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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: _Seera_
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Anni, I am in love with your writing...i so wish they just read urs OSs and use some sense in which they are progressing Ishita - raman relationship...

this was intense.. as well as subtle... way to go girl... you are a wonderful writer!

thanks Seera 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: shavi2311
wondrful updte...

thanks Shavi 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Veeann
Magical, intense, sensual, romantic. What a treat to read. 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanks Veeann 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
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Maar daalo baachi ko sab ..
I read Swathi's OS, Then watched episode and then read yours OS !!.. Can u imagine my condition now ?

I had this goofed up smile on my face and My Dad glared at me throughout the dinner [unfortunately he witnessed condom scene too 😳]
I cannot even put in words that how much I love this masterpiece. It is beyond amazin.
I have no words.
Its sensual and its gorgeously put. I loved it
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I know 7.30 aunties wont let this scene air but the condom packet has just raised my hopes. I truly wish to watch this on screen.

Love You

🤣 🤣 Ruchi I am sure that must have been all levels of awkward 🤣 and thanks doll and LOL if they so much as show her sleeping in his arms I would find that shocking cos ever noticed how the hero heroine even when sharing the bed sleep on the corners 😉😆

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
Simple yet superb...loved it..was waiting for your os..am happy now..

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Wow Aani thats a brilliant n beautiful piece of writing..totally magical n romantic
loved it

thanks Dipsi 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: banana.ishra
WOW...THAT WAS SO ROMANTIC...👏👏 beautifully written...

THANK U AANI...

thanks Anu 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Wonderful, simple yet entirely realistic write up of a morning after scene between two honest lovers 👏

I could easily visualise KP's acting and expressions in this Aani

thanks Lucky 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
beautiful

thanks Javeria 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Ohgod!
Beautiful as always Aani 👏👏
I apologise for the delay...

While i started reading this i could only hear this song in my head i dunno why.. But now.. somehow find the words fitting the situation perfectly! 😳 Yaay to the classics!!

Bhool Sakati Nahin Aankhen Vo Suhaanaa Manzar

Jab Teraa Husn Mere Ishq Se Takaraayaa Thaa

Aur Phir Raah Men Bikhare The Hazaaron Naghamen

Main Vo Naghamen Teri Aavaaz Ko De Aayaa Thaa

Saaz-E-Dil Ko Unhin Geeton Kaa Sahaaraa De De

Meraa Khoyaa Huaa Rangin Nazaaraa De De...

Yaad Hai Mujhako Meri Umr Ki Pahali Vo Ghadi

Teri Aankhon Se Koi Jaam Piyaa Thaa Maine

Meri Rag Rag Men Koi Barq Si Laharaai Thi

Jab Tere Maramari Haathon Ko Chhuaa Thaa Maine

Aa Mujhe Phir Unhin Haathon Ka Sahaaraa De De

Meraa Khoyaa Huaa Rangin Nazaaraa De De,

Mere Mahaboob Tujhe Meri Muhabbat Ki Qasam...

And when i re-read the whole piece with this song running in the BG, it just became all that more beautiful!!!! 😳🤗

Thank you and keep writing more and more!!!