'who r u' updated part 30&31 on pg43&44(completed) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Loved d last part
Waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...i expected this confession when i started reading the update and ha ha my instinct got right...pls updatd yhe next part soon...wanna lnow oshu answer...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww Raman confessed his love great all thanks to Aarav too cute hope Ishita says yes n plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar is dis the time to start... very eager to kno about ishu's reaction n wats dis he didnt say the full truth... just hope he says it soon... wen i was reading itself i thought dis ll happen.. awww soo happy n his confession was sooo cute... sach mein aarav bahut smart nikla yaar... haha... plsss update the nxt part soon yaar... plsss cont soon... if possible update today itself yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yar pls update the next part u r simply super just to say this i created account in this site.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... So sincere confession. Loved it... Waiting for Ishita's reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
GREAT!👏👏 Love the proposal, so excited about Ishu's response. Wish that Raman had told truth but I am also glad he told his feelings... Please update soon.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very Nice. Finally Raman confessed his love to her. Thanks to Aarav for the timely help.I'm curious to know about her answer.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update...👏👏
Waiting for ishita's reply...
Awesome...👏👏
Update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello friends ,sorry for late update,

Here is the nextpart,excuses if any mistakes..

Part18:

Raman:still holds her hands.she is still confused what happened upto now.

Raman:bolo ishitha,tum mujse pyar karthi ho?

Ishitha:raman,I understand your feelings,but this is not love.phele bar tum muje dekha vo love hosaktha hoga,par ab nahi,maine tume mere bare me sab kuch bathaya na,tumko mere bare me sympathy hoga,this is pity on me.not love raman..

Raman irritated with her words.

Raman:he holds her hands tightly.what sympathy..?no ishitha, I love you very much.tum ko meri aanko me tumhare liye sympathy dikthi kya?vus din tumhi kehthi na mere love sacchi hai,isiliye mere pyar muje doobara milgaya,hai na?

She is more confused now hearing her words to herself.

Ishitha:raman I need some time to think about this..

Raman:teeke ishitha,whatever your answer ,I am waiting for you.

They both are leaves to their rooms.that night was very long for raman in his entire life.

Ishitha sits in her bed and thinking about raman and aarav words.after some time aarav comes to room and sees his mother was in deep toughts.she is not observing him until he sits near her and places his head on her lap.she comes to senses.

Aarav:I am sorry mamma.maine tume bahuth upset kiya hogana?

Ishitha:no beta,it's ok.

Aarav:tho bathov mamma,maine jo manga vo muje milege na?

Ishitha:aarav beta,this is not right!you don't understand my problem.

Aarav: no mamma,mai bahuth socha,iske bare me,friend bahuth accha hai,vo aapko aur muje bahuth pyar kartha hai.jo aapne thatta ke bare me kahana vo aapse bahuth pyar kartha,aur kyal karthi aapke family keliye,jaise hi friend bhi.vo muje aur aapko bahuth kyal karthi,jab mai friend ke saath hothi na muje koi problem nahi hothi,muje aapke saath jo mehsoos hothi na,vahi mehsoos friend ke saath hothi.he knows everything about me and you,he knows how to make happy us.vo mere liye bahuth achha papa hai maa.please mamma,manlo mere liye..

Ishitha:teeke bta,mai sochithi hoon iske bare me, tum ab sojaov...

Aarav sleeps in her lap at same position.and ishitha thinking about aarav words again.she is not sleeping entire night remembering everything in her entire life,how her love breaks with subbu,about her parents and aaravs birth.how she was very happy with her father,aarav also very close with raman.ithne saalo se aarav ne kis pyar keliye chaha,vo sab kuch raman ne diya..

Nextday morning:

Ishitha and aarav come together to meet raman.ishitha wearing a saree which is gifted by raman at yesterday aarav's birthday.she is looking gorgeous in that blue colour saree,looks like that is made only for her.

Raman(st): mesmerized with her beauty.you know ishitha,mai jabbhi tume dekthi na,mai ek aur bar tumhare pyar me ko jaathi hoon.but I want this feeling for rest of my life.they both coming close to him,and his heartbeat was becoming more.he was waiting for her reply, he didn't feel like this tensed way even in his any final exams or any work project also.

The three greet eachother.

Ishitha:raman,mai tumse kuch bath karna chahtha hoon.

Raman:teeke ishitha,kya bath hai?

Ishitha:raman,mai pure tamil Brahmin hoon.

Raman:mai bhi pure punjabhi hoon.

Ishitha:muje non-veg banana nahi aatha hai..

Raman:muje bhi nahi aatha,isiliye mere ghar me cook hai.

Ishitha:muje gussa jaldi aatha hai.

Raman:muje tanda karna aatha hai.i know all about these things.but why you are saying all these to me?

Ishitha:don't you understand?

Raman:nahi,mai kuch nahi samji..

Aarav:are buddu friend...mamma ne shadhi keliye ha kardiya..

Raman:matlab,ishitha you also love me?

Ishitha:aarav,tum jakar friends ke saath kelo,mai raman se kuch baath karna hai.

Aarav leaves from there with a winning smile at raman.

Raman:tell me ishitha,you love me?

Ishitha:raman,I like you very much,but I didn't love you upto know.i don't say that I never love you.but I need some time to feel your love.i don't have any problem to maary you.but truly want to say,now this time I want to marry you just because of aarav's sake.he needs your love raman.he needs a father love.

Raman is very happy for she agrees to Marry him.at the same time he feels very upset,because she doesn't have any feelings about him.

Raman(st):don't worry raman,she said she didn't love you,but she will love you.this time you just think about your son.he needs you.you should make him happy.automatically she also loves you.think, this is a arranged marriage,who don't love eachother before marriage.let's wait ishitha,I will make you to fall for me.tab tak mai tume chodungi bhi nahi.

He smiles at himself.he is in his thoughts.

Ishitha:raman...raman...are you understand what I am mean?

Raman:teeke ishitha,I will wait for you at that moment,

Ishitha:raman.you know all about my past and present.i don't want any secrets between us.ab tak tumne chupaya,vo sab teek hai,lekin please ab se mujse kuch chupana math.

Raman:I am sorry ishitha,tumne tumhare bare sab kuch bathaya lekin mere life me ek aur baath hai,aur mai vo kisi ke saath nahi share kar sakthi,please try to understand. Except that I never hide anything from you.

Ishitha:teeke raman,jab tume mann kare tho tabhi bathaov.

Raman(st):thankyou ishitha muje samjne keliye.agar tume sach batha diyatho tum jaroor muje chodkar javungi.everything is fair in love and war.tumhare pyar pane keliye,tume jeethne keliye mai ye chupna chahiye.kuch na kuch din ye bath tumhare saamne jarror aavunga,tab tak mai tume kush karna chahtha hoon.

Ishitha:when you want to marry me,I am ready raman..

Raman:aise tho,if you don't have any problem,shall we marry today itself?

Ishitha:what?aaj?

Raman:infact abhi...

Ishitha:itne jaldhi kya hai?don't you talk with your parents?

Raman:mere liye tumhari ha' hi kafi hai,kisi aur permission ki jaroorath nahi.

Ishitha:lekin aaj kyon?aachanak.

Raman :tumne kaha thina,ye place tumhare liye important hai,ab se mere bhi kyon ki mere pyar bhi yahi milgayana..(st)mai ek pal bhi waste karna chahthi hoon tum dono ki saath.

Ishitha:raman yaha koi temple bhi nahi ahi.

Raman:tum ha' kari tho mai sab kuch arrange karoongi.

Ishitha:teeke,tum jo karna chahthi ho vo karo,I am ready.

Raman calls someone and arranges all things in within 2hours.

After 2 hours that man came with marriage outfits and someother things.raman gives the dresses to ishitha and aarav.

The three get ready for marriage.ishitha wears marriage white long frock and raman and aarav wears blacksuits.they both stand bothsides to her in the church.

Father asks them,if they are ok or not.they both says "I do".raman slips ring on her finger.and after ishitha does the same.

Raman bends and sits befor aarav.

Raman:aarav,are you happy?

Aarav:thankyou somuch,"I love you papa."😛

Raman:what..come again..

Aarav:I love you somuch papa..he kisses raman.

Raman: love you too beta..he tightly hugs aarav and kisses him. A silent tear slid down on his cheek..

Ishitha(st):watches them silently.thankyou raman,tumhari vajah se aarav ithne kush hai.and I am sorry raman.mai tumhare feelings ko hurt kiya hoga..but I promise you,mai tume kush karne keliye jo karna hai,vo sab kuch kardoongi...😊

Raman(st):mai tumhare mooh se is word ke liye kithne wait kiya.."mai papa..."😊😭

Aarav:lekin friend,mai ne films me dekha,shadi ke baad bride groom ko kiss karthi na..

Ishra shocked and looked at eachother.ishitha feels embarssesd and downs her gaze.😳

Raman:naughtly winks at ishitha..ha aarav,vo tho hai,lekin tumhara mamma ko ye possible nahi hai.she can't do this.mai hi kuch karoongi.he slowly walks to her.she is hell shocked with his words.

Ishitha(st):what is this raman?what r u trying to do?

Raman:stood before her.may i?

Ishitha:hmm...she nods silently...closes her eyes.😲

Raman:moves a step close to her and slowly takes her hand and kisses there.

Ishitha slowly opens the eyes and watches them confusingly.😳

Aarav and raman comes bothsides of her they walks to exitdoor.raman offers hand to hold him.she holds and looks into his eyes ...

Raman:slowly murmurs disappoint kiya kya?

Ishitha:what?

Raman:vahi..kiss..you want it on..

Ishitha:no no...😳

Raman:whatever...phir kabhi try kardoongi.lekin next time nahi disappoint nahi karoongi!

She tightly holds aaravs hand looks down to aarav.

Raman:watches her body language and smiles..."welcome to my love life ishitha."

How is it friends...please add your comments...

Next part will be soon...

Thankyou all...😊

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