FF Kaun Kiska? UPDATED 17/07/16 Part 9A Pg 63

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Lovely UD V, loved how you have kept the characters intact and actually made the story even more interesting by making Shagun hellbent on avenging herself, by wanting to destroy Ashok by becoming his wife.

The character whose thoughts I dint expect and whose insights I loved the most here was Adi frankly. You have got the kid down to the T. Great job looking forward to the next part of this one already.

Thank you EP. 😃 I don't have much empathy for Adi but then his insecurities are a creation of his parents inability to parent and I can't explore Raman's dilemma without exploring Adi's psyche.

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
nice update
now what's going this apshagun's head???
its dangerous ...I can bet
whatever Raman's rambling was awesome

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Shit...you stopped at a cross road
i mean such a suspense cant make it wats in your mind and wat is shagun upto?
Intersting update dear cont soon thinks 4 pm

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Hey V...lovely update...i love it how ishita is confident...but 3 am..n still her confidence doesn't stagger...now that ia ishita...poor raman...at times u have to tolerate something whcih u detest, for for someone u love..such dilemma...we all face it in our life...Shagun's thought process scares me...Commenting aftrta long time...thanks for pm yar

Thank you so much for your comments yaaron. 😃

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: btalwar
Hehehehe ... you know what ... as soon as I had read the last part, I was sure we are heading towards an FF ... 😛 ... I know you well girl ... but am I complaining ...

NOOO .. Instead ... am all for it ... 🤗

All well?? Doc again?? Take care girl ... seems like a grahan on our gang .. one after another is sick 🤢

Ooops ... sorry I digressed ... the update ... FANTASTIC ... wondering what is Shagun's ace up on her sleeve which she is hiding ?

Update jaldi se ...

Hugs 🤗

B

B 🤗

You told me to write so I am writing.

Nahi yaar, not sick, just travelling a lot so need to be super fit 😆 😆

Shaguns ace - I have a legal twist 😆 😆. Where is the icon for evil laugh?????

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Suprb updte nd amzng twst...
Dis adi...alwys a prob fr ishraru

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

wow dear.. superb Raman intention i just loved..👏

good work dear...😊 plz update soon...😃

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ALEHA

@ALEHA2011

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Loved it I feel for Raman he has be very careful can't wait for next part as what Shugun will do

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Lovely update.👏 Thanks for the PM. 😊

Love the formatting of this FF- the way you write from each character's perspective is nice.😊

So good to see that Raman and Ishu are very clear on what their 'home' is and their relationship.

Still not the biggest fan of Adhi, but you are making him a little more bearable... though Shagun...🤢
...this woman will never change and i hope that ISHRA figure out her game from the beginning and don't allow for MUs

So glad that this is going to be a longer story, i love all your previous works and am super excited to where where you are going to take this.😆

Hope you are in better health and will update soon.😃