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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awesome :) thanks for the pm

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Very beautiflly written. 😊

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

so beautiful...

i wonder will ishra ever talk to each other like this...

this was so nice...all the emotions were apt..:)

loved it!!!

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Pooja2311

@Pooja2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Beautiful OS. A cliche one though--Ishita's always being the voice of reason.

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

This was beautiful. I liked how you covered and explained both Raman and Ishita's point of view. I feel like right now, both of them are at fault but both of them are justified as well which is exactly what you showed in your OS. I really hope we get a mature conversation between IshRa soon because the present track is getting a little childish now. I expected more from YHM!

Edited by ABBY92 - 10 years ago

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Oishi Dasgupta

@Oishi_S

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Loved it Aani.
Good to see you writing again, was missing your fics. 🤗

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Hey Aani

Wonderful OS...

I was easily able to imagine the whole scene unfolding in front of me. It was that descriptively written 👏

I read this twice, because some lines just touched the right nerves emotionally!

I like the way you described the anguish she went through, and a reminder of the similar anguish he went through with the accident prank and the hospital scenes!

The line I kept reading multiple times was this one... ""It was always meant to be yours; you just had to accept it.""

I would happily watch this scene if they showed it exactly the way you described it in the OS!😊

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Wow...that was a superb os..!! No one can had written it so brilliantly as u did..!!

That was really awsumm...u describe each and every emotion so nicely..!! each and every feeling was clearly visible in ur work..!!

Ishita and Raman's convo...then the way Ishita showed all her anger n him...how much hurt she was...and raman said sorry...they sought ut all their differences and issues..!! u showed everything so well..!! the teaser we get yesterday...u did a right justice with it..!! It fits to the situation perfectly..!! All the feelings ...emotions..pain...anger...hurt...can easily be depicted from it..!

Loved each and every bit of it...!! Wonderfully written..!! Good job..!!

And thanx fr pm..!! do pm me for all ur works..:)

take care