Tainted Love - IshRa OS - Page 4

He needs to get out of this hole on his own and learn to move on..easier said then done but if he can ask MIhir to forgive Shagun and give her rights. Then he needs to move on to and get over the hurt and betrayal. And this has to be done on his own! I really think despite all of our annoyances with Mani, the thought concept behind this track was right, yes maybe the execution was not upto par. The thought concept was right.

Anyhow once again, continue writing, your OS's and SS's sometimes make this show more bearable especially in times like these! :)

as always ...into my favourites... 😳

For me both Ishita and Raman Are wrong and right at there own place ...

Ishita

From her eyes she can see he doesn't love her only care is there like he has for everyone in the house or we can say in her wings. For Ishita her name plate is still outside the house But could she get at place in her room NO not yet ... Not even a single photo in that big house ... Is she allowed or shared a bed with her hubby NO . She got her KKHH moment when she had nothing to show in front of everyone and SHAGUN made it a little complicated. Whenever she saw a little extra gesture of his towards her she always appreciates ... Sometimes Raman mocked her , waved of the topic with his taunts or seriously told her many time don't dream about anything ... We are Ruhi's parents and doesn't expect much from this relation . So if couldn't connects the dots is because she doesn't found herself important enough for him where he can be this much hurt, even is not sure weather he is jealous of Mani or not. Here you ,mentioned very important moment when she asked him about second chance in Love and he said not possible n she was like yeah it must be difficult for him. So if she's clueless I can accept .

As far as Mani is concerned she was a different person all together as he is a childhood or college friend the time where you are free with no worries then he left she faced the bitter truth of life ... Life was too cruel for her but she came out with flying colors because of her family ... Now he is back, she behaves exactly like a school girl or a college girl she is meeting with him and telling everyone with whom she is now a days , she goes wrong when she lied , Raman was tolerating everything even voc al also but as soon as he saw she lied he can thought only one reason which because of there closeness got deeper and deeper.

Raman

What he is watching he is presuming is OK as he has gone through all this before and he has never seen Ishita that much open with anyone else other then her family members so he is clueless here. He is wrong as he is not confronting her which he did in Subbu's case, he is not looking her actions towards him, stops listening to her gently words her questions like can we get a second chance in life? Her gestures like ' you keeps the fast for me that means a lot it touched my heart' . The way she was happy when she came to know he was finalize. For Asia head, the way she bought bracelet, the way she was scared to know he got hurt in an fake accident. He missed all this as his mind clouded with her one lie and his past. So is it true to say he is over his past , No ... Not at all...

He washed his dirty laundry in public was this a way to behave like a CEO OF THE YEAR , ASIA HEAD N ALL. No but only he can control himself give himself a time or take help with Ishita as Mihir already mentioned problem in your life is communication gap which is absolutely correct. Reaching to a conclusion and took actions without confronting is not a mature person's behavior.

You said it right that even if she will give explanations he will not accept and all the answers are with him he has to find out the difference between Ishita n Shagun.

Sorry for the long reply ...

in our school text, we used to read many short stories... there was a line to decribe the how a good short story shud be... "ja sesh hoieo, hoilo na sesh*..." ...whcih roughly means in english " it doesnt end even after the story ends..."...it used to always struck me.. n for those stories... i used to yearn..n imagine what would happen after that point where the story stopped... your story is like that... i m trying to picture what would happen after raman's realization tht yes ishita does love him... n has he lost it for ever...will it be a happy ending... or is it going to be sad...

I wish n yearn for you to continue this... n change it to two shot... more so... coz reading your oses give a strange feeling of calmness... i really like that... i always read your oses... at times.. i dont comment... however i truly truly love them..keep them coming... 👏

Note: *That was bengali by the way... 😉

Beautiful OS like always Aani.. Their pain and anguish finally led to their confrontation..

Both of them were high on emotions and finally it ended up in both knowing what's exactly there between them.. Like always you did nothing but the best with their emotions.. It was heartbreaking to see them in so much pain but it was beautiful..

I could visualize it all and now I can only pray we get a mature talk and confrontation between them in the coming week.. Why can't some of our forum writers be on the creatives team.?? 😔 Specially you.. 😳

Aani, you have to continue this. Pretty please.. Like many others here.. I would also love to read what happens next. Coming from you, WITHOUT a DOUBT.! 😉

Thank you for the wonderful OS.!