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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Aani

Writers block surely helped in delivering an awesome OS..

And you started with a Castle Line.... Drool fest today for me, Snape and Castle

Ok.. Snapping back to reality😆

Loved every bit of it

and the meaning behind the lines

"It was always meant to be yours; you just had to accept it."

"I realize that now and so don't mind claiming what is mine"

Simply Perfect!!😳 Acceptance will ease their pain to peace..

Ravan and JKR - opening up and communicating well that would solve all issues, wouldn't they?

At least we get to live it by reading your OS.. so thank you🤗

P.S. One pinning scene already made my heart race and gave goosebumps..now you gave me some more..so am back to drooling

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Omg...thats sooobeautifully written Aani...

how i wished we got to see this in YHM

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

SO SORRYY I forgot I had reserved here

First of all Aani a big big hug for this One shot 🤗 Anything you write on IshRa is magical. And this one just surpasses every expectation..

I love it the most for a very important reason.. you've concentrated so much on the most important thing about this couple - communication. Even in the show, they need to communicate, which is the only problem that if solved can resolve any issue between them. And you've worked on that aspect so maturely. I simply love how maturely you've dealt with the entire scenario. Raman's apology. Ishita's outburst, then Ramans outburst. The way they make it up to the other.

Loved their conversation, love the understanding and the way you've added more beauty to their relation by your words.

Wonderful OS 🤗 Sheer brilliance

Edited by -Anku- - 10 years ago

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Remya

@remya1990

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

At last your are back with an OS Aani...that too with a Bang...

wonderful Aani...brilliant.

the emotional turmoil that both the characters went through was wonderful. The Ishita and the Raman here are just Sonali Jaffur's Aani.

You picked up them with the same quotient of anger,sadness,calmness,jealousy,relief ,possessiveness, insecurities, love and concern.

Brilliant brilliant brilliant work Aani...

Frankly speaking you put an end to the emotional eagerness that we are going through after watching SBS. And am really happy for that.

Thank you for this wonderful OS Aani.

Do you know what you amaze me...its your ability to imbibe the character as a whole and present it. The way you made Ishita to the character,the same way you made Raman too Aani. An absolute work of Negative capability.

Brilliant work is too small to say Aani...

Always stay blessed.

Edited by remya1990 - 10 years ago

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I can't tell you how thankful I am that you've found your muse again. Had really missed your stories this past week.

I love this song too. Who wouldn't.

Aani. I have to say, after "A Streetcar...", I was wondering how you'd come back with something remotely as good.

When I read your stories, I find that I linger over and savor every word...I force myself to read slowly so as to make it last as long as possible.

You have a way with words, and your ability to understand & get to the very core of these characters with utmost precision leaves me flummoxed each time.

THANK YOU for this...keep writing.

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I really don't have much words to describe how beautiful it was, Aani! So perfectly wrote that I could visualise each and every thing. The title as rightly said is very very apt!

You kept the characters intact, love how both of their's past and present was put together to make each other understand where they stand now in this relationship.

I liked this line "They work together in silence restoring things to the places they belong to stealing glances of one another" as They did start to work together to clean the mess in their minds and in their relationship.

Edited by .ProperPatola. - 10 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Omg! Awesome and beautiful story! The way u wrote ishra's emotions were just perfect or rather beyond perfect! So matured handled convo!

Loved it. Really wish if if ISHRA share such a beautiful and matured conversation in the serial!

Write more. Im loving ur writing n stories!

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Omg!! YOU ARE SUCH A GIFTED WRITER!!

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

I m so relieved that u r back with an os. I LOVE your stories. Regarding this one..very matured presentation of thr inner turmoil..beautiful is the word for u..
Ps: plz dont go to hibernation again..write soon.. n when u do can u pm me plz...shud I send u a frnd request? Will tht help?