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Posted: 10 years ago
I like it very much, Plz update sooon!
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Hello friends,sorry for late update

Here the nextpart,excuses if any mistakes.

Part16:

They all are reached home.raman and mihir leaves after some time of chating.mihka decides to stay with megha,because from past 3 days ishitha is with her,she didn't spend with aarav alone from so many days.mihika and megha sleeps in ishitha room.aarav and ishitha sleeps in aarav's room.they both are in bed,while ishitha tries to sleep.aarav is thinking kar mom's words.

Aarav:mamma,are you sleeping?

Ishitha:no beta,kuch chahiye kya?

Aarav:nahi mamma,mai aapse kuch poochu?

Ishitha:ofcourse beta,

Both sits together.

Aarav:par aap senti math hone chahiye,aur muje dantna math..

Ishitha:teeke mai nahi dantoongi,promise..

Aarav:mamma aapne kabhi nahi mihika chitti ke bare me nahi bola,aur aap ka mamma aur papa ke bare me bhi nahi,kyon?

Ishitha:kyon?aachank aise kyon poochrayithi?

Aarav:kuch nahi,aap chitti ke aane ke baad bahuth happy thi,aur vusse bahuth enjoy karthi thi.aap ka parents saath bhi bahuth enjoy karthi na?

Ishitha:ha,mihika chitti is my best friend,jab hum dono chote thina,tab mai chitti ke liye bahuth protective tha school me.

Aarav:aur paati,aur taataa kaise hai tumhare saath,vo aapse pyar karthe hai na?

Ishitha:kyon nahi,mai tumse jaise pyar karthi haina,vo bhi mujse bahuth pyar karthi thi.lekin mai mere aapa se bahuth close hai.he is always my hero.i share everything to him even about my college secrets and gossips.chitti is very close to paati.

Aarav:aise kyon?

Ishitha:kyon ki most of the elder children very close to father and younger one to mother.and one more reason bhi hai,mai aur mere aapa have so many common things.we both had same likes and dislikes.chiiti always lazy in childhood days.aapa treats me like his elder son.he spends more time with me more than chitti and paati.

Aarav:chtti aur paati kuch nahi kehrayithi?

Ishitha laughs heartfully remembering her child days with her father.

Ishitha:har roj fighting appa,ishu vs amma,mihika.

Ishitha:you know what?amma,appa ka marriage love marriage hai,vo bachpan se friends hai.amma bachpan se appa se pyar karrayithi.par aapa vuse just friend ki tharah treat karrayithi.sab log janthe hai amma vusse pyar karrayithi.aapa bhi janthi hai.lekin kabhi nahi vo nahi poocha paati se directly.paati ka shaadi kisi aur se fix huyi.lekin paati ne vus shadi break kiya taatta keliye.ek din vusne directly poocha taataa se shadi karne ki. he didn't love her at that time, phir bhi he agreed to marry.shadi ke baad bhi vo kabhi nahi confess kiya paati ko.jab se mai paida huyi na appa mere saath bahuth pyar karrayi thi,vo har roj muje I love you boltha hai sone ki pehle.lekin paaati aur chiiti ko nahi.vo muje apni maa ki tharah treat kar rayithi.

Paati always fighting about this."aap sirf aapki ishu se pyar karthi,mujse nahi,isiliya muje kabhi nahi bola,mai tho pagal hoon,isiliye aapse shadi kiya".lekin mere appa bahuth sweet hai,vo sabse pyar kartha hai,specially amma se,mai aur appa roj bahuth time spend karthi thi lekin most of the time we talks about amma and mihika only.ek din maine poocha appa se "why don't you confess amma".vusne kaha "sirf bolne se pyar nahi hothi,vo hamesha mere dil me hai,har bath bolne ki jaroori nahi hai, muje show off karne ki jaroori nahi hai".

Mere birthday ka first wish vo kehrayithi, aur vuska first wish mai.agar muje kuch hogaya tho sirf vo mere paas hothi,muje ek bar right hand fracture hogayi,vus time appa ne pura ek month mere saath thi,muje har kaam karrayithi,muje breash karryithi,muje kana kilayi thi,muje school lekar gayithi, har roj lunch time mere saath karryithi, mere homework,sub kuch vahi karrayithi.tum aur mai jaise raath ko icecream kane ko bahar jaathi na ,vaise hi mai aur appa bhi jaathi thi,lekin this is secret between me and appa,koi nahi jaanthe iske bare me,chitti bhi..

mere appa best hai,he loves me so much.par maine kya kiya vuske saath...?tears following on her cheeks.

Aarav:aap ne promise kiya, senti math hone ki?

Ishitha:wipes her tears.sirf mere appa nahi,har papas aise hi hothe hai,vus baccho keliye kuch bhi karthe hai.vus family ko protect kartha hai.

Ishitha:teeke,ab so jaov,bahuth late hogayi.

Nextday:

Raman has high fever because of water problem.he was playing with aarav in all water rides and swimming also.he didn't go to office and took rest in home . he informs mihir and mihika he has some headace,that'sway he couldn't come to office.at night mihika informs this about ishitha and aarav.

Nextday morning ishitha and aarav comes to raman's home to meet him.raman was in his room sleeping.worker informs them to meet him in bedroom.they both enters room.

Aarav:hi friend how r u?

Raman:he gets up from bed and sits.

Aarav comes and hugs raman.he feels his body is very hot.

Aarav:chitti ne bathaya tumhara tabbith teek nahi hai,lekin tumko bahuth fever hai.

Ishitha:comes near raman and places his palm on his forehead.ha bahuth pukar hai.tumne doctor ke paas gaya na?

Raman:nahi,lekin maine medicine liya.

Ishitha:aise kaise raman,you are not a doctor .

Raman:it is just normal fever.koi doctor ke jaroorat nahi hai.mai janthi hoon kya medicine lena hai.

Ishitha:tumhara halath dekthi hi muje samaj gayi,tume kya kya bathaya?aarav beta tum jakar mere medical kit lekar aavona car se!

Aarav:teeke mamma.he leaves from there.

Raman:tum har place tumhara kit lekar jaathi hai kya?

Ishitha:ha,kisi jaroor hothi tho!jaise tum apna laptop lekar jaathi na,waise mai bhi.

Aarav came back with kit and opens it.raman was very tensed seeing injections.

Raman:ishitha,tum sirf baccho ka doctor haina,bado ka nahi.

Ishitha:she checks his pulse and temperature,ha mai maanthi hoon,mai sirf baccho ka doctor hoon,lekin tum bhi baccho ki tarah behave karrayithi, isiliye?raman you are too weak aur dekho temperature kithna hai,koi aise laparwayi hothe hai kya?she takes injection and prepares with medicine.

Raman:nahi ishitha,tum koi bi medine li,mai letha hoon,lekin injection nahi!

Ishitha and aarav surprised with his tension face.

Ishitha:what raman!this is fastly works than tablets.

Raman:nahi ishitha,mai ne kahana,no injection.isiliye maine doctor ke pass nahi gaya aur kisi ko nahi bathaya muje fever hai.

Ishitha and aarav laughing.

Ishitha:raman,ye bacchon ka injection hai,kuch pain nahi hoga,vaise ceo sir ko ek injection se darr hai!

Raman:injection ko kya jaantha hai,yeh bacche hai ya ceo.i know it's paining.

She tries to divert his mind.

Ishitha:fever hone ki vajah se dimak nahi kaam karthi .deko tum kya kya bolrayithi?

Raman:aisa kuch nahi hai,I am perfect.

Ishitha:tho ek test hai,mai tuje injection nahi doongi,sirf tablets and sirup .just close your eyes.

He closes his eyes.

Ishitha:ab bthaov mai aur aarav aaj kya color dresses pehna ?

Raman:thinks about their dresses and reminds everything aarav hugs him and ishitha touches him."hhmm...aaj aarav ne white shirt and blue jean,and you are blue dress with light orange dupatta."

Ishitha:nahi raman "thoda aur sochlo".she already injects him.

Raman:nahi,vahi correct hai. He opens his eyes."look,I am perfect,ab sirf tablets dho"

Ishitha:maine already diya.

Raman:kab?

Ishitha:jab tum aanke band karthina tab,tumhare haath mey,tumhe jaanthe bhi nahi.

Raman checks his hand and feels something happened.

Aarav:dekha friend,mamma kisi ko bhi jadoo karthi hai,vuske clinic me bhi aise hi kuch na kuch bolke vuske inject karthi hai.

Raman:(impressed).ha aarav tumhara mamma jadoo karthi hai,kisi ko bhi paatathi hai.

Ishitha:places some medicines in table and tells how to take it.raman time pe medicine lena,nahi tho night bhi ek aur injection...

Raman:nahi nahi,mai leloonga..

Ishitha:deko,ek injection se kaisa accha baccha bangaya!

Aarav:mamma mai aaj friend ke saath rahoon?tum muje evening pick kar lo!

Ishitha:teeke,take care of him.i will come evening.

Aarav informs worker to prepare idlies only for lunch,because raman should take light food

Because of injection raman's temperature downs slightly.they both plays video games for some time.they both plays chess also.raman was very intelligent in playing chess.they are playing 3rd round.first 2 rounds raman won the game.

Aarav:friend mai aapse kuch poochu?

Raman:I know,iss bar tum mera dimag divert karne keliye naa,tumhari mamma ki tarah?maa beta ek jaise hai na..

Aarav:aisa nahi,just causal.teeke mai nahi poochungi!

Raman:nahi nahi,mai tumko kabhi mana karoongi kya?

Aarav:aap ne kisi se pyar nahi kiya aabhi tak?

Raman:suddenly changes his sitting position,what?kya poocha tumne?

Aarav:fever ki vajah se aap ka sunne ki problem hogaya kya?maine poocha aap ne kisi se pyar kiya?

Raman(st):raman beta,tumhari beta too smart hai,sochke jawwab dena,

Raman:kiya,lekin one side,she treats me as a friend only.

Aarav(st):bilkul mere jaise.

Aarav:then why didn't you propose her?any problem?mai help karoo?

Raman(st):raman ,how pity you are,ab tumhara beta sikyenge kaise propose karoo!

Raman:nahi aarav,mere problem tum nahi samjithi,chodo iss bath ka.

Raman diverts his mind,saying he is very hungry.they both went to dining table.worker gets the items.

When aarav starts eating raman grabs aarav's plate and places pastha infront of him.

Raman:fever muje hai,tum kyo idlies kavungi,you don't like idlies na..

Aarav:par tum tho yahi kana hai na,isiliye mai bhi...

Raman:mere liye tum kyo?this is not fair.isliye mai ne specially tumhare liye order kiya.have it.

Aarav:thankyou friend,you are always best.he kisses raman's hand.

They both did their lunch and raman takes his medicine.they both sit together in bed and aarav plays games in raman's laptop.because of medicines raman feels dizzy and sleeps.aarav places raman in sleeping position and he again plays the game.after some time he feels bore and watches all his photos with megha,ishitha and raman.he sees some folders are secured with passwords.

Aarav:friend ne iss folder ko kyon lock kiya.?lagtha hai iska girlfriend ka photos hoga,vusne muje bathya bhi nahi vuske bare me,mai abi dekke vuske help kardoongi.

He uses his talent to open lock with different passwords,first one raman,not works.

Aarav:mihir uncle bahuth close hai,he types mihir,not works.mihir uncle ke baad koun hoga?mai bhi close hoona!he tries aaravraman.it opens.i know my friend loves me so much.

He opens one by one.starting some photos are raman with aarav.vuske baath sab ishitha with raman which are captured in megha's birthday and some other photos.

Aarav:I know, friend likes me and mamma,then why he locks this folder?there are so many photos of us,but why he specially lock this folder.he once again watches all photos .he identifies normal photos which are with all members with aarav with ishra and some individuals.but this special folder has only ishra together.

Aarav:kyon friend aise kiya,I have to know the reason.he changes the password to meghaarav.

After some time raman wakes up and aarav is in bathroom.he takes his laptop and checks mails.and he opens that folder.but it doesn't open.he tries one more time.he gets irritated.

Raman:what happened?wrong password kaise?

Aarav cameback to room and watches raman tries to open the folder.

Aarav:friend,tum vutgayi?

Raman:ha aarav abhi,his face only on laptop.

Aarav:kya huva?tum kyon tension hai,phir bhi fever?he walks towards him.

Raman:kuch nahi aarav,I am fine.kuch important files hai,maine password boolgaya!he tries so many times with different names also,but doesn't works.he is geeting more irritated with headace.

Aarav:tum bahuth tag gayi thina,isiliye boolgaya haoga,phele tum fresh up hoke aaov,aur phir try karno,nahi tho mamma tume is halath me dekkar second dose lagyegi.

Raman:this time raman gets tensed hearing second dose.he places laptop besides him and walks to washroom.

When raman went to WR he again changes the password to aaravraman. And carefully places in original position.he leaves to kitchen to take juice for raman.

Raman came back to room and again tries to open.but this time it opens.

Raman:how it happens?maine phele ithne bar try kiya,par thab open nahi huva par ab kaise!he opens all photos and watches one by one.he is smiling automatically.

Aarav comes with a tray of juice glasses and watches raman smiling watches laptop.

Raman immediately closes the laptop.

Aarav:kya huva friend?you are laughing?

Raman:kuch nahi,vo file open huyi isiliye,lekin kaise,phele mai try kia,tab nahi,later I again used the same one,but this time it opened.

Aarav:tum abi vutgayina,may be you are feeling dizzy.thatsway you put wrongtype.

Raman felt confused again.

Aarav:teeke,ab ye juice peelo.he hands one glass to raman and takes another.

Raman:aarav, tume ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai?

Aarav:ab mai iss position me huyi tho aap bhi karthna,isiliye.Btw tumne kuch nahi bola,tumhari love ke bare me?

Raman:phir shuru kiya?

Aarav:tum ek bar vuse bathake deklona?

Raman:sirf bolne se pyar nahi hothi yaar,vo hamesha mere dil me hai.

Aarav:teeke,ek bath bathav?vo kaise dikthe hai?

Raman:bilkul tumhari tarah sweet dikthi hai.he cuts the conversation and carries aarav into shoulders and walks to hall.

Raman:I am feeling bore in home,shall we go out for some time?he walks to car without any response from aarav.

How is it friends?

Please do your comments...

Thankyou all...

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow... dis is sooo awesome... day by day d story is bcoming very interesting yaar... ishitha n aarav conversation about her childhood was sooo good... n raman was sooo funny in the injection scene... i love aarav... seriously raman has to be careful... sacch mein uska beta bahut smart hai yaar... sambalkar rehana raman... i hope aarav ll pester raman to tell about his lover... plsss update soon... plss pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
so aarav got to know that raman is hiding someyhimg abt his love
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow yar...awesom updte...
the stry is progrsng gr8...
i lik the way ishu xplaind aarav tht eldrs r close to dad nd youngr r close to mom...
nd pyar kiya confess karna ki jarurath nahi hain...kyon ki vo humesha dil mein rehta hain...tht was awesom line...
aarav changes the password to meghaarav...tht was rofl..i laughd lik anythng...criously raman nd aarav r cute fathr nd son pair...
cant wait raman propses his love to ishu...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update! 👍🏼 can't wait for next part.😊
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update..👏👏
Aarav is very smart..
Waiting to see when will Ishita and Aarav come to know about Raman...
Superb update...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice. Papa beta friendship is growing stronger, better.I think Aarav will help Raman to confess his love for his mom Ishita. Now he knew that Raman's love is her Mom.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww loving the bond of Aarav n Raman n Aarav too smart hmmm plss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Loved d way ishita was saying abt her past
Raman n Arav part was too cute
Edited by swathin - 10 years ago

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