As HE sat playing cards with friends

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As he sat playing cards with friends cracking jokes of old times they enjoyed as young actors, phones beeped and at least four of them looked puzzled at each other and saw messages about a fire. Immediately phone calls were made asking if all was ok. The shift ended early so he knew most colleagues had left but he wondered because he always wonders. As soon as everyone came to know that all is fine and no one hurt people got back to playing and drinking. But he sat and wondered. And then his mind travelled, a friend teased him, asking if he was going to loose and if that is why he is biting his nails. He laughed it off and tried to concentrate in the game. He thought of the end of the shoot earlier in the evening, he had stepped out for a smoke, he always did, at first did it because the director requested for her that time it irritated him then she tied a thank you band and now he always steps out to smoke. As he was standing thinking about all this, he sense her he turns and watches her, she has also stepped out and is on t he phone and he knows he is not wondering anymore, he knows that she is talking but isn't smiling and then suddenly it seems she is upset, he wonders now, she hangs up and it seems like she was crying he is about to walk to her, he flings the cigarette on the floor and mashes it with his shoe and then watches her colleague who plays her sister walk to her hold her comfort her he wonders. His thoughts come back to the now, he suddenly stands up and tells his friends he needs to step out for a smoke, they tease him again, it's not shoot yaar, smoke here, he laughs saying adat hai he steps out , fiddles with his phone and dials, she picks on the second ring
Kaise ho? Aap nikal Gaye they na? Woh Agni shamak dal ke paas blue shirt dekha thaa aur thoda sa
What the hell is an Agni shamak dal?.
Her laughter is the reply to his smile
Oh yeah ambulance ke paas Maine blue shirt dekha thaa..and suddenly she stops talking, and is quiet
He scratches his forehead with his index finger and cannot help but smile
Blue shirt dekha and then what
And then nothing, I just wondered.
I am glad you are ok. See you.
Good night.
He hangs up and comes back in to join his friends, when his close pal a fellow actor who has played his wife, raises an eyebrow and says I thought you went out f or a smoke, your lighter and cigarette packet is right here.

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NOTE::: this may be interpreted as an RPF and then again may not. If it has offended anyone please forgive, must be taken in good fun and no offense is meant to any fan base.
Just wanted to scribble something that is Diffy from the track thank you for reading. Press like or write comment if you enjoyed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahahahaha..this is nice😊..I read between the lines😉😃
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Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Hahahahahaha..this is nice😊..I read between the lines😉😃



😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How I wish...

But Iam 100% sure that nothing of this sort would have happened...but it feels so nice to imagine this...😳
Btw this is beautifully written...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anoo123

How I wish...

But Iam 100% sure that nothing of this sort would have happened...but it feels so nice to imagine this...😳
Btw this is beautifully written...


It is supposed for fun!! Just to take minds away from the useless spoilers etx 😃 Happy you thought writing was beautiful have not written much so it's encouraging 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It feels so amazing to read something like this...but aisa kuch gone keep 0 chances
But nonetheless felt awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaaranya

It feels so amazing to read something like this...but aisa kuch gone keep 0 chances
But nonetheless felt awesome



Thanks so much for the comment 😊
The idea is to feel awesome becos the show was giving us only headache 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lol 😆

But u have written a beautiful love/like story 😳 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so nice !!!
Do write more, its really good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnr123

Lol 😆

But u have written a beautiful love/like story 😳 😉


😆 Is the idea - all in fun only
Aww thx 4 saying that abt my writing 😳

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