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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww!!!!!! nice !!!!" Beautifully written!!!!!! Add some IshRa romance!"!!! do write more!! great job! waiting fr ur nice update. Thanks fr nice update ...
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Wow wow wow superb part plsss continue soon
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very much intrstng...
i lik aarav day by day...he nd his antics...
ishra are mendng in their reltnshp...
cant wait fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello friends..

Here is the next part..

Part 26:

Nextday morning:

Iyer family and aarav sits in the hall after the breakfast.and here ishra and mihir sitting in their bedroom holding phone on speaker with aarav.

Mihika:appa,amma mai aap se kuch baath karna chahthi hoon.

Appa:bolo beta..

Mihika:aap promise kijiye..mujse gussa nahi hone chahiye..

Amma:teeke..phele bathavo kya hai?

Mihika:i am in love with someone...i want to marry him..

Appa:koun hai vo?

Amma:hamara caste haina..

Aarav:nahi..lekin vo Indian hai..😊

Mihika:aarav..tum chupkar yaar..mai baath kartha hoon..

Amma:mihika..ye kya hai..vo hamara caste nahi hai..😕

Appa:madhu tum ruko..vo baath kar rayithina...

Mihika:appa,amma..vo mera colleague hai.mihir..mihir arora hai vuska naam..aur vo ek panjabhi hai.lekin vo mujse bahuth pyar kartha hai.vo bahuth accha hai appa.i will be very happy with him.😊

They both are silent for some time.

Mihika:appa please aap kuch bathayena..aise silent math ho...

Appa:mihir ka parents jaanthi tum dono ki bare me.vo maan gayi iss shaadi keliye..😕

Mihika:mihir ko parents nahi hai appa.vunka subkuch mere boss hai..

Appa:mihika...tum janthi na mere bare me,I never oppose my childrens decision,but I am afraid beta,agar jaldi me bina soche kuch decision liya tho vuska result tum jidangi bar feel karna padegi..😕

Mihika:she sits before mr.mrs.iyer and holds their hands..appa..mai jantha hoon aapka chintha mere liye..but trust me..mihir bahuth accha hai,vo mujse bahuth pyar kartha hai.and I can assure you,he also be a good son for u..😊

Aarav:ha thatha..mihir chachu is very good and sweet.kithna sweet hai aap janthi bhi nahi..he even praises mihika chitti cooking..😉

Amma:aise hai tho bahuth accha ladka hai..all are laughs...😆

Appa:I want you happy like this always beta..we are agree with your decision..

Mihika:thankyou amma,appa..i love you..😛

Aarav:chitti muje bhool gaya..😳

Mihika:how can I aarav..you are the hero of my story..thankyou so much..🤗

There ishra and mihir also enjoying the moment.

Mihir and raman hugs each other.ishra congrats mihir.and ishitha is double happy for mihika and mihir.mihika is getting married with her favouraite devar..she hugs mihir and wishes him.and also she hugs raman and kisses on his cheek with uncontrol happy.🤗😛

Ishitha:thankyou so much raman..and congartulations..😊

Raman and mihir shocked .😲raman places his palm on his cheek and looks at mihir with embarrass.😳

Ishitha also realizes what she doing a moment back..😳

Mihir:oh..bhai..i am sorry,may be I have to leave now he starts leaving..

Raman:mihir suno..😳

Mihir:nahi bhai..i will talk to you later bye.he disappeared in a fraction of moment from there.

Raman:looks at ishitha with his killer smile.she downs her gaze with shy.😳

Raman:tum dono beheno ka aadat bhi ek jaisa hai madrasan.apne kushi aise express karthe hai..?😉

Ishitha:raman..vo mai.😳

Raman:don't worry ishitha..mai Gandhi ji ka follower hoon..agar tum chahthi ho tho meri dusara side bhi hai..you can express your happy this side also..he shows his other side cheek with a naughty look.😛

Ishitha:sees his cheek having her lipstick mark.points her finger at that..😳

Raman:he goes to mirror and checks his cheek and smiles.he starts erase lipstick with tissue. Waise ishitha agar next time tum ye karna haitho tum muje side pe bulavo,nahi tho sab mere mazak vudayega..😳

Ishitha:comes near to him.muje dosari baar karne se koi problem nahi hai but your beard is hurting me raman...she kisses his another side and runs from there..😳

Raman:I love you ishitha..love u somuch..and I know..you also loves me..bahuth jaldh tum muje ye baath bathavunga..i am waiting for you jaan...😛

He is lost in his thoughts.his mobile rings.this time mihir..😡

Raman:are kya yaar..tum aur mihika ko koi aur kaam nahi hai yaar.sapno me bhi disturb karthi hai.tum dono ka kaam tho hogaya na..ab se hum ko chodo yaar?😡

Mihir:kaha hogaya bhai..mihika ne call kiya..appa ne hum sab ko milna chahtha hai.

Raman:teeke..hum sab kal hi javungi..tum mihika ka bolo..kal evening hum sab hamre guesthouse me miloongi..

Mihir:teeke bhai.mai sab arrangements karoongi.bye.

Raman tells about this to ishitha and says get ready to meet appa.nextday morning ishra and mihir reaches Mumbai.and ishitha is mentally preparing for to face mr.mrs.iyer.at evening iyer family and aarav comes to guesthouse and they all are greet eachother.mihir and raman takes blessings from mr.&mrs.iyer.but ishitha not comes to hall to meet them.aarav comes and hugs raman.they all talking about mi&mi marriage arrangements.finally mr.iyer asks about mrs.bhalla.

Mr.iyer: waise raman ji.aarav ne bola aapki wife bhi aane wali hai,vo aayi nahi.aur maine suna aapdono ka bhi love marriage hai jaise mihika and mihir.

Raman:ha uncle .vo bhi aayi.vo bas aathi hai..raman signals aarav to go and call ishitha.

Aarav immediately runs from there and after 2 mins they both step downs to hall.ishitha tightly holds aarav's hand and step downs,and mr.mrs.iyer looks at ishitha and gets shocked.tears are followed on entire iyer family.mrs.iyer looks at mihika with questioning look.and mr.iyer looks aarav hands holding ishitha which are always holding his at everytime she tenced.he remembers everything their sweet chantings and secret outings...their each and every moments.

Ishitha comes near him and holds his legs.her tears are fell on his feet.aarav holds raman hands.and raman also felt very bad with guilty .

Ishitha:I am sorry appa.mai aapko bahuth dukh diya.i am really sorry appa.aapne muje aapni jaan se jyada pyar kiya lekin mai aap sab ko chodkar chaligayi.lekin appa..

Appa:he gets up her and hugs.mai tuje kabhi nahi isi jagah me nahi deksakthi ishu.tumhara jagah hamesha yeha hai.meri dil me hai ishu.

Ishitha:aap mere saath bahuth gussa haina..

Appa:mai chahkar bhi tumhare saath gussa nahi karoongi ishu.lekin muje sirf ek baath ka gussa hai.tumne har baath mujse share karthi hai jo tum amma ke saath bhi nahi karthe hai,lekin tumne inke vajah se muje chodkar chaligayi..kyo ishu,mai ithna bura kab bangaya tum ek bar bhi tumhara problem mere saath nahi share kiya..kya mai iska bhi laayak nahi hai...

Ishitha confusingly looks at raman.

Ishitha:nahi appa..mai raman ki vajah se...

Raman:ishitha...ek minute..aarav tum andar javo...aarav leaves from there..

Raman:appa..isme ishitha ki koi galthi nahi hai..yeh sab meri vajah se huyi hai..

Ishitha:comes near to him..what are u saying raman?

Raman:he holds her hand and signs her to keep calm.

Raman:appa..maine ishitha ko majbur kiya..ye sab karne ki..jo kuch bhi huva vo sab meri vajah se huva.

Mihika and ishitha confusingly looks at raman.

Raman:aap ko gussa karna hai,lekin kuch saja dena hai..muje dedijiye..par ishitha ko maaf kijiye.please..

Ishitha:raman..aap kyon..

Raman:again signs her to keep quit.

Appa:I know meri ishu kabhi kuch galthi nahi karthi,jo kuch bhi ye kiya..vuska peecha koi kaaran hoga. Meri ishu ko mai hamesha pyar kartha hoon,lekin raman I don't like you .tum mere ishu ko mujse ithne saal door kiya.mai tuje kabhi maaf nahi karoongi..

Ishitha:aise nahi hai appa..

Raman:holds her hand tightly. don't say anything..let it be..

Amma:ishu... hugs ishitha.tum ithne saal hum ko kaise bool gaya.maine pheli bar aarav ki smile dekhe hi tume yaad aarahithi.lekin maine kisi ko nahi bathaya beta.tum teek hoona beta..

Ishitha:mai bahuth kush hoon amma..i am sorry amma..

Raman:thank you appa.aap muje se kaise barthav karna hai keejiye..lekin aap ishitha,aarav, mihika aur mihir ko apna lo..

Appa:meri bacchon ki kushi ke alava muje koi nahi hai.hum mihika aur mihir ki shaadi keliye thabhi manjoor hoon aur abhi bhi..

Raman:thankyou so much appa..he calls aarav to come.aarav comes down and sees appa and amma hugging ishitha with tears.

Mr and mrs.iyer sits with aarav and ishitha and talking with them nonstop,and raman is very happy to see them.after sometime ishitha grabs raman from there to a room.

Ishitha:what is this raman?tumne vaha kya bola?aap kyon aisa bola...

Raman:mai jo kuch bhi kaha vo sab vuski acche keliye bola..vo already tumse door hokar tootgayi hai.agar vunko tumhare saath jo kuch bhi huva ,vo sab sunkar vo sehen nahi karpayega..

Ishitha:lekin mai tumhari vajah se vunko nahi chodthi na..

Raman:but finally tum mere saath hi thina..kya farak padtha hai tum mere liye ya kisi aur keliye ye sab kiya..jo huva..so huva..tum ye sab boolkar tumhare parents ke saath kush raho..

Ishitha:lekin raman..appa tume galath samjthina..

Raman:muje koi farak padtha nahi vo mere bare kya sochenge..muje sirf ye chahiye ki tum aur aarav kush hai..

Ishitha:lekin raman...

Raman:bas karo ishitha..maine kahana..you just be happy with your parents.thats way only I will be happy.and is topic ka discussion abhi katham hai..he holds her hand and they walks to hall.

Raman(st):maine jo kuch bhi kaha..vo sab sach hai ishitha..lekin mai ye sab tume se batha kar phir tumhari aaso nahi deksakthi ishitha..

That night iyer family stays there only and next day mi&mi says they want to do a simple marriage in a temple with only their family members.and all are agrees for that and iyers decides a muhurtham in after 2 days only.ishitha and aarav went and stays with iyers and mihir and raman in their guest house.they both are very busy in these 2 days with marriage preparations.

Raman missed both ishitha and aarav in these 2 days,but could not meet them in iyers house.at finally the maarige day they all reached temple and they completes marriage with all tamil rituals.

Nextday they all are came back to delhi along with iyer family.and ishra arranges a reception party for mi&mi marriage.the party is going very well and mr.mrs.iyer are very happy to see their children are very happy with their partners.mr.iyer also undersatands ramans love and caring behavior for ishitha in all these days.but as a father he never agrees it openly with anyone.

That night ishitha is with mr&mrs.iyer talking with them in their bedroom until late night,because nextday they want to leave to Mumbai back.and there ishra bedroom raman is waiting for ishitha to talk with her.he missed her from long time.aarav comes to meet him.

Aarav:papa..aap abhi tak soyi nahi..

Raman:nahi aarav..neend nahi aa rahi hai.tum bhi abhi tak soyi nahi.

Aarav:bahuth din haina aapse baath kar..muje bhi akeli neend nahi aarahi hai..i missed you papa.

Raman: holds aarav around his shoulders.i missed you beta..

Aarav:mamma..kaha hai?

Raman:aur kaha..vuska appa ke saath hai..vuske saath baath karthi hoga..

Aarav:ha papa..jab se thatha aur paati se mili thina vo mujse bhi acchese baath nahi karthi thi.mamma hum dono ko bhool gaya..😕

Raman:aise kuch nahi hai aarav.bahuth din hogayena vunse milkar,isiliye tumhara mamma ithne saal ka baath ek hi bar baath karthi hoga..😊

Aarav:mai maantha hoon vo bahuth senti hai lekin humare bare me bhi sochna haina..😕

Raman:ab tum mere saath jaise thina vo bhi vuske appa ke saath hai..sirf do din ki baath haina..vuske baad hamare madrasan phir hamare pass hi aana hai..😉

They both talking with eachother for some more time and after slept with eachother. after sometime ishitha came back to room and watches father and son sleeping with eachother.aarav places his hands and legs around on raman,and raman sleeps in half sitting position holding aarav tightly.she immediately changes to her nightwears and sits beside raman and watches him.

Ishitha: raman..I just want to say "thank you" to you for,you are sweet, loving, caring, gentle and understandable.you are there for us always at no time,at any time and at all the time."I love you.i love you somuch raman".she gently kisses on his forehead.😊🤗

Nextday morning raman wakes up first and sees both ishitha and aarav sleeping bothsides to him.the scene before him is like they both are showing their authority with him.he smiles looking his heartbeats.and looks at watch.it's 8am.he gently wakes ishitha.

Raman:ishitha..vutona..😊

ishitha :hmm..raman..🥱

raman:ishitha..amma appa wait karthi hoga..

ishitha:please..kuch aur dher..still closing her eyes.🥱

raman:muje koi problem nahi hai ..lekin amma appa kya sochega,tum ithne dher soyitho..😉

ishitha:kuch hi nahi..waise ek baath bathavo,aap muje miss nahi kari ithne din..😳

raman:sach bathaovu..😳

ishitha:hmm.😕

Raman:mai aur aarav bahuth jealous hai tumhari appa se..😉

Ishitha:vo kya kiya..😕

Raman:vunki vajah se na tum hum dono ko bhoolgayi...😳

Ishitha:ha...vahi haina mere life me aap dono ki phele..😉

Aarav:dekha papa..mamma ne hum dono ko list me last rakha..😕

Ishitha suddenly gets up and sits.raman in shocking position.😲

Ishitha:tum kab vutgayi...😕

Aarav:abhi abhi..

Raman:aur tum sone ki acting kar rayithi...😳

Aarav:thodi bar me mamma phir chalegana vunki appa ke paas..appa..appa..tho isiliye mai aise hi soyi aap dono ki saath..😉

Ishitha:badmash..meri appa ke bare me baath math karo...aarav runs from there.😡

Raman:ab aarav bhi chal gayi..come on...😉

Ishitha:what?mai kuch samji nahi..😕

Raman:tumne kaha thina thodi aur dher mere baho me sona hai..aavo..😳

Ishitha:aapka beta ne beech me aagayi ab time katham hogayi. ye lo yahi ishitha samjo..she gives a pillow to him and gets up from bed immediately.😳

Raman:ye tum ho?😲

Ishitha:ha..ab so jaov iske saath..😳

Raman:tho mai iske saath jo kartha hai.. vo tume karna hai.. 😳

Ishitha:ha..ha..she went to bathroom with her clothes.

Raman(st):ab deko madrasan mai kya kartha hoon..😉

Ishitha backs to room after 20 mins wearing a blue saree with silver border line.her dry hair folded with a towel.she goes to dressing table and sits before mirror.she is wearing her neck chain,ear rings and sindoor on forehead .😳

Raman:ishitha..isko sach me tum samjo..mathlab mai iska saath kuch bhi karsakthi hoon..😳

Ishitha:ha..maine ek bar kahana..whatever you want you can do.😊

Raman:teeke thankyou..he hugs pillow tightly.and kisses pillow.looks at ishitha..

Ishitha:raman...aap..

Raman:tum ithna kubsoorat kaise hai ishitha..tumhara eyes,tumhara nose,cheeks,aur ye lips...mai aaj tume chodna nahi chahtha hoon..he continually kisses pillow.😳😉

Ishitha:chee raman..aap kithana besharam ho..she grabs the pillow from him.😲

Raman:oye..tumhi tho kaha ye tum ho..😳

Ishitha:mai aap ko gentlemen samja..lekin aap kisi aur nikili..javo...jakar ready hojayiye..amma,appa wait karthi hoga hamare liye..😊

Raman:this is not fair ishitha..you are cheating...

Ishitha:raman..please jayiye..hum iske bare me baad me baath karoongi..

Raman:pakka..promise..

Ishitha:promise...he kisses her on cheek and immediately leaves to bathroom.😳

Ishitha(st):promise raman..bahuth jaldi aapki ishitha aapke baho me hamesha hoga..☺️

They all reaches airport to send of mr.mrs.iyer.they both are very happy mihika and ishitha are settled with their lifes.mr.iyer blesses mi&mi,ishitha and aarav.ishitha feels very bad thinking because of her only appa don't likes raman.

Ishitha:appa..aap raman se baath karlijiyena.vo bahuth accha hai.raman aapko bahuth respect kartha hai.i am very happy with him appa..please mere liye...

Mr.iyer: he goes near to raman.i know..aap bahuth accha hai aur aap ishu ko kush raktha hai.phir bhi mai aapko nahi maaf karungi.please take care of my ishu.

He leaves from there kissing ishitha and aarav.

After they leaving ishra and aarav reaches home.suddenly he gets a call .

Raman:hello...where r u now?...ab achanak?...i am coming...wait..

He leaves from there immediately.

Ishitha:raman..what happened?

Raman:I will be back soon ishitha..it's urgent.he dissappered with in seconds..

Ishitha(st):kya hoga acchanak?mai aap se baath karna hai raman...I am waiting raman.. 😳


how is it friends..

sorry i will complete this ff with 3 or 4 parts.

next part will be very soon..and please add your coments..

thankyou all..

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Posted: 10 years ago
its awesummm.. loved ittt!! aarav is sooo funny guy!! and with mi-mi double fun!
cont soon! cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Aarav is enjoying with his Thatha n Patti. Good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...
wow...ishra in embrce...so romntic...
cant wait wht ishu wants to talk nd the truth of ishra reltnshp...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb yaar hope ishra confess their love soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update 👏
will be waiting for next part 👍🏼
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a superb update...
Very beautiful story..👏👏
Please dont end the story so soon..
We want more ishra scenes in coming updates..😊😊

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