised at all that it turned out this good. Your so talented.👏⭐️

Edited by cocololo123 - 10 years ago

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wow.. This is Superb !

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

I really enjoyed this. 👏

It really speaks to the idea of judgement and self image...very nice. 😃

Their thoughts though false speak a lot about their similarities in mindset and explains why they are so perfect for each other in the end.😊

Terrific job.👍🏼

I hope you write more FFs when you have some time- you are too talented at this not to!😉

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Hi Rajji what to say whatever you do all are good. Love this piece of your work too. So they will meet or not meet again hope you will continue. I know it is not a love story.You so talent wooing for next one.👏👏

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

I specially logged in to reply just for u, even thou I had decided I will stay away from IF today...(just setting ground for emotional blackmail)...i just loved all the three parts...n I loved how ishita's convo in front of the mirror...it wqs as real as it gets...as if u can see her...to me atleast raman was more smitten over by ishita than she was...n like it tht way...call me old fashioned...but like I care...hehhe...

Now comes the blackmailing part...(o another pt..i am typing from tab, which I generally hate with capital H...ahem u get my point rite)...plz consider continuing it with second encounter n sparks fyflying n their love story...

Making a cute face n requesting u...

Ps: I think I commented also at page3...

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Un resed on pg 3 and pleej to think upon my request. U know how to make fans droool.😳

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Shimla532
Started with fight. Oh. He is so rude. Continue interesting.

he is always rude this man !😆

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: zola007
Lovely update !
First the mention of "white car " cracked me up 😆
what a first meeting !!
typical RKB !
Poor her !!
even now,he used the fat card 😲
but atleast he feels bad for saying it !
Awesome update
eager to read more
Pm me if possible (:

hahahaha 😆 "white cars party" 😆 there's only one of them in my ss though😉

as always rkb is rude !

thank you!😳