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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Beautiful os..!!

Just superb..!!!

It was so emotional...but all its words were so simple but so expressive one...!

Perfectly written as well..!1 Loved it..!

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

i know i suck

you have no idea how busy life is atm.

i love you & reserved.

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Edited my comment on the first page😃

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Aani ! *Hugs*
I am spellbound.
Rebuilding - a small word but beholds such strong emotions !
I dont have words to say what I feel after readin this.
"Again" the word changed everything. U are such a blessed writer Aani.

God Bless :)

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Beautiful Aani! 👏 Love how you have connected their home renovation to that happening in their lives. Good to see them share those sweet moments!! Loved it!🤗

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Beautifully written Aani but then I don't have to say it every time. Your works are always so. 😃

I loved the reference that the whole OS had going - Raman's thoughts, feelings and acknowledgement that his life has risen again from the ashes after Ishita came.
He has risen again - a much better, happier and satisfied man coz he knows he has his life partner with him for all the happiness, trials & tribulations to come.

Especially loved the below part.

It would not let me believe I am about to have my family - all of it under one roof at last."

"You will have it again here, under this roof in this very place in just a few days."

"Not again Ishita...at last."

When she furrows her brows, his hands let go off hers as he stands impossibly close to her, only to hold her face in his hands.

"What I have with you is a family, a home; I never had it before...now that family is about to be completed Ishita that's why I said not again but at last."

Edited by paru_rox - 10 years ago

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Radhika

@Radhika03

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Beautiful OS Aani... 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved it to the core...

Raman's "Not again Ishita...at last..." was the best one ❤️ ⭐️

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

ok...
honestly now i read it fully so thinking of share my thoughts genuinely
like everytime.. m spellbound by the sheer brilliance of your writing...
my inner instincts mock me too write again but alas.. after reading brilliance one could easily feel pun infront of you..
the part which is best for me the thought process you include with the reconstruction of the house.. raman feelings, plight and the strom within him to get the answers and ishita helpful hand .. i just love this girl..

i play hard, prayed wholehardely, wished fully but when destiny grant me .. all i want to question it fully.

i have full list of unread pm send by you .. will answer them soon too...

thank z for the good reads...

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Awesome os..

Brilliantly written..👏👏

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Lovely OS dearest...

I want you to continue this actually, I mean you can't just tell that Adi chose to live with Raman, want to know what actually made him take that decision... Nevertheless, loved ishra, their emotions were depicted beautifully... Take a bow

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