Aye Jaate Hue Lamho - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Rianshi

Nice.. loved it..!!

Originally posted by: remya1990

Ohh Aani...sweet and lovely...

I sincerely have no words to express.

Don't know why, but am blushing after reading this...

Originally posted by: Arshi-

Great Os !

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Yay...u wrote...beautiful...i m going back. To read it again...wil edit then

yes i read it again... loved it truly... tht line where her shivering affects him so... n his touching makes her shiver...lovely...

u know when i saw ur os... first i thought i will read it later.. coz the moment i read it... i will have nothing to look forward to.. so decided will savour it..n read it later at leisure...n then all my self control snapped...n read it while at work only... ur stories r hard to resist...😳

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Awesome OS

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

☺️☺️

it was beautiful...romantic and sensual!

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

superb

Originally posted by: Recovery.

I'm commenting on your writing after so long!

I love how you wrote the story!

Beautifully written! I loved how you played with your words.

The cute, subtle romance 😳

only to find his lips upon her skin the moment he had finished the task.

This had to be my favourite line in the complete OS. The line even though is

very simple shows the desire Raman had for her and how even unknowingly he

took the first step to the start of their relation. I could imagine that happening while

reading the OS 😳

"Good morning wife." He whispers to her in the softest of tones, his voice husky and gravelly from the sleep and something else.

"Good morning love." She answers him and with the epithet his eyes soften, something shifting and melting inside his chest as he hears her address him so.

This was like "the aww moment" of this OS for me. Love how Raman refers to her as wife and there is nothing more romantic then your loved one whispering to you in the softest of tones! I love how Raman reacts when Ishita addresses Raman as love! I don't mind actually watching this conversation taking place between them. ☺️

"I wish I could prolong these moments a little more, we could have had some more time."

which girl would not want her special guy to say these words to her.. Raman wanting

to stay with Ishita for a little more time, this was undoubtedly the cutest part!

An amazing OS Aani! 👏 I loved it to the core! Thank you for the PM!

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Aww. Aani.. That is so sensual and romantic..❤️☺️

Title - Bang On!👏

I dont know what was in SBB/SBS that provoked you to right it but am more than excited to watch the upcoming episodes

My Sappiness is on the rise☺️☺️☺️

Plastered with a stoopid smile on my face after reading this☺️

I have told you before darling but needs mentioning again - you write every genre very well, Comedy, Romance, Sensual, pathos, anger.. everything..

You are really talented and I am so glad that I get to read such work

Needless to say am your ardent Fan!

Love you🤗

Originally posted by: janu12345

Aani... All i can say is every time I read something you write.. I am a fan all over again... 😛 Beautiful 😳 ... Left me like this... ☺️

P.S: I am glad I read your warning first and read it at home...☺️😆