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divangiri

@divangiri

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Aani
love ur OSes. .beautifully written!

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Awesome.. Amazing... Wonderful... Fantastic... Superb...Excellent... Brilliant... All this words are not enough to Praise what you written... Will just say loved.. loved it to core... Round of applause for you Aani 👏 👏 👏

Edited by s_kavya - 10 years ago

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wonderful as usual Aani...

The beginning of a new life in a new home and the new love; what else a man who has once burnt in the same home need to live other than this. They both then shall make beautiful memories of their own and with their children.

While reading your OS, the first part reminded me of these lines.sincerely don't know why. This was what came into my mind:

"...Thy soule the fixt foot,makes no show

To move,but doth,if the other doe.

And though it in the center sit,

Yet when the other far doth rome,

It leans, and hearkens after it,

And grows erect,as it comes home.

Such wilt thou be to mee,who must

Like th'other foot,obliquely runne;

Thy firmnes makes my circle just,

And makes me end,where I begunne."

And Aani your last part of the story reminded me of the lines:

"Marke but this flea...

...Mee it suck'd first,and now sucks thee,

And in this flea,our two bloods mingled bee"

you may find me insane, but this came to my mind. Both poems by John Donne.

Edited by remya1990 - 10 years ago

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

hi hon
this was sooo amazing❤️
beautifully, brilliantly written👏👏
you have transported me to another world with this one. it gave me a sense of calmness and peace
loved the end, beacuse 'at last', in the truest sense he has found home❤️
take a bow hon⭐️

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Nee28

@Nee28

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Amazing OS !!!!👏
Aani ur just amazing, d way u pen down emotions👏👍🏼 . I absolutely loved it!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

brilliant one-shot...👏

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-HAA-

@-HAA-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

👏

This was so beautiful. I could visualise the entire scene thanks to your words.

All I can say is:
"Mujhe tum mil gaye humdum
Sahaara ho toh Aisa ho
Jidhar dekhoon tumhe dekhoon
Nazaara ho toh Aisa ho

meree aaankhon men aansoo hai,
magar aansoo khushee ke hai
kise chhodoo, kise paa loo,
ye rishte jindagee ke hai
hame to naaj hain tum par,
hamaaraa ho to aisaa ho"