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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting development- Finally Ishu realizes she is in love as well.😆

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lovely update
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no words.simply super. Don't end the story soo soon pls its a request.
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Like YHM We need two episodes daily! 😆
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brilliant story dear...
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I just find that u r a malayali. @nagsuma
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Originally posted by: vamsi.

I just find that u r a malayali. @nagsuma

she is from andhra
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello friends..sorry for being late update..but I promise next parts will be very soon.

And I am really very very sorry.do you want to know why I am saying sorry.after reading this part all are you understands..excuses if any mistakes..

Part28:

Next day raman wakes up early and sees ishitha, sleeps beside him placing her hand in him.

Raman:ye madrasan ko dekho kaise sorayithi,kal raat muje ithne dher wait karrayithi..aab aake mere pass hi sorayithi..but this time raman..you have to take revenge..he slowly gets up from bed not disturbing her and gets ready.

Around 9am she wakes up and sees raman working on laptop sitting on couch.

Ishitha:good morning..

Raman:very good morning..

Ishitha:aap ithne subah ready hogayi..kuch urgent kam hai kya?

Raman:hello madam..aap ka alarm ko jakar dustbin me pek do..

Ishitha:why?it's working na..

Raman:accha..tho deko kithna time hogayi..

Ishitha:what? Its 9:15..aap abhi tak muje vuti nahi kyon?

Raman:no miss..maine aapni biwi ko vutaya..look she is sitting with me and chatting with me...shows the pillow which is placed beside him..

Ishitha:sorry raman..shagun ko bore huyi thina..isiliye mai vaha hona padaa..

Raman:accha..kal aayi aashiqui keliye purana pathi ko choda akele..

Ishitha:what raman?why don't u understand?

Raman:I understood everything..tume line marna bhi waste hai..ithne time kisi aur ladki ko diyana abhi tak vo mere liye kuch bhi kardega..

Ishitha:aap bhi na raman..kuch bhi..bahuth late hogaya,aarav ne school nahi jana hoga..mai jakar check kartha hoon..

Raman:hello miss..mere beta tumhara jaisa nahi,vo subah vutkar apni aap ready hokar school gayi..don't waste your time with me and my son..

Ishitha:what ?your son..mai kuch bhi nahi hoon..ek din me muje paraya kar diya..

He leaves from there with his laptop..

Ishitha:what..raman ne muj pe gussa...aisa hi hotha hai kya?

Pillow:tho kya kartha hai bichara..she is dreaming pillow talks with her.

Ishitha:ye sab kuch tumhari vajah se..maine thodi dher tuje replacement kiya..aur tume ne settle hogayi..she hits that pillow with another one.

After some time she gets ready and comes to hall and sees raman is still working..

Ishitha:raman.aapne breakfast kiya?

Raman:hmm..

Ishitha:angrily leaves from there..subah se ek smile bhi nahi kiya..cutting vegetables for sandwitch.maine kya kiya.she is our guest and makes her feel free is wrong?she cuts her finger and screems..amma...

Raman immediately runs to kitchen and sees her finger..

Raman:ishita..what happened?tumhara dyan kaha hai.he drags her hand near sink and cleans the blood with water.they both walks to hall and makes sit her on sofa.he brings cotton and bandage and dreesing wound.

Ishitha:raman..maine jaan booch kar ye kar liya..

Raman:what?are you mad?

Ishitha: maine aap ko kal raath upset kiya na..isiliye ye punishment..aur ab deko aap mujese phirse baath karryithi..aapne kya kaha,koi bhi ladki aapke liye kuch bhi karthi hai,mai bhi kuch bhi kartha hoon..

Raman: I am sorry ishitha..mai bas mazak kiya..

Ishitha:lekin mai nahi raman..meri vazah se kisi ne hurt huva ya muje koi hurt kiya mai sahen nahi karthi raman..vo bhi mere dil ki gareeb vale..please mere saath kabhi aise baath math karoo..

Raman(st):feels very bad thinking how sensitive she is.

Raman:aarav ne shadi ke phele kabhi nahi bathaya..tum aise paagal hai..

Ishitha:vo bhi nahi jaanthina mere paagalpan ki bare me..this angle is for u only..you only bears me naa...

Raman:ishitha..promise me..kabhi bhi aise kaam phirse nahi karne ki..

Ishitha:ye tho aapme depend hai,mai kuch nahi karsaktha..

Raman:ishitha please..promise me..

Ishitha:teeke..promise..vo maine bhooli gaya shagun ko promise kiya naa..shopping jaane keliye..she runs to shagun room..

Raman:phirse..ye tho amir khan ka fan bhi hai..Following athidi devo bhava statement..

Shagun and ishitha gets ready for shopping and raman is working..

Ishitha:raman..aaj aap office nahi gayethi kyon?

Raman:aaj mai ghar me kam karna chahthi hoon..isiliye..

Ishitha:tho aap bhi aayiyena..humare saath shopping.

Raman:mai kyon?muje selection bhi nahi aatha..

Shagun:hum kab kaha...selection keliye?humko kisi ki help chahiye,bags carry karne keliye..

Raman:what?what do you think about me? i am a CEO of the company.how can you ask me as a servent?

Shagun:CEO tho kya..tum bhi ek ladka haina..it is your duty to service us..

Ishitha:chodo shagun..inko hamare saath aane ki intrest hi nahi hai..chalo hum dono hi kafi hai..humko kisi help ki jaroorath nahi hai.

Raman(st):chalo raman..nahi tho aaj bhi iss shagun ne ishitha ko nahi chodega..

Raman:teeke..mai bhi aatha hoon..

Shagun :thankyou CEO sir..

They three leaves to shopping. After so much effort they selects some lehangas and sarees.shagun trials all dresses and sarees one by one.raman was surprised to see shagun in Indian dresses and in shocked position..

Ishitha:mai ne kahana she is looking good in sarees.ab boliye she is only made for western dresses?

Raman:tum tho aada hi prove kiya..mai tho kuch aur bhi kaha..someone is made for only sarees..winks at her..

Ishitha:I like sarees only..

Raman:I know..why you like sarees!

Ishitha:why?

Raman:kyon muje pooch rayithi..ye baath tum janthi aur mai bhi jaanthi na..he gives a dress to her..wear this and show me wrong!

Ishitha:opens the dress,it is a black short dress which is covering just above her knees and exposes all bare back also.

Ishitha:raman..this is not my size..this is megha size..

Raman:oh..bhagavan..kyon mere liye inko bheja..

Ishitha:aapne kudh hi select karli.bhagavan ko kyon blame karthe hai..i cant wear this dress..mai ek maa hoon..log kya sochega.

Raman:mai kab kaha..ye phehnkar catwalk karo..agar tum chahthe ho sirf mere liye pehen kar sakthi haina..

Ishitha:phir bhi..i can't..

He leaves from there.shagun comes and sees the dress.

Shagun:hey nice dress yaar..try it.raman also likes this dress.infact raman dekthe hi rahegi tume..

Ishitha:just smiles..

They leaves to home,on the way ishitha gets a call from hospital for emergency

Ishitha:I am sorry shagun..it's emergency..i have to go now..

Shagun:don't worry ishitha..today evening I am also leaving for marriage.i will be back in 2 days..

Raman:drops her at clinic.ishitha..call me after your work complete.i will pick u..

Ishitha:no raman..i will come myself..

Raman:I know you will come yourself..but I am also having a urgent work in office.i have to go now.then after on the way I will pick u..

Ishitha:lekin shagun..

Raman:shagun..do u have any work now..

Shagun:no raman.i will come with u office.

They both leaves to office after droping her at clinic.. she enters clinic.but hospital staff informs her that emergency attended by dr.batiya.

She wents and sits in her cabin and thinks about shagun words.

Ishitha(st):raman keliye mai vo dress pehen sakthina..aab tak raman ne kabhi nahi kaha mere dressing ki bare me.but this time raman wants me to see in that dress.aur kal raath maine raman ko bahuth rulaya..lekin aaj nahi.mai aaj raman ko meri dil ki baath bathana hai.i have to clear everything today.

She immediately calls raman.but he does not picks the call.she calls shagun this time.

Ishitha:hello..shagun..where are you both?raman ne mere call nahi lift kiya kyon?

Shagun:ishitha..vo meeting me hai..kuch kam hai kya?

Ishitha:no no shagun..i will talk to him later.she cuts the call.

She immediately comes to office and meets mihika.

Mihika:hai akka.aap yaha?

Ishitha:hi mihiku..kuch nahi mai raman se milne keliye aaya.but he is in meeting na.

Mihika:ha akka.jeeju meeting me hai mihir ke saath..lekin akka..aaj kya special hai.tum jeeju ke milne keliye office aaya..kuch special hai kya?

Ishitha:blushes thinking about special day for them.

Mihika:oh...ho.someone is blushing.kya baath hai akka.

Ishitha:kuch nahi mihku..please tum muje ek help karoongi?

Mihika:what akka.tum request nahi,order karna hai mrs.bhalla.

Ishitha:vahi aaj tum junior bhalla ko pick karke handle karna hai.evening mai raman ko ek surprise dena chahthi hoon.. please mihku..

Mihika:teeke mrs.bhalla.mai aapke liye nahi.mere jeeju keliye ek din kya 10 din handle karoongi junior bhalla ko...

Ishitha:thankyou mihiku..love you..kisses her..

Mihika:accha..thoda jeeju keliye bhi rako..

Ishitha:waise mera pyaara dewar kaisa hai?shadi ke baad kuch plans nahi hai kya honeymoon jaane ka?

Mihika:blushes..

Ishitha:ooo...ab koun hai sirf honeymoon ka naam sunthe hi ithna red hogayi..

Mihika:kya akka tum bhi?

Ishitha:bathavona, kab honeymoon hai,nahi tho iss raman ne mihir ko kaam se nahi chodega..

Mihika:no akka..mere jeeju iss bath me bhi best hai.jeeju ne already plan kardiya honeymoon ke bare me.this weekend we are leaving to paris.

Ishitha:oh..thats great..raman bhi na..muje bhi nahi bathaya..teeke mihiku..i will check him may be he is back from meeting.and please yaad haina aarav..

Mihika:mai hoona akka.mai aarav ko dekthi hoon..

Ishitha:bye mihiku..

Mihika:bye akka.

Ishitha comes to ramans cabin,but they both not come yet.she sees the all shopping bags are placed in couch and sees the black dress.

Ishitha:maine shop me dress try nahi kiya.ek bar try kartha hoon.she takes the bag and went to his wash room and wears that dress.that dress perfectly fits to her and she is really beautiful in that dress.

Same time raman and shagun came back to cabin.she hears their voices.she immediately changes her dress .here shagun searches for that dress.

Raman:kya huva shagun?what r u searching?

Shagun :kuch nahi raman.one bag is missing.

Raman:check one more time yaar..kaha jaathi yahi kahi hoga?

Shagun : nahi raman..yaha nahi hai.

Raman:koi baath nahi,next time lelona same piece..

Shagun: nahi raman..its not mine.that dress is for ishitha.she selects that for her.

Raman:ishitha ka dress...which one?

Shagun: vahi black dress.she likes that very much.and I missed that one.

Raman:don't worry.kahi ishitha ke pass hoga. I will call her.he calls her.but she cuts the call because she is in between wearing saree.

Shagun:she already call kiya muje..tum phone nahi pick kiya na meeting me..

Raman:she cuts the call.may be in busy..

Raman(st):ishitha ne black dress leliya..smiles..

Shagun:what happened raman?why r u smiling?

Raman:kuch nahi..

Shagun:ishitha ke bare me soch rayithina..i know..

Ishitha wants to come out.but she stops hearing her name.

Raman:hmm...

Shagun:raman..if you don't mind can I ask you something?

Raman:yes..

Shagun:raman..tumne ishitha ko kaise shadi karli..tumne kaise socha mammiji ishitha ko aapne bahu manaage kaise?

Raman:I don't care about anyone..

Shagun:but they cares about you.they never accepts, ek mother ko apne bahu ke roop me...

Raman:that's way I will not inform anyone about my marriage.

Shagun:but..that is not the solution.you have to tell them.mammiji is missing you raman.she always thinking about you..please atleast mammiji keliye tum US aana hai..

Raman:no shagun.mai aarav aur ishitha ko chodkar nahi aasaktha.aur vunko mere saath bhi nahi le aasaktha ..tum janthi na maa ke bare me.vo ye sab nahi samjthe..

Shagun:isme mammiji kya kisi aur bhi nahi samjithi,acchank vunka beta kisi aur baccha ka baap bankar aaya tho koi bhi kya karega...

Raman:oh..please shagun..baar baar ye kisi aur ka beta math bulavo..aarav mera hi beta hai..

Shagun:I don't oppose your relation,but you are not his biological father.you are his step father.

Raman:shut up shagun..i said na..he is my son.and I am his biological father.

Ishitha is hell shocked and breakdowns on the floor.

Shagun:what r u talking raman?how is it possible?

Raman:shagun..tum janthi na..mai phele se kisi se pyar karthi thi.vo koi aur nahi..ishitha hai..and he explains everything about his and ishitha's night at that new year party.

Shagun:I am sorry raman..but ishitha knows about this?

Raman:no..and I can't tell her about this.she will leave me again.i can't live without her and I can't see aarav's angry knowing this.abhi abhi vo sab kuch boolkar mere saath acchi rayithi..mere is galthi ke saja mai aarav ko nahi dedoongi.muje vundono ki kushi ke alava kuch nahi chahiye..

Shagun:I am really sorry raman..maine bina soche samje bol diya..

Same time mihika comes to cabin.

Mihika:hi shagun...

Shagun:hi mihika..

Mihika:where is akka?chali gayi kya?

Raman:ishita..kab aayi?

Mihika:aap se milne keliye aayithi,aap meeting me thina,isiliye thodi dher mere pass aayi..lagtha hai chali gayi hoga..

Raman:what?mujse milne ke bina chali gayi..ithne jaldi kya hai..kuch kaha tumse?

Mihika:nahi..lekin aaj aarav ko mere saath lekar ne keliye bathaya..

Raman:but why?now where is she?she can't even pick my call..

Mihika:kya jeeju..aap dono ek jaise hai,phele akka aapke liye thadap rayithi,ab aap..ghar jana hoga..aapkeliye kuch special...

Raman:feels shy..oh shutup mihika..we have to go now..shagun ko drop karna hai..bye..

Raman and shagun leaves from there and raman drops her at her friends home.he is on the way to home thinking about what ishitha is going to do done..

There ishitha came back to home after some time..she is in shocked how to react to this truth.tears are continously flowing from her eyes.she is confused how much tears are stocked in her heart.after her meeting with raman she forgot her past day by day.he is the reason for her happy at every moment.almost she forgot the feeling of a pain..but today he is the only reason for her tears agian.she could not hate him also but he breaks her trust.she can't digest the truth.

All their sweet moments and aarav happiness with him, his consoling at her painfull days everything are rotating in her mind.she is continuously breaking ang throwing all things in their room.she is trying to control her anger with all these messed things.but nothing can change her anger.

After sometime raman came back to home and searches for ishitha in kitchen.he calls her but they is no reply from her in any room.he straightly goes to his room.and there all lights are switched off.he switch on the lights and sees her near the couch sitting on floor closing her face with crossing her legs. He is confused to see the entire room is messed with all things and all clothes ,bedsheets and curtains are fell on the ground...

Raman:what is this ishitha?why are u sitting in dark?he goes near her and sit..

Ishitha:no reply

Raman:ishitha..ishitha..are u hearing?he shakes her.

Ishitha:immediately jerks his hand..don't touch me..her eyes are swollen with tears.

Raman:what happened ishitha?why r u crying?

Ishitha:don't you know why I am crying?

Raman:how would I know?

Ishitha:kyon raman?kyon aap mere saath aise kiya?

Raman:oh..ishitha..tell me clearly..maine kya kiya?

Ishitha:aarav ka papa koun hai?

Raman:ofcourse mai..tum janthi nahi?

Ishitha:biological father ya step father?

Raman:why are you asking all this nonsence?he stands from there..

Ishitha:now I know everything raman..please tell me,why r u hiding this from me raman?

Raman:understands everything..tears are rolling in his eyes..i am sorry ishitha..

Ishitha:raman..you are saying sorry..but this is not the answer to my question?why r u not saying this to me before?

Raman:don't you know why I am not saying?agar mai phele batha diya tho tum muje maaf karoongi kya?

Ishitha:aapne kya socha?ab mai aapko maaf karoongi?

Raman:I know..tum muje kabhi nahi maaf karoongi.lekin I want to see you both happy.isiliye maine iss sach nahi bathaya...I am sorry ishitha.. I am really sorry ...

Ishitha:aapne mera barosa thoda raman.muje aapse kabhi nahi ye umeed thi..you are cheating me raman..you are a cheater..she is crying continuously.and suddenly fell on ground with unconscious..

Raman sees her,her palm is bleeding with cutting glass piece.he immeadiately carries her and walks to aarav room and places her on bed.he cleans her hand and dressing with bandage.

Raman:I am sorry ishitha..i know..sach jaane ke baad tum aise hi react karoongi.isiliye maine tume nahi bathaya..he sits beside her and crying..

After some time ishitha is dreaming every thing that happened between them at that partynight.but this time she can clearly sees his face.raman please..raman...she jerks from the sleep.

Raman:ishitha..ishitha...kya huva?

Ishitha: slaps him.why raman..why?tum janthi na vus din ki vajah se mai sabh kuch kodiya mere pyar. mere amma appa..sab kuch..ye sab kuch boolkar maine phirse jeena shuru kiya..aap par barosa rakha.. lekin aap muje kabhi pyar nahi kiya.sirf aarav ki vajah se muje shadi karli.agar aap mujse sach me pyar karthina aap muje pehle hi sach jaroor bathayega..

Raman:tum mere bare me kuch bhi bolo mai maanthi hoon,lekin ye math kaho mai tumse pyar nahi karthi hoon aur mai sirf aarav keliye tumse shadi karli..please..aisa math kaho..i don't ask you to forgive me, lekin mere situation ko samjo,maine kiski vajah se ye sach chupa,tum bhi jaanthe hai mai tumse kithna pyar kartha hai.phir kyon tum aise baath karrayithi..i don't want to lose you again.tumhare bina mai jeenahi pavungi.please ishitha muje samjne ki koshish karo..

Ishitha:I hate you raman..i really hate you.you are a cheater..please leave from here..she is crying again..

He leaves from there and goes to hall .they both don't know,when their teary eyes went into sleep.

Nextday morning he wakes up and sees around.he is sleeping on the couch that night.he immediately went to aaravs room to see ishitha.but she is not there and he checks his room.the entire room is cleaned and arranged properly.he calls her mobile.but she cuts the call.he again calls her so many times.but she cuts the calls.after 5 minutes he receives a message from her."don't worry.i am not leaving you.please don't call me again". he gets ready and goes to office.but he can't concentrate any work ,informs mihir to handle all meetings and he leaves from office.

Mi&mi are confused and worried to see raman in this state.but they both couldn't ask him what happened. he asks just aaravs whereabouts.raman goes to foundation and spends his time with children.there ishitha also completely breakdown cancels all her appointments and went to a temple and sits there only upto evening. At evening mihika calls her.

Mihika:hello akka..where r u?

Ishitha:hello mihika..kya baath hai?

Mihika:kuch nahi akka..bas yuhi call kiya..sab kuch teek haina akka.aap aur jeeju ke beech..

Ishitha:kyon?kyon aise pooch rayithi?

Mihika:kuch nahi akka..jeeju aaj subah hi office se bahar chaligayi.aur abhi tak kisi se baath nahi kiya..isiliye poochrayithi.

Ishitha:kuch nahi mihku..sab kuch teek hai.

Mihika:tho aaj hi mai aarav ko mere saath lekar chalo..

Ishitha:nahi nahi mihku..no need.i will pick him today..bye.both cuts the call.but mihika understands something is happened between them.

Ishitha comes to aaravs school and raman also comes to pick aarav.they both sees eachother.aarav looks them and comes to meet them.

Precap: mission ishra get closure..

Sorry for sad update.that'sway I am thinking about to post it or not..whatever it has to post na..

Next part will update today only..i can't see ishra in this position.and don't think bad about shagun.she is also very good in this story..add your comments..

Thankyou all...

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