Do 'Dil' Ek Jaan! Last part on page 16 - Page 9

hahaha!!! Thank you for writing this! Read the two updates together and can't wait for the next one! This is such a perfect portrayal of these two characters coming together! Love Ishita's reaction on the first night and Mihir for putting that song in!! 👏 ☺️

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Superb part di..! Ishita giving him hints..!! 😆😆 ehhehhehhe.!! Raman waiting for her..!! His one-liners...god..!! 😉 Mihika Simmi and Vandu's teasing..!! Hilarious comment by Simmi..!! 😳😛 Ishita's blush..haaye...😳 raman's popat..!! 😆 Poor raman,,,! !But ishita still handled him..!! And precap was ahem ahem...😆😳 M so excited..!! But this is not fair na di..!! Yhm's precap had already stoled my last night's sleep...!! and then shocking promo today..😭 ..and now your precap...😆 So much of excitement...expectations..But again my current status is "Waiting" for all the shocks😛..!! Plz Plz post soon next part..!! Atleast it will help me out with the eagerness for waiting for next episode 😃😆...Take care..!! Luv ya...😊

awww this was a cute update
loved it

Hey dear...loved the way you showed the excitement and nervousness about the next step in their relationship..For Raman also its the first experience of pure ,selfless love just like Ishita...loved the way he concluded her to be the love of his life and all those sweet moments of intimacy gave him the 1st time feeling to him...the cutest thing which we didnt get in the episode was the sweet little kiss...awww... ..Ravan Kumar and Jhansi ki Rani are being shy yet excited about the first passionate night together...loved Raman in full CEO mode to order his wife to be with him in the night...he is too cute yet hot at the same time...loved his desperateness for Ishu ...Kamra pravesh line was too funny...so Ravan kumar like...😆😆😆Simi,mihika,mihir,vandu all had their fun at Raman's expense ...loved the desperate and frustrated poor RKB craving for his JKR ...cant wait for SPECIAL night😳..thanks for this lovely update dear

OSJ are you for real? You never fail to amaze by your near to perfection writings. You are such a natural and versatile writer .
I grinned all through the update visualizing the restless Raman, the embarrassed Ishita, the teasing ladies...
The best part for me was Raman calling her and yelling on the phone.
Simmi's cricket dialogue was completely hers as she would do in the show and the epic antic of the Raman-Mihir duo. 👏
You have got the characters of YHM so perfectly sketched in your stories as they are shown in the show.
You are brilliant lady. ⭐️
Waiting for the hot teaser.

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Wow osj...tooo good yaa

even i m getting nervous now😳...

cant wait for the next update

Originally posted by: avni_19

wowww!! wowww!!! loved itt!! Raman's eager and anticipation as well as ishu's too... the teaser reminds me of monday precap but gonna be spoiled by Mani.. :P lol

cont soon! waiting to read the next part!

Originally posted by: ankitasidana

Aww...that was so cute and sweet part

just loved itt..totally

so pure and natural...just like our ishra

perfect for ishra

thnks OSJ for the beautiful story..

will love to see a scene like this onscreen

Originally posted by: ABBY92

LOL, this update was too cute and funny. The way Raman was restless waiting for Ishita to come up that night and the way all the girls teased her when they found out about the first night, all of it made me laugh so much. I can't wait for the last update tonight!

Originally posted by: twerping

hahaha!!! Thank you for writing this! Read the two updates together and can't wait for the next one! This is such a perfect portrayal of these two characters coming together! Love Ishita's reaction on the first night and Mihir for putting that song in!! 👏 ☺️

Thanks for the PM!