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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Liashna
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take your time Lia 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: janu12345
I am starting my day with this beautiful OS Aani...😛 As always beautiful writing, there are some books which I can read again and again.. and that's how it is for me when I read your OS.. I can read them again and again...😳

"That it's really possible, to start over...rebuild what's been lost or damaged"
"Not again Ishita...at last."😳😳

These 2 lines did it for me, loved how you have used Akash Ganga Society being rebuilt in this OS... Beautiful OS again!!❤️👏

thanks Janu ☺️😊

I kinda miss the place and hope we see it back again soon man also somehow I just got struck with the idea of AG when the lyrics started giving me an image of IshRa there 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Ohgod!

Aaaniii...🤗🤗 I don't know how many times I've started replies to ur posts like this!! 😳 But believe me you.. Everytime I read what u write.. if u were in front f me, I would squeal in excitement and give u one long tight jhappi!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Imagination running wild tho suna hai.. But in your case, its always imagination running so tranquilly and so sublimely and so beautifully and most importantly so so meaningfully!!😳
Home! What can be anything more special than this place!! Even the walls will have tales to tell!! And just how very beautifully you connected their home to new beginning!! Its almost poetic!! I will not say anything more!! Like the couple who speaks less but still ends up speaking so much! I'll keep quiet and let your words do the talking themselves 😳

Bhu 🤗🤗thanks doll and I always believe every corner of our home has a story only we would know - funny/sad/romantic...there is a tale every home has 😳 and somehow in a way IshRa are actually starting their new life now - their marriage frankly after hitting rock bottom on the ABG night recently - coincidentally their home literally went up in flames so I thought why not merge the two 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Prriyam
Amazing read! Lovely choice of words!
It is you and others on the forum with the matured ideas and conversations like these make me yearn for what YHM could be.

thanks Priyam 😊

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Bhanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Aani ... to begin with ... Kaan pakad ke sorry for being the last to comment on it .. that too after you reminded me that I never commented (OOPS ... )

In my defense ... should have known better than to read it on phone ... liked it and as usual my stupid mind forgot to comment. Have stopped reserving spots because I tend to forget and then feel guilty .

Anyways, kabhi kabhi neeche se bhi first aana chahiye ... 😆😆

Now, coming down to the OS

Kya likhu ... am really short of words. To begin with, you start with Gulzar's poetry. Someone whom I admire from my school times. Confession time, I have never read Mills and Boons(yes. there. I said it. runs and hides away 😳), I was always addicted to Agatha Christie during my school times and the love affair continues till date. For romance, I always turned to poetry and ghazals, so it was Mirza Ghalib and Gulzaar with Jagjeet Singh for me all the time.

So, the moment I saw the lines from Gulzaar, I really wanted to hug you.

You have a vision girl. A definite vision to look at things beyond the surface and put them into words which makes any situation believable. You actually portrayed Raman's true insight as a father. A parent who always wants the best for his children no matter what. This is what made him knowingly enter into a matrimonial alliance with the girl he detested only because this made her daughter happy. On the other hand, even if his heart bleeds to be with his son, the father in him couldn't help but worry that what must be going in his son's life that he is willingly wanting to come back to him inspite of being close to his mother all his life. A true fatherly moment.

Reminded me of that old story where two mother's put claim to one child and when to test the truth, the king asks the child to be cut into two, the real mother gives up in a moment for the sake of the safety of her kid. She prefers her child's safety over her desire to be with him immediately. This is what is the love of the parent.

Bhalla House. Can I say I love yor for this. Reminded me of the Dil Chahta Hai scene when Amir unknowingly calls Akshaye when he is all alone. You tend to find solace in your abode when you are broken. It gives a strange peace of mind. So, Raman wanting to go to his home, where he lived through all the important moments of his life is so natural and normal. Loved the way the conversation turned from Raman the father to Raman the husband.

"At Last" ... Aaaniii ... am really speechless at this one ... it has the same kind of effect as Raman's Kya ...

Will like to end my comment with one of my favorite quotes of all times. I am sure Mr. Doctorow had writers like you in mind when he wrote this quote.

"Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader - not the fact it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon."

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Liashna
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Aani for the first time I'm wishing to see Adi as IshRa's child.
How Adi reaches his saturation level and chose Raman for the custody. Omg.

The burnt and destroyed house (read hearts) now are re-built and became home.

The conversation between Ishita Raman :') Wanna see something like that in the show yaar.

😳

Thank you for the wonderful OS 🤗

thanks Lia 🤗

And yeah that kid needs help which I see happening only when he has the right parents for him i.e - IshRa glad you liked the thought behind this one honey 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
I'll be back later.

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Aani I'm so glad that my first comment to your work happens to be this OS. You don't know me but since the day I started coming to YHM section you've been there and slowly I became a fan of yours and here I don't mean only your fictional stories, I read almost all your posts. They are entertaining and there's always a different and positive perspective to events. I've hunted down all your OSs too. My apologies for taking this long to comment but I'll try to reply from now on.
Hi Srishty its always a pleasure to hear from and to connect with a silent reader 😳 Okay it feels weird to know I have a "fan"😆 but thank you I just someone who goes on and on to know my posts are so welcomed is a lovely feeling😳

Coming to this story it is so well and beautifully written. And it connects the dots in so many ways that it's hard for me to explain. Just like Raman found his soul when he fell in love with Ishita I feel that your stories complete what we see on the show and what CVs try to convey in between the lines.

thank you 😊 yep Ishita is someone who came around and gave his life a reason, a purpose and hope - hence my note said home is impossible to define - while physically Raman came to a place that has been his home forever...he came with the person who made it a place where he loved to return to at the end of the day, someone who made him want to come back - home is where the heart is, and his heart found its home in the person who made his house a home 😳

Hats off to you for making Raman take Ishita to their home.. It's not only their house, it is where everything started and it is where it should have its culmination or at least start the beginning of the rest of their lives together with their family.

I felt it was befitting for them to have this circle the new beginning to have its commencement at the place where it all began...the room which witnessed them come together as strangers witnessing their very first moment as lovers too 😳

This has to be my most favourite piece of work from you, bravo👏

thanks once again 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: redwine1
Nice one Aani ..
i loved the connect of the newly done house with the new life .. new beginnings .. very good thot .. just the kind of stuff one would like to watch on screen as well ..

Not to many words exchanged .. coz thats not something this couple can do .. they actually don't need words .. coz they are so attuned to the other .. its only when their insecurities rear up that the problems in communication crop up ..

Anyways . read an OS after a long time .. & glad to break the fast with ur sublime take .. 😳

thanks Rubs so good to hear from ya on one of my works 🤗

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Beautiful OS. The thought of Raman coming home, to very home where this story began tied up everything so beautifully. To have Ishita there by his side, his silent strength, it shows how much their relationship has changed.I enjoyed the whole OS but my favourite part was the end when Raman said "at last" he has his family as only with Ishita in his life now does he realise what he had before was not a real family.

thanks Abby 😊

@bold - that was the idea of making him come to the place - it has seen him at his best and worst - it has seen the beautiful moments of his life as has it seen the ugly ones; now his life is about to change again and it was only befitting he would want to feel comfortable and what better than the familiar with the one who is the other half of his new beginning 😳

@blue - the change this man is undergoing is huge...and I felt the reason for that change deserved a mention in a way that gave away everything and yet...yet those 3 words had to be held back I wanted to avoid a cliche to be honest😳