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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaminah123


It wasn't self doubt I just wanted to let some one know that the amount of errors I made in this one has surpassed all my work. And it wasn't even hidden in the paragraphs, it was in the first few lines. I edited it. Just now.

Err.. That's what I was wondering I had done. I have an idea let me re post it on another page and you take the entire page 😃

At least you are on the same page kiara darling.


Ash. And that someone was me. #honored

But honestly, I didn't notice nor care. I was just too much in awe of reading it. Though I knew it was going to be a happy ending. (After effects of all those romance novels, I tell you.) You amaze me, and no this sint me buttering you up. And the you did say you couldn't really star at the screen anymore. I get you. And then, no one noticed or cared either. If a freak like me who needs almost perfect writing didn't care you have no idea of how amazing you are.



No. Let's save tha of the epilogue. I don't really want you to take so much trouble.

Same page but fourth. I would have murdered you if I want on the same page. But the it's my fault too.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Kiara I forgot to mention that the update was worth the wait. If I loved IR, I also hated the aunties. Their pov n iyer clan shipping them is sooo adorable. Seriously like the comfort level, mutual admiration and silent love that ishra share

Okay I just realised I slept earlier and now I feel it's a new day 🤔

Aamna, leave ur FF like it is. i wanna make it our cc before it reaches 150.

Okie bye.



And I watch done show. And true to my word the forum over reacts. I finally get you. Finally.

Honestly, I think this is the only FF that is ever going to be serial based. Rest are all Amna FF types.


Been there, done that. #getwellsoon


And there I was, planing take her next FF our cc.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AraBearxx




First, I shall be the super clingy girlfriend and ask you all about your health.


I have the update. Just haven't written the dance sequence thing. Written after that. I'll message it to you if you reply do don't mind mising the thing out. But first. How are you?

Yes, you created a monster.






clingy girlfriend 🤣

And to reply you. Honestly.. Not really any better atm 🤔

Sleep and update tomorrow. It can wait.

See u both. Hopefully can pull an emotional blackmail and hijack mom's pc. Got like 2 and a half res for u, and 3 for Aamna :(
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna



clingy girlfriend 🤣

And to reply you. Honestly.. Not really any better atm 🤔

Sleep and update tomorrow. It can wait.

See u both. Hopefully can pull an emotional blackmail and hijack mom's pc. Got like 2 and a half res for u, and 3 for Aamna :(



Clingy girlfriend 😆


AWH. Live those zombie days. As horrible as they are you need those days of plain laziness. Maybe I'm wierd but I miss being sick.


Suuureee. 😳

Let's not forget the ones before that.

I have a horrible day ahead that ends at 10 pm. Start at 7 am and ends at 10 pm. Sigh.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AraBearxx




And I watch done show. And true to my word the forum over reacts. I finally get you. Finally.

Honestly, I think this is the only FF that is ever going to be serial based. Rest are all Amna FF types.


Been there, done that.#getwellsoon


And there I was, planing take her next FF our cc.



Whay happened? What about the forum?

I love reading both. One the different concepts are a treat to the mind. And then the serial based are the ones which the writer picks the particular depths and layers of the characters and explore them.

Aamna have u studied psychology by any chance? Cause I seriously see u have great knowledge about characterisation. How and why the person behaved like that.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Kiara I forgot to mention that the update was worth the wait. If I loved IR, I also hated the aunties. Their pov n iyer clan shipping them is sooo adorable. Seriously like the comfort level, mutual admiration and silent love that ishra share

Okay I just realised I slept earlier and now I feel it's a new day 🤔

Aamna, leave ur FF like it is. i wanna make it our cc before it reaches 150.

Okie bye.


Done deal, lia.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna



Whay happened? What about the forum?

I love reading both. One the different concepts are a treat to the mind. And then the serial based are the ones which the writer picks the particular depths and layers of the characters and explore them.

Aamna have u studied psychology by any chance? Cause I seriously see u have great knowledge about characterisation. How and why the person behaved like that.


Not particularly, just a small course but that was years ago and didn't really grasp anything. I think its more of a 'in their shoe' thing, thinking from their perspective.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AraBearxx


Ash. And that someone was me. #honored

But honestly, I didn't notice nor care. I was just too much in awe of reading it. Though I knew it was going to be a happy ending. (After effects of all those romance novels, I tell you.) You amaze me, and no this sint me buttering you up. And the you did say you couldn't really star at the screen anymore. I get you. And then, no one noticed or cared either. If a freak like me who needs almost perfect writing didn't care you have no idea of how amazing you are.



No. Let's save tha of the epilogue. I don't really want you to take so much trouble.

Same page but fourth. I would have murdered you if I want on the same page. But the it's my fault too.


I'm flattered then, kiara.

I added the last bit of conversation between the two to make up for a substitute of an epulogue. You still want one?

@ fault: point!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna



Whay happened? What about the forum?

I love reading both. One the different concepts are a treat to the mind. And then the serial based are the ones which the writer picks the particular depths and layers of the characters and explore them.

Aamna have u studied psychology by any chance? Cause I seriously see u have great knowledge about characterisation. How and why the person behaved like that.


Nothing I wrong with the forum. Just the over analysing. Okay I don't know. I'm one of those people who over analyse every thing too. Nothing. But I almost died when Raman mouthed a thank-you to Ishita and the car scene. I'm gone for. I was blushing at the tv like a maniac.

Serial based as in overly dramatic. How do I explain this. Notice how this goes with everyone's point f view and excessive drama and notice how Amma's FF:s are easy to read, quick to read and just focus on two people. Like all those romance novels. Short sweet simple with minimal drama.

Honestly, to me it depends on the writer. Some writers are easy to grasp to. Or the mood I am in, if I do not have to be diplomatic. I I agree with you on your Siemens though.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Amna : I would love one if you didn't mind. Just a quirky snap into the future - let me repeat- like all those romance. Maybe you could have Ishita at her book launch or an even or just a normal messy do in the house.

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