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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey Aani,

Very nice OS, sweet, mushy, emotional too, loved the way abt going back to the roots, their old home and Adi coming back to Raman and ofcourse the romance of Ishra. Superb lyrics selection, read it more than 3-4 times, since shaayri or poetry is not my forte.

Brilliant girl, keep the OS's coming to us simply because u r a superb writer.

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

No words to describe the feeling..

beautifullly written 👏

lyrics of gulzar ..are always heart wrenching

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Aani 🤗,

You did not have to thank me for this, i just wrote two lines and you made my night as I went to bed in the lyrical beauty of Gulzar sahab so I am thanking you giving me this opportunity! 😊

I do not know how you write with such an emotional depth and your storytelling ability is just beyond words. What a masterstroke to take Raman back to his old burnt house to start afresh both with his long lost son and his wife!

i loved the underlying silence that you portrayed between Ishra, it just tugged at my heart! Please write often and keep us giving such emotional stories, it surely makes my day!

Edited by Eyes-Wide-Shut - 10 years ago

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

beautiful update
hope to c such scenes in serial too

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

I came on the forum..saw a post by name Panaah and I was like sounds intense..and than I realized you are the topicmaker and I got so excited that you have written another OS!! it was brilliant as always😊 "That it's really possible, to start over...rebuild what's been lost or damaged." I am speechless at the mere brilliance of the idea of using their home's destruction and rebuilding so so deeply and meaningfully!! hats off to your sharp amazing mind..and the line..not again but at last..god I am literally bowing to you..you are truly amazing!

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

beautiful...

"not again...at last"

"i want to believe..."

bestest lines...loved it!!!!!!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Brilliantly captured...it almost makes me long to see it rendered on screen, but i am sure the CVs are not half as talented and would surely botch the delivery, marring the impression this read has left in my mind...so i will be careful of what i ask for.

But thank you for a spectacular read!! 👏

--Nags

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This was simply beautiful, Aani. A lot was communicated in just the few lines

"Not again Ishita...at last."

"What I have with you is a family, a home; I never had it before...now that family is about to be completed Ishita that's why I said not again but at last."

They will build new memories between them, of them and their family.

A house is build with board and beams. A Home is built with love and dreams.

He lost a house in the fire but together they will build a home

Awesome Girl🤗

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Rianshi

@Rianshi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Amazing os dear.. loved it..

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petrichorr

@petrichorr

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Simply Beautiful.

A lot of things were put in place. This was the place where their relationship started .Quite liked how u had them take the relationship ship to the next level in the same place.
Loved it!

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