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Originally posted by: whitelily

fabulous update 🤗

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww this was a cute update
loved it

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Hey dear...loved the way you showed the excitement and nervousness about the next step in their relationship..For Raman also its the first experience of pure ,selfless love just like Ishita...loved the way he concluded her to be the love of his life and all those sweet moments of intimacy gave him the 1st time feeling to him...the cutest thing which we didnt get in the episode was the sweet little kiss...awww... ..Ravan Kumar and Jhansi ki Rani are being shy yet excited about the first passionate night together...loved Raman in full CEO mode to order his wife to be with him in the night...he is too cute yet hot at the same time...loved his desperateness for Ishu ...Kamra pravesh line was too funny...so Ravan kumar like...😆😆😆Simi,mihika,mihir,vandu all had their fun at Raman's expense ...loved the desperate and frustrated poor RKB craving for his JKR ...cant wait for SPECIAL night😳..thanks for this lovely update dear

Originally posted by: dazzzling

OSJ are you for real? You never fail to amaze by your near to perfection writings. You are such a natural and versatile writer .
I grinned all through the update visualizing the restless Raman, the embarrassed Ishita, the teasing ladies...
The best part for me was Raman calling her and yelling on the phone.
Simmi's cricket dialogue was completely hers as she would do in the show and the epic antic of the Raman-Mihir duo. 👏
You have got the characters of YHM so perfectly sketched in your stories as they are shown in the show.
You are brilliant lady. ⭐️
Waiting for the hot teaser.