Panaah - IshRa OS

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Brilliant loved how u showed them taking the next step at the home where it all started

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

outstanding...pls continue if u can...thanks for pm

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

i love your writing! can't stop saying that each time 😃
one of the things i love in all your os is gradual peeling of the layers - both emotional change and the background story that brings ishra to that point. so masterfully done👏
raman's feelings were so beautifully conveyed- that "at last" really brought home his emotional upheaval. raman doesn't want the world, he just wants his world.
loved the os!

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wonderful OS ... Beautifully Written
Really Loved It !

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

What an absolutely beautiful OS!👏👏👏

I love it- well done! Can't wait to read more from you!😃

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@gk_09

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Beautifully written Aani 👏

I loved the connection you made with the house and Raman's life. I could envision the scene and feel the raw emotions. Lovely work! <3

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Alf

@amlasn

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Firstly very well written!!

What I liked best about this OS is that everything in Raman and Ishita's life is about their children even when they have realized their relationship is not just "Ruhi ke liye" anymore but alot more than that and u penned it down beautifully. It was a silent confession of love through gestures and unsaid emotions but what led them to this moment was Raman's realization that this woman has helped him become a father to his own children all over again.

In the show, I understand audience expects it and cvs will make the confession a big deal whenever it happens and it will be romantic and all but in real life when two people become parents it is all about their children even though their love for each other has only increased as they enter a new phase of their life but their way of expression is normally through the love they shower upon their children.

I hope I made some sense I just wanted to explain why I liked this OS so much.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

What a beautiful story!👏 Although i love grand romances ... such quite romances are the ones i truly prefer because they always seem more genuine and this is a great example of why that woks. Great Job!👏

I hope to read more of your writing very soon!😉